i adore this game sm i had so much fun playing it even tho i didnt no much. i loved exploring around even though i did die a few times beacuse of my curoisity it was worth it! and the bonus scenes (the flowey ones) were adorable.
I stumble in from another comment section, but very much enjoyed this just as the last. one thing I loved in this one was that you made it so the game actually tracked how many times you proceeded to perish cbrought out a surprised little snort as a result. also enjoyed that when the reload happened it didn't ask me to go to my saves, and just sent me right back. just so I could add to the counter which I have no regrets.
moving on, I really enjoyed the voice acting sprinkled about. the places that they get used at really give the player a strong will to try try try again and stick it to 'em until you get everything correctly.
though I had only romanced one skeleton man, I ended up getting one ending with a neutral end, and proceeded to spend an entire night until I got that romantic ending I so craved.
suprisingly good for an undertale VN, most of the ones you can find on itch.io are not too good. The writing is immensely good, and I love the customisation. However(and this may have just been something on my end), it felt like the game skipped MAJOR interactions, and bugged a little bit towards the end when I think it was coded to reference those interactions. Nothing game-breaking, you can still make it to the end just fine, but it does break immersion a little bit. Incas you're wondering, I think I missed out on a whole Undyne and a whole Alphys interaction.
aaaa i love this sm!! i pulled an all-nighter to finish it since it hooked me and was so well written I barely noticed the time past ijffvuh.
i have only placed the sans-romance route but the pet names, banter, and chemistry were so good. i was giggling and twirling a lock of my hair the whole time.
ty for such a good game! i have been playing through some of the other ones you posted as well as the siren call game and this is my fav so far <3
so, long comment aside, tysm for such nicely written and customizable games. little me would have been ecstatic to have this in early 2018 haha. excuse my gushing ToT <3
AAAAAH !! i played this game like 3 times already, the writing is so well done and the story is so enchanting. I had so much fun playing and seeing how the characters acted as well :D !! SUCH A GREAT GAME OVERALL !!!
Found a couple of typos in the new bonus scenes. In the Sans + Gaster bonus scene: Page starts with "If asked, Wingding would freely admit that he loves his brothers." Line is "Nonsense. Inane gibberish." Insane instead of inane :D
In Asriel's Judgement Hall scene: "As soon as Asriel ensured his beloved MC was asleep, he calmly walked away." Line starts with "Wingding, who was seated at his desk", Asriel instead of Ariel.
Thank you for these little updates!! Please remember to take breaks!
IM NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING- T-T. In all seriousness I adore this game. I laughed like a clown, I cried like a baby, I blushed and kicked my feet like a lunatic, and my heart has never been so full. Thank you for the experience and I hope you never stop creating. :)
You. You are so talented.. I cried a bucket of tears, I became emotional in the middle of the night while playing this game, and never have I felt this good after spend an amount of time playing a text-based game this good. Your game bring me back to my childhood, when I used to be a kiddo with youtube addiction. I spent days watching Pewdiepie playing Undertale, exciting waiting for his video to know what happened next. The music, the line, the pun you've typed, exactly fit in what nostalgic im having here. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece <^^>
(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) Thank you!! While I'm sorry you cried, I'm happier you were able to get so attached to this game. Undertale is such a beloved fandom, and I'm delighted I could help remind you about it & simpler times.
I first played just for nostalgia, but I didn't expect to really love this game <3 Lots of details are put into it and I love reading all of it. Really looking forward to play the other Undertale AU games!
P.S. The romance endings are really wholesome, didn't expect to fell so hard for Wingding :'))
I rarely comment on stuff but omfg this game is beautiful??? I actually got hella emotional on some parts, and I have very mixed feelings about the neutral ending- 😭
Gonna replay it a few thousand times to get all routes and romances lol
Thank you SO much for creating this game. I had so much fun playing it, can you please make more Undertale AU narrative-based games like this? I'll be looking forward to playing them
Hey Darkpetal16, quick question. I've been playing one of your other games, and I'm currently stumped on how to get the romance route with Swap sans. I've been on the friendship route with Dust sans in the Dust tale game, which I'm okay with but, I just want to figure out how to romance Swap sans. If you can tell how let me know (hope it's not too much to ask). Have a nice day!
Question, cause not sure if this is a bug or not. I was playing the harem route again and noticed you only get the 'bold flirting' actions, even if you only used shy one earlier. Is this supposed to happen?
I played it bold the first time so I never noticed till now.
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"Mettaton are you going to autograph the human’s SOUL?" Literally the best line I've ever read, no notes 10/10
i adore this game sm i had so much fun playing it even tho i didnt no much. i loved exploring around even though i did die a few times beacuse of my curoisity it was worth it! and the bonus scenes (the flowey ones) were adorable.
Epik
I stumble in from another comment section, but very much enjoyed this just as the last. one thing I loved in this one was that you made it so the game actually tracked how many times you proceeded to perish cbrought out a surprised little snort as a result. also enjoyed that when the reload happened it didn't ask me to go to my saves, and just sent me right back. just so I could add to the counter which I have no regrets.
moving on, I really enjoyed the voice acting sprinkled about. the places that they get used at really give the player a strong will to try try try again and stick it to 'em until you get everything correctly.
though I had only romanced one skeleton man, I ended up getting one ending with a neutral end, and proceeded to spend an entire night until I got that romantic ending I so craved.
Glad ya liked the game and my performances! Was an honour voice acting for this game, its one of my favourites :D
OMG THE VOICE ACTING IS AMAZING!!! LOVE IT !!!
And the voice acting loves you!! Glad you liked it, i worked hard teehee :>
I absolutely adored this game, one of my new favs <3
i sang welcome to the black parade with the fish. great game 1000/10
how do i get the mettaton,alphys or undyne route or is it not added yet,i'm confused as heck
Not in the game atm
suprisingly good for an undertale VN, most of the ones you can find on itch.io are not too good. The writing is immensely good, and I love the customisation. However(and this may have just been something on my end), it felt like the game skipped MAJOR interactions, and bugged a little bit towards the end when I think it was coded to reference those interactions. Nothing game-breaking, you can still make it to the end just fine, but it does break immersion a little bit. Incas you're wondering, I think I missed out on a whole Undyne and a whole Alphys interaction.
aaaa i love this sm!! i pulled an all-nighter to finish it since it hooked me and was so well written I barely noticed the time past ijffvuh.
i have only placed the sans-romance route but the pet names, banter, and chemistry were so good. i was giggling and twirling a lock of my hair the whole time.
ty for such a good game! i have been playing through some of the other ones you posted as well as the siren call game and this is my fav so far <3
so, long comment aside, tysm for such nicely written and customizable games. little me would have been ecstatic to have this in early 2018 haha. excuse my gushing ToT <3
the tab reloaded and I lost all my progress wahhhh
Is Darkpetal a soon to be romance option. Because I am in love with all of their projects ^3^
i started singing four big guys to shyren it was amazing
BAHAHAAHAHA
FOUR BIG GUYS 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻
AND THEY BUST ON MY THIGHS
BLOW UP MY GUTS LIKE THE FOURTH OF JULY
I haven’t gone that far yet with the lyrics lmaooo
Flowey is such a sweetheart like
(aggressively grabs)
how do i see shyren again?
this is the coolest~! my new favourite game, fr
You make the best undertale story games
i feel like this game is basically just: haha dont kill me
(with rizz)in a good way btw
LOL true XD
AAAAAH !! i played this game like 3 times already, the writing is so well done and the story is so enchanting. I had so much fun playing and seeing how the characters acted as well :D !! SUCH A GREAT GAME OVERALL !!!
Found a couple of typos in the new bonus scenes.
In the Sans + Gaster bonus scene:
Page starts with "If asked, Wingding would freely admit that he loves his brothers."
Line is "Nonsense. Inane gibberish." Insane instead of inane :D
In Asriel's Judgement Hall scene:
"As soon as Asriel ensured his beloved MC was asleep, he calmly walked away."
Line starts with "Wingding, who was seated at his desk", Asriel instead of Ariel.
Thank you for these little updates!! Please remember to take breaks!
really good game, wish we could do genocide tho
Thank you! :D This is a pacifist only game though.
IM NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING- T-T. In all seriousness I adore this game. I laughed like a clown, I cried like a baby, I blushed and kicked my feet like a lunatic, and my heart has never been so full. Thank you for the experience and I hope you never stop creating. :)
Aww thank you!! I'm so glad you've enjoyed this game so far, I really appreciate you playing & commenting.
Just wondering, what did you make this on??
Also love the game, can't wait to finish getting all the endings :D
Twine Sugarcube2
You. You are so talented.. I cried a bucket of tears, I became emotional in the middle of the night while playing this game, and never have I felt this good after spend an amount of time playing a text-based game this good. Your game bring me back to my childhood, when I used to be a kiddo with youtube addiction. I spent days watching Pewdiepie playing Undertale, exciting waiting for his video to know what happened next. The music, the line, the pun you've typed, exactly fit in what nostalgic im having here. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece <^^>
(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
Thank you!! While I'm sorry you cried, I'm happier you were able to get so attached to this game. Undertale is such a beloved fandom, and I'm delighted I could help remind you about it & simpler times.
Hope you are doing well.
I first played just for nostalgia, but I didn't expect to really love this game <3 Lots of details are put into it and I love reading all of it. Really looking forward to play the other Undertale AU games!
P.S. The romance endings are really wholesome, didn't expect to fell so hard for Wingding :'))
:D Nostalgia can be such a comforting delight, I'm grateful you gave this game a chance. Thank you kindly for playing & commenting.
P.S. Thank you! WD is such a funny man to write.
I adore all of you're games and my friend want's to make a comic of this game and a few of the other one's too is that okay?
Can you please tell your friend that i’m already taking care of Mafiafell?
I did
we're gonna do it anyway though:)
okay,just so you guys know I’ll post my comic of this on here
pov: skiing w/ Sans for the first time
(Papyrus and Wingdings taking pictures and videos)
Sans:(zooming past his bros at high speed)“I CAN‘T SLOW DOWN!——“
Wingdings:“Wha—?“ | Papyrus:“WOAH—“
Y/N:(Following Sans at high speed)“SANS!——“
Wingdings:*snicker*“You got that on camera right?“
Papyrus:*snort*“OF COURSE I DID HAHAHA“
Wingdings:“We are so not gonna let him forget that,are we?“
Papyrus:“Yup“ 😂😂😂
How do I romance Wingding
Don‘t romance anyone and wait until the point where you get the second piece of the locket.Say that you‘d like to see his picture inside
And you’re good to go:)
thank youuuu😁😁😁
have fun bud :)
Yall how do i romance with flowey im trying to get all the endings-
Flirt w/ him twice in the ruins,don‘t try to romance anyone else,in the true lab ask him to help ya w/ the wires in the water
Hope this helps :)
I rarely comment on stuff but omfg this game is beautiful??? I actually got hella emotional on some parts, and I have very mixed feelings about the neutral ending- 😭
Gonna replay it a few thousand times to get all routes and romances lol
Oh my gosh, thank you so kindly! I really appreciate you playing my game. :) I hope you were able to get all the romance happy endings.
Ofc!! Thank you for making such well made games
I managed to get all of them eheheh, no one was safe from my flirting >:))
I just want to report this. I don't know if this is meant to be in the story but I think I should report it.
This has been fixed! Sorry for the delay. :)
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL, I LOVED IT SO MUCH. This game was really amazing. I loved it so much! absolutely spectacular.
Thank you so much!! I appreciate you playing & commenting!
After a week of trying, I FINALLY got the True Happy ending. (Did Grillby route)
He‘s spicy,isn’t he~ ;)
lol
Congratulations Moon! :D
Thanks! The game was great! I'm currently trying another route
Hihi! I was replaying this and noticed that, in the Judgement Hall in Sans route, it says San's instead of Sans in the options after hugging him.
Thank you Dawn!! I'll fix it now so it'll be good to go on the next update. :)
Thank you SO much for creating this game. I had so much fun playing it, can you please make more Undertale AU narrative-based games like this? I'll be looking forward to playing them
Until next time, has a STELLAR-tastic day! ^^
- Bunni_Star Gamer
Thank you so much for playing this game & commenting! <3 Appreciate your support.
Hey Darkpetal16, quick question. I've been playing one of your other games, and I'm currently stumped on how to get the romance route with Swap sans. I've been on the friendship route with Dust sans in the Dust tale game, which I'm okay with but, I just want to figure out how to romance Swap sans. If you can tell how let me know (hope it's not too much to ask). Have a nice day!
~ Bunni_Star Gamer <3
Hi Bunni! I have walkthroughs posted in the spoilers channel in my discord. They're step by step if you want to take a look at those.
Otherwise I can advise that for US!Sans you have to pick all the cheerful / optimistic options to start his route. :)
Rodger that! Thanks a bunch X3
Question, cause not sure if this is a bug or not. I was playing the harem route again and noticed you only get the 'bold flirting' actions, even if you only used shy one earlier. Is this supposed to happen?
I played it bold the first time so I never noticed till now.
Yeah, I don't have a "shy" harem route because MC has to initiate which makes them bold.