The story has been so sweet so far! I love how lighthearted the story is right now, I look forward to seeing the game develop into another masterpiece of yours!
Could I get some help? I got impaled by a frog and I don't have any previous saves. It's not even letting me restart completely, what should I do? (Im not on mobile)
To be clear the main restart button is not working for you?
The one located up at the top left of the UI directly to the right of the save. On the next update I can include a restart in the Journal if that section is easier to reach.
I've been playing the game its good but the glowing on the "underswap" word its kinda of anoying. Anoying wouldnt be the right word its just .. you know its always glowing so it kinda starts hurting my eyes after a while
I am working on an eye-sensitive third theme right now. I do not know yet if it will be ready when I update this weekend, but it is in in the works. :) The theme will remove all glowy effects and cycles / links will instead be underlined or bolded.
oh dip, another new twine game for more code practice, huh? god, i can only wish for your terrifying motivation, darkpetal... nevertheless!!! i'm a bit sad i won't be able to check this out for a bit considering my work schedule, but still, thanks for all these gems in the UT fandom. you're a doll and with every game you come out with, i'm starting to get real tempted to get my ass in gear and finally write down my own UT au twine game for my own practice haha.
// oh and btw, just as a heads up, tried to check this out for a bit on mobile but it seems a bit incompatible so far considering the layout is a bit blockier by comparison to the other games. it also seems to have a similar lagging issue as some of the others had stated in previous comments.
// not that i expect a whole ass mobile layout on the get go, that's fine if there's none of that. i'll happily boot this up on my laptop. but yeah, i just wanted to get this out just in case so you knew.
hahahaha with people like TehRogue & Jael & Angysthikka & hheisa & DerpyChoCho & so many many other wonderful creators in this fandom it's impossible for me not to feel motivated to contribute.
I hope work goes well for you, and maybe by the time you're available there will be even more content for you. :)
YESSS I hope you do!! If you need any help at all I would be so dang happy to assist.
// x.x I noticed. I can't test mobiles until I publish (twine only exports in testing to desktop moooooode). I think I fixed the lag issue & the layout. The textbox will be amended in the next update (I think the title is too big in mobile so it overshadows the box).
// I will get there! Slowly but surely! :D Thank you for your patience.
that's actually a really sweet beginning! hope to see how the story goes, and that's really interesting features about souls and different options we can get with them :). HOPE TO SEE THE NEW UPTADE WOO
Yes, here I am. Once again. Haha. Thanks for yet another title, be careful to not stretch yourself too thin tho...! Wouldn't want you with burnout of all things. That said, I'm glad you seem to be enthusiastic about trying other Undertale multiverses.
I'm writing this before actually playing it, and I've been wondering... What sort of feedback you might be looking for in your works? For example... If you want to hear about regarding the way the story is progressing, how the setting is presented, or any feedback regarding tone or pacing, or continuity (usually called high-level feedback)... Or if you would prefer mostly comments on scripting bugs (low level).
I realize you are most probably doing these both for fun and so you can develop your skills... Also, it's for the price of 0 for everyone, so I don't want to be overly critic of something someone might be doing as a way to relax and to share fun stories with others.
You see... One of my oldest high-school friends (still my friend to this day in fact) became my friend exactly because he was the one person willing to lay it on thick and seriously criticize some art pieces I did as a hobby back then. He's a writer nowadays haha. It was honestly what I wanted, receiving just praise becomes jarring after awhile and uh... It's like... You can't trust what people say? Like they are on repeat? Or just saying stuff to please you? It's weird. So yeah, I'm wondering where exactly you stand. I would be very happy in offering the same constructive honesty I received back then, if that's something you are looking for.
Otherwise, I'm more than happy to let a hobby just be your way to wind down haha! Just having fun with it is fine too, no judgments. We all need a place to just be ourselves and be free for a little while.
Again, thanks! Don't worry about replying too fast, take your time.
Yes, the fandom keeps me alive. It’s hard not to get inspired when every day I see someone else posting about something new or funny.
Re feedback - While I do this for fun, I do also want to improve. If there is something within my ability to change, then I want to. If you feel comfortable providing that level of feed back I would more than welcome it.
The only critiques I don’t want are suggestions of different choices that would lead to routes I don’t have planned. I want to complete my outline / main story first before I go and add branches.
Yeah, I understand that on a spiritual level. As I mentioned, I make some art stuff so, I totally understand how people trying to make your change course on something you are working on can be a little stressful/take some of the fun out of it... Especially when you are doing a specific piece for yourself just to try an idea or to relax. It's not even a commission or anything, in which case it would be completely fine. I mean, they are paying for it so they should get what they want, and I'm no clairvoyant haha. I'll do my best to be a good critic while letting you do your thing. It'll be an exercise for me too!
Well then, I'll be back eventually with my thoughts. As anything in life, take them with a grain of salt. Thanks for the reply once again!
This game seems great! However, I can't play it properly as there is no way to scroll down (I use a laptop and don't own a mouse so I use the arrow keys or the scrollbar to scroll), this isn't a problem in any of your other games so I don't know why it's a problem in this one. Just thought you should know so that it, hopefully, can be fixed.
you can, in the blue frame that everything is in on the right side use the curser on the tiny scrolbar. you cant realy se it so use the touchpad on your laptop to scrol with your curser. sorry if my explination is bad. hope you understand.
You are SERVING the undertale content, seriously! How do you always do it? I’m so glad to be apart of the updating process because it will be fun to look forward to updates for this game. Sending lots of love your way (ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡.
Hey! I don't usually reply to things because I'm a bit shy, but just wanted to send a message here to show my support for all of your games. It really makes me happy how quick you update and post new games, and they are always so much fun! You are the first person I followed here on itch.io and it always makes my day to receive an email about how you updated a game or posted a new one. Sorry for the long text, keep up the great work!
You doing amazing job on the AU! I'm play your first game and it made me cry it was beautiful! I hope you continue to do the AU for undertale. l have idea for the next game it about X table.
Darkpetal16, you are the absolute best. Thank you for blessing us with all of these wonderful games! I haven’t tried this one yet, but I’ve loved all of the other ones and I’m sure I’ll love this one too. Thank you so much! :)
haha i just put som of gasters text through a translater and its so cute, heheh. im pretty sure without the translation its suposed to be scary idk, but i found it cute, i dont wanna spoil so put it in a translater if you wanna se it. but ahhhhh it was cute atleast i thought it was!
i havent been on itch in a while but you've already popped out TWO NEW GAMES? (dusttale and this) OH MY GOD IM SO EXCITED!!! don't rush yourself to finish though, but its been nice playing your games from the start <3
DARKPETAL16 YOU ARE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE CREATORS ON ITCH.IO DID YOU KNOW THAT? underswap is my favourite AU and i've been feeling like im in the dumps lately :'( so seeing this!!! is so!!! AMAZING! I can't play it rn but once im back home from some errands, im definitely gonna binge this!!!!
YOURE WELCOME! AND HARD AGREE!!! The wingdings are quite interesting as well, I wonder what that 3rd skeleton may bring 👀
No worries, I've gotten out of the dumps now! This game has certainly cheered me up too!
I'm playing in snowdin as I type this. The writing is great as always, and I've certainly enjoyed my time in the crystal caverns. I also like the battle with sans-- I was at first confused on why I couldn't progress further when I surrendered, until I went back and didnt. I really like that part because at the end of the fight, it felt quite deserving! :3
Also I ADORE the way you write sans? like, he's not all sunshine and rainbows!! It's something ive noticed when people interpret him where he's seen as a ball of sweet things (which he is!!!) but he's a KNIGHT (or trains a lot to be one i suppose!), he's DEFINITELY not meant to be all things happy. Love the mix of orange and blue attacks in the battle too, definitely gives a lot more reason to not underestimate him!
OH! also, when surrendering, I got the silly wingdings that said "Thank you for coming"!! I thought that was part of the demo, but now that I've reached the end of snowdin, I wonder if it's not?
that was pretty long but YEAH! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE REST!!
Gosh who knows what that mysterious third skeleton will do. 👀👀
That's so wonderful to hear!! I hope things continue to improve for you.
The Sans fight was a lot of fun to write, I love his music. I'm glad you enjoyed the battle and it felt fun to play through ^^
AHHHH!! YES! I picture him as a knight as well and I'm ecstatic you got that impression from him. He's inclined to be positive, but he's not a child & has a lot of responsibilities to manage. :)
Ahaha it is an ending. Not a good one. But yes you can end the game there.
DAWH THIS IS SO COOL!! asgore's vibes are immaculate, all of your games have been so fun to play! i don't tend to comment on things often but your games are such a comfort- the only thing i will say is that i had a bit of trouble scrolling on this one lol. But regardless i'm looking forward to the next chapter update in may! >:)
The effects in this game are awe-inspiring- you’ve grown so much with your abilities using twine since you started making these games, and seeing how far you’ve come is oddly heartwarming! ^^
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I literally screamed when I saw this. Waiting for the next chapter!! ^^
>:D
ALL YOUR GAMES ARE SO COOL :DDD
<3333333 THANK YOU!!
YOUR WELCOME!!!!!!
i love this game! So is chapter 2 coming out this weekend if so which weekend? also ASGORE IS JUST GDYGYUGYUGYUGYUG BEBE
thiiiiiiiiiiiiis weekend. tomorrow or the next day.
I HOPE THIS GETS UPDATED SOOONNNN -devil
Thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis weekend!
idk whichever day I finish editing lol
ALRIGHT, IM BREAKING UP WITH MY BOYFRIEND, THE SKELETON CUTIES ARE NOW MY OFFICIAL BOYFRIENDS!
F in the chat for the BF.
But like. . . can't blame you. :P May you enjoy your skelly boy routes!
The story has been so sweet so far! I love how lighthearted the story is right now, I look forward to seeing the game develop into another masterpiece of yours!
US is definitely a sweet game and this a sweet game where you can 100% trust the voice in the static. :)
Could I get some help? I got impaled by a frog and I don't have any previous saves. It's not even letting me restart completely, what should I do? (Im not on mobile)
Hi!
To be clear the main restart button is not working for you?
The one located up at the top left of the UI directly to the right of the save. On the next update I can include a restart in the Journal if that section is easier to reach.
yeah, I don’t see a restart or save at all.
Restart & Save links are in the Journal link at the bottom of the screen. If the top UI doesn't work for you, those should do the trick. :)
I've been playing the game its good but the glowing on the "underswap" word its kinda of anoying. Anoying wouldnt be the right word its just .. you know its always glowing so it kinda starts hurting my eyes after a while
Can you do something about that?Please?
Sorry you think it's annoying.
I am working on an eye-sensitive third theme right now. I do not know yet if it will be ready when I update this weekend, but it is in in the works. :) The theme will remove all glowy effects and cycles / links will instead be underlined or bolded.
Hey! I just did an update where the header will be hidden until you hover over it, so hopefully this will be easier for your eyes. :)
Thank you
whenever i press to change the colour the bar just apears :/
maybe its because of my fat finger ._.
In the next update I'll move the passages down a bit so it'll be easier to click on top cycles.
I cant play on mobile :(
i dont know its all lagy and i cant imput my name
I can‘t play on mobile too,but atleast i can play on my I-Pad :)
Okay, I have just now done another update to the game that should fix the lag & let you click on the textbox on mobile. :)
Thank you very much 😊
Is there a genocide route?
Maybe if we chose to be yandere 🤔
nnnnnnnnot right now.
Well i understand
you are saying "not right now"so does tha mean it will have ?
Also take care of yourself you are doing a lot of fan games and constant updates, dont forget to take care of your health
Ps: sorry if theres some grammatical mistakes my english is not the best
Maybe? I don't plan on it, but who knows in the future once I have finished what I have planned.
Thank you for your concern. :) Appreciate you playing & commenting on my game.
Your English is perfectly fine!!
oh dip, another new twine game for more code practice, huh? god, i can only wish for your terrifying motivation, darkpetal... nevertheless!!! i'm a bit sad i won't be able to check this out for a bit considering my work schedule, but still, thanks for all these gems in the UT fandom. you're a doll and with every game you come out with, i'm starting to get real tempted to get my ass in gear and finally write down my own UT au twine game for my own practice haha.
// oh and btw, just as a heads up, tried to check this out for a bit on mobile but it seems a bit incompatible so far considering the layout is a bit blockier by comparison to the other games. it also seems to have a similar lagging issue as some of the others had stated in previous comments.
// not that i expect a whole ass mobile layout on the get go, that's fine if there's none of that. i'll happily boot this up on my laptop. but yeah, i just wanted to get this out just in case so you knew.
hahahaha with people like TehRogue & Jael & Angysthikka & hheisa & DerpyChoCho & so many many other wonderful creators in this fandom it's impossible for me not to feel motivated to contribute.
I hope work goes well for you, and maybe by the time you're available there will be even more content for you. :)
YESSS I hope you do!! If you need any help at all I would be so dang happy to assist.
// x.x I noticed. I can't test mobiles until I publish (twine only exports in testing to desktop moooooode). I think I fixed the lag issue & the layout. The textbox will be amended in the next update (I think the title is too big in mobile so it overshadows the box).
// I will get there! Slowly but surely! :D Thank you for your patience.
that's actually a really sweet beginning! hope to see how the story goes, and that's really interesting features about souls and different options we can get with them :). HOPE TO SEE THE NEW UPTADE WOO
:D!! Thank you!! I'm so dang excited to use the SOUL TRAITS for certain paths.
Yes, here I am. Once again. Haha. Thanks for yet another title, be careful to not stretch yourself too thin tho...! Wouldn't want you with burnout of all things. That said, I'm glad you seem to be enthusiastic about trying other Undertale multiverses.
I'm writing this before actually playing it, and I've been wondering... What sort of feedback you might be looking for in your works? For example... If you want to hear about regarding the way the story is progressing, how the setting is presented, or any feedback regarding tone or pacing, or continuity (usually called high-level feedback)... Or if you would prefer mostly comments on scripting bugs (low level).
I realize you are most probably doing these both for fun and so you can develop your skills... Also, it's for the price of 0 for everyone, so I don't want to be overly critic of something someone might be doing as a way to relax and to share fun stories with others.
You see... One of my oldest high-school friends (still my friend to this day in fact) became my friend exactly because he was the one person willing to lay it on thick and seriously criticize some art pieces I did as a hobby back then. He's a writer nowadays haha. It was honestly what I wanted, receiving just praise becomes jarring after awhile and uh... It's like... You can't trust what people say? Like they are on repeat? Or just saying stuff to please you? It's weird. So yeah, I'm wondering where exactly you stand. I would be very happy in offering the same constructive honesty I received back then, if that's something you are looking for.
Otherwise, I'm more than happy to let a hobby just be your way to wind down haha! Just having fun with it is fine too, no judgments. We all need a place to just be ourselves and be free for a little while.
Again, thanks! Don't worry about replying too fast, take your time.
Hello!!
Yes, the fandom keeps me alive. It’s hard not to get inspired when every day I see someone else posting about something new or funny.
Re feedback - While I do this for fun, I do also want to improve. If there is something within my ability to change, then I want to. If you feel comfortable providing that level of feed back I would more than welcome it.
The only critiques I don’t want are suggestions of different choices that would lead to routes I don’t have planned. I want to complete my outline / main story first before I go and add branches.
Yeah, I understand that on a spiritual level. As I mentioned, I make some art stuff so, I totally understand how people trying to make your change course on something you are working on can be a little stressful/take some of the fun out of it... Especially when you are doing a specific piece for yourself just to try an idea or to relax. It's not even a commission or anything, in which case it would be completely fine. I mean, they are paying for it so they should get what they want, and I'm no clairvoyant haha. I'll do my best to be a good critic while letting you do your thing. It'll be an exercise for me too!
Well then, I'll be back eventually with my thoughts. As anything in life, take them with a grain of salt. Thanks for the reply once again!
This game seems great! However, I can't play it properly as there is no way to scroll down (I use a laptop and don't own a mouse so I use the arrow keys or the scrollbar to scroll), this isn't a problem in any of your other games so I don't know why it's a problem in this one. Just thought you should know so that it, hopefully, can be fixed.
you can, in the blue frame that everything is in on the right side use the curser on the tiny scrolbar. you cant realy se it so use the touchpad on your laptop to scrol with your curser. sorry if my explination is bad. hope you understand.
the tiny white line on the right, drag up and down on that you should se it if you look hard!
Thanks for the help! I couldn't see the scrollbar at first but I saw it when I changed the theme.
New update changed the scroll bar color to orange in the default theme so hopefully that will help!
You are SERVING the undertale content, seriously! How do you always do it? I’m so glad to be apart of the updating process because it will be fun to look forward to updates for this game. Sending lots of love your way (ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡.
I live to feed fandoms and UT is my choice of flavor. There's so many wonderful people in this fandom, I can't help but get inspired.
(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) hehe thank you~ Appreciate you coming along from the start~
Hey! I don't usually reply to things because I'm a bit shy, but just wanted to send a message here to show my support for all of your games.
It really makes me happy how quick you update and post new games, and they are always so much fun!
You are the first person I followed here on itch.io and it always makes my day to receive an email about how you updated a game or posted a new one.
Sorry for the long text, keep up the great work!
Uwa thank you!! I'm so happy you like my works.
WOW! First follow? Thank you, that's an honor!! I'll do my best with each update so you can relax & enjoy this fandom.
another one? theres 4 games and there all great!!
i have found a typo where you pick what tattoo you want
My eyes are going cross eye, would you please tell me which word has the typo? Thank you so much for your help!
of course! its the first sentence. it says "On the back of your hand there is special tattoo."
i believe its supposed to say "On the back of your hand there is a special tattoo"?
How do you get skeleton 3?
… asking for a friend
Be wise & do everything.
thx
You're spoiling us istg. I'm literally obsessed with all your games :")
LOL me 2 :)
Yall deserved to be spoiled. :D
Hope there will be choice guide or something in Future and choice to date asgore
PS: what does the void screens with the signs mean?
I'll post a walkthrough once everything is finished. I don't plan to add Asgore as an option at this current time but who knows what the future holds.
PS: idk :D
Dont know if Its just me but it feel slower/laggy but only this one the other 3 games are smooth no lag. But maybe thats cause its new game
This is so cool!! I love the interface and the writing :)
Thank you!! I had a lot of fun working with the UI for this one. :)
You doing amazing job on the AU! I'm play your first game and it made me cry it was beautiful! I hope you continue to do the AU for undertale. l have idea for the next game it about X table.
Thank you!! I appreciate you playing my games, I hope you enjoy this one as well.
X-verse isn't a community AU so I'm not sure if I would be allowed to make a game for it anyway?
Darkpetal16, you are the absolute best. Thank you for blessing us with all of these wonderful games! I haven’t tried this one yet, but I’ve loved all of the other ones and I’m sure I’ll love this one too. Thank you so much! :)
Thank you so very much!! I'm so happy you enjoyed my other games, I hope you also like this one. :)
wohhhhhh i just saw this!!!!
im gona start playing now!
iv been sick for about 4 days so im happy to have somthing nice to play!!!! ill say more when iv played, love you!!!!
ohhh, it was lovely!! so cute!
oh but idk if its intended but if you load the game the music stops until it changes to another sound later.
haha i just put som of gasters text through a translater and its so cute, heheh. im pretty sure without the translation its suposed to be scary idk, but i found it cute, i dont wanna spoil so put it in a translater if you wanna se it. but ahhhhh it was cute atleast i thought it was!
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
let them think it's spooky!! hahaha
Ahh it's really up to interpretation. The character's interactions with WD will depend on what they do in the Underground. :)
hahha yeah, but atlest right now i find it cute!
Can you translate pretty please ?
i havent been on itch in a while but you've already popped out TWO NEW GAMES? (dusttale and this) OH MY GOD IM SO EXCITED!!! don't rush yourself to finish though, but its been nice playing your games from the start <3
WELCOME BAAAACK~!
Ahhh I hope you enjoy Dusttale & this, and thank you so much for coming along for the ride. :) Appreciate you playing & commenting.
ofc!! question after ur done w this are u going to continue making more? and if so which au do u plan on doing next. no rush btw!!
DARKPETAL16 YOU ARE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE CREATORS ON ITCH.IO DID YOU KNOW THAT? underswap is my favourite AU and i've been feeling like im in the dumps lately :'( so seeing this!!! is so!!! AMAZING! I can't play it rn but once im back home from some errands, im definitely gonna binge this!!!!
GASP. That is quite the feat!! Thank you!
Underswap is definitely top tier AU material, so excited to see new content for it!
I'm sorry you've been in the dumps, but I hope this & the next update can help cheer you up. :) Already about a fourth of the way through Snowdin.
YOURE WELCOME! AND HARD AGREE!!! The wingdings are quite interesting as well, I wonder what that 3rd skeleton may bring 👀
No worries, I've gotten out of the dumps now! This game has certainly cheered me up too!
I'm playing in snowdin as I type this. The writing is great as always, and I've certainly enjoyed my time in the crystal caverns. I also like the battle with sans-- I was at first confused on why I couldn't progress further when I surrendered, until I went back and didnt. I really like that part because at the end of the fight, it felt quite deserving! :3
Also I ADORE the way you write sans? like, he's not all sunshine and rainbows!! It's something ive noticed when people interpret him where he's seen as a ball of sweet things (which he is!!!) but he's a KNIGHT (or trains a lot to be one i suppose!), he's DEFINITELY not meant to be all things happy. Love the mix of orange and blue attacks in the battle too, definitely gives a lot more reason to not underestimate him!
OH! also, when surrendering, I got the silly wingdings that said "Thank you for coming"!! I thought that was part of the demo, but now that I've reached the end of snowdin, I wonder if it's not?
that was pretty long but YEAH! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE REST!!
Gosh who knows what that mysterious third skeleton will do. 👀👀
That's so wonderful to hear!! I hope things continue to improve for you.
The Sans fight was a lot of fun to write, I love his music. I'm glad you enjoyed the battle and it felt fun to play through ^^
AHHHH!! YES! I picture him as a knight as well and I'm ecstatic you got that impression from him. He's inclined to be positive, but he's not a child & has a lot of responsibilities to manage. :)
Ahaha it is an ending.
Not a good one. But yes you can end the game there.THANKS SO MUCH FOR PLAYING!!
I love this game so far its awesome you're amazing at making games I love every single one!
Thank you thank you!! :) I hope you like the future update.
I already know I will
DAWH THIS IS SO COOL!! asgore's vibes are immaculate, all of your games have been so fun to play! i don't tend to comment on things often but your games are such a comfort- the only thing i will say is that i had a bit of trouble scrolling on this one lol. But regardless i'm looking forward to the next chapter update in may! >:)
<3 Thank you!! Asgore is such a wonderful goat dad, I was happy to have a chance to write him.
I really appreciate that you took the time to comment and play!!
I just updated the game so the scroll bar is in orange, hopefully that will make it easier for you to scroll down!
Loved this game so much!! enjoyed the interactions a lot and i will make sure to keep up with the game whenever it updates
Yay! I'm glad you like the interactions, and I hope you enjoy the next update when it comes out.
YAYYYY NEW GAMEEE!! (Literally late for class but still decided to comment)
GOOD LUCK IN CLASS!!
Omg that's amazing :0 I'll start playing right away!
:D!! I hope you enjoy!
The effects in this game are awe-inspiring- you’ve grown so much with your abilities using twine since you started making these games, and seeing how far you’ve come is oddly heartwarming! ^^
Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate that you've noticed my progress. I'm excited to start slowly updating the UI for UNDERFELL now haha.
Reading your comments is heartwarming. <3
Niceeee <3
fufu ty<3
dude, I didn’t even play it yet but I know this guy is on a roll, and a great one too 🫶🏽 Love to see it, keep up the great work
haha thank you!! I hope you enjoy it when you get the chance to play. :)