Hi! I love all your games, their so fun, but I really wanna learn how to make a text adventure like yours! Do you have any advice? (I'm struggling to get started bc I've never done anything like this before other than write stories.)
That... was... AWESOME. I need to complete the Asriel romance, but I just had to follow my heart and romance my vertabaes first. From what I remember of the original Underfell AU, before I drowned it in reader-insert fanfic, everyone feels so faithfully rendered. Your writing was charming and captures the essence of Undertale and this AU as magnificently as a fan-author possibly could.
I'm very excited to try out the other ones. You are a delightful writer. May you remain filled with DETERMINATION!
[P.S. I think there was an error. It looked like there was meant to be an input during the Post-Judgement scene in the Judgement Hall with Sans. I don't know if I have a save before it, but if I do and can recreate it, I'd happily supply a copy of the save to see what went wrong.]
Hiiii ! Firstly I love this game, it's beautifully written and I couldn't describe how I felt about each routes. They were so rich and amazing to go through: thanks darkpetals for this amazing writing, I'm so invested in your works omg. Like I tried each IF you made and they were all so good. ✨✨✨
Secondly, it's just a question like that : I tried each routes in this game, and I wanted to do Mettaton's, though each time I tried, it goes on the friendship/Wingding routes. I can't find a playthrough (since I believe Mettaton's route is quite recent and it hasn't been updated since Grillby's), I succeeded in having a flirty interaction (?) with him, though it never got further. I don't know what to do anymore.🫠
If anyone knows how to get through it, I'd rather appreciate your guidance, thank you in advance.
Anyway thanks for reading this wall of text patiently (I'm sorry if my English is a bit wacky, it isn't my mother tongue), I wish you a good day (or night, I don't know).
Edit: Aaaaaaahhh I just noticed it ! My bad, I didn't realized it was written under my nose, in the development log, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, have a nice day/night (again)🫠
Idk why,but I can't load my save?? I can't even save anything,it just says 'an error has ocurred' any idea how can I fix this? I already deleted and re-uploeded the game,but it still doesn't work.I wanna play it :(
It happened to me once, though by playing you'll notice that the nickname he is supposed to give you depends on the action you took when meeting him : like if you have chosen to flirt openly, he'd call you "dollface", but if you have chosen to be bashful, he'd opt for "sweetheart" instead. I don't quite recall how I happened to get the "sansfirstnickname" thingy though.
Hope it helped ? Even though you must have figured it out by now with how late the answer I gave is. 🫠
(Ps: Sorry if there are some grammatical mistakes)
Hiiiiii if you have any doubts you can ask in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! The link is in darkpetal16's profile. :3 (Ik im super late im sorry TT)
"Sans hopes you enjoy the sunrise." I'd rather die oh god that's better than this omfg you can't imagine how hard I bawled my eyes out reading the last page then this sentence came and I just?!?????!?!!? Like fr after all of that?????? After him saying he wanted to see it???? I can't do thisss. Also I love your game, thank you for making this game ily sm this is one of my favorite game, I cried a lot while reading the fight scenes with sans, I'm gonna go back and restart it so it could end happily now <3
Also I write all that without scrolling further and seeing these, so yeah i'm gonna go cry all night long now thx
finally completed every single ending to this game oh. my gosh. this IF was <AMAZING> and I am so glad to have found it!! ivee played all of your other IFs and they're all so good! so excited for the next chapter of Mafiafell and Horrortale :}
hey queen!! one small thing I wanted to note: I think your description for Mettaton (in the game description stuff, not in the actual game) is accidentally the one for Grillby
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Hi! I love all your games, their so fun, but I really wanna learn how to make a text adventure like yours! Do you have any advice? (I'm struggling to get started bc I've never done anything like this before other than write stories.)
Hiiii you should ask this in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! You'll get a much faster reply there. :3 the link is in darkpetal16's itch.io profile.
edit: (ptssss im also curious abt this so please do ask!! >< TYYY)
That was incredible
That... was... AWESOME. I need to complete the Asriel romance, but I just had to follow my heart and romance my vertabaes first. From what I remember of the original Underfell AU, before I drowned it in reader-insert fanfic, everyone feels so faithfully rendered. Your writing was charming and captures the essence of Undertale and this AU as magnificently as a fan-author possibly could.
I'm very excited to try out the other ones. You are a delightful writer. May you remain filled with DETERMINATION!
[P.S. I think there was an error. It looked like there was meant to be an input during the Post-Judgement scene in the Judgement Hall with Sans. I don't know if I have a save before it, but if I do and can recreate it, I'd happily supply a copy of the save to see what went wrong.]
Hiiii ! Firstly I love this game, it's beautifully written and I couldn't describe how I felt about each routes. They were so rich and amazing to go through: thanks darkpetals for this amazing writing, I'm so invested in your works omg. Like I tried each IF you made and they were all so good. ✨✨✨
Secondly, it's just a question like that : I tried each routes in this game, and I wanted to do Mettaton's, though each time I tried, it goes on the friendship/Wingding routes. I can't find a playthrough (since I believe Mettaton's route is quite recent and it hasn't been updated since Grillby's), I succeeded in having a flirty interaction (?) with him, though it never got further. I don't know what to do anymore.🫠
If anyone knows how to get through it, I'd rather appreciate your guidance, thank you in advance.
Anyway thanks for reading this wall of text patiently (I'm sorry if my English is a bit wacky, it isn't my mother tongue), I wish you a good day (or night, I don't know).
Edit: Aaaaaaahhh I just noticed it ! My bad, I didn't realized it was written under my nose, in the development log, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, have a nice day/night (again)🫠
no toriel romance no undyne romance no nothin????
:(
fuck my stupid lesbian life
THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP HITS HARD 🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥
true, true.....
HELLPPP BAJJAAJAJ I feel so bad 4 you im sorry 3:
I dont feel like restarting. Someone kill sans for me. That dick pmo.
sans undertale = fire
sans deltarune = no
HOW DO YOU MAKE THESE!!!!!😭😭😭😭 I WANT TO MAKE ONE FOR DELTARUNE!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
HEYYYYY so im suuuper late, but you can get a much faster reply in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! :3 The link is in darkpetal16's itch.io profile.
(pttsssss im also curious about this so pls ask!! >_< TYYY)
Idk why,but I can't load my save?? I can't even save anything,it just says 'an error has ocurred' any idea how can I fix this? I already deleted and re-uploeded the game,but it still doesn't work.I wanna play it :(
Idk if I missed something or if it's supposed to be like this
But why does Sans say sansfirstnickname?
Hi ! I think that's an error.
It happened to me once, though by playing you'll notice that the nickname he is supposed to give you depends on the action you took when meeting him : like if you have chosen to flirt openly, he'd call you "dollface", but if you have chosen to be bashful, he'd opt for "sweetheart" instead. I don't quite recall how I happened to get the "sansfirstnickname" thingy though.
Hope it helped ? Even though you must have figured it out by now with how late the answer I gave is. 🫠
(Ps: Sorry if there are some grammatical mistakes)
I wanna make my own one of these but I don't even know where to start.
Hiiiiii if you have any doubts you can ask in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! The link is in darkpetal16's profile. :3 (Ik im super late im sorry TT)
Eu nao tenho conseguido seguir a rota do sans! T_T eu flerto com ele e somente ele, mas não aparece que eu estou seguindo a rota dele, o que eu faço?
"Sans hopes you enjoy the sunrise." I'd rather die oh god that's better than this omfg you can't imagine how hard I bawled my eyes out reading the last page then this sentence came and I just?!?????!?!!? Like fr after all of that?????? After him saying he wanted to see it???? I can't do thisss. Also I love your game, thank you for making this game ily sm this is one of my favorite game, I cried a lot while reading the fight scenes with sans, I'm gonna go back and restart it so it could end happily now <3
Also I write all that without scrolling further and seeing these, so yeah i'm gonna go cry all night long now thx
OMG BRO FRRRRR, I WAS SO SHOCKED WHEN I WAS FORCED TO
LEAVEEEE, my heart broke (all bcuz I forgor a stick, and a peice of paper)
I love the harem
we need more games that give poly and harem options like-
AAAAAAAAAAAAA
Also I love the story itself not just the romance (freak show of the century. absolutely fucking adorable)
I love this game and all the others and and and
im crying wdym i forgot the stick? Omfg brb imma sob before trying again ☝️
REAL??? 😭😭😭 hate flowey/astriel's neutral ending sm
does anyone know how to fix choices/text not appearing? im stuck on the part where you show undyne the paper from the lab
nvm i console commanded my way to the next passage (still wondering if theres a simpler method though)
cool game, the writing's great and i finished most of the endings!
finally completed every single ending to this game oh. my gosh. this IF was <AMAZING> and I am so glad to have found it!! ivee played all of your other IFs and they're all so good! so excited for the next chapter of Mafiafell and Horrortale :}
Could I have an up-to-date discord link? All links given are invalid.
hey queen!! one small thing I wanted to note: I think your description for Mettaton (in the game description stuff, not in the actual game) is accidentally the one for Grillby
I am unable to obtain the key through Toriel. What death should I choose? Can anyone help me?
I used machine translation. So it may not be very accurate.
like to get the good ends? for her all you have to is give her a hug at the end of the fight.
It's so well made. Like, extremely. Dunno what else to say. Asriel was adorable as usual.
wait can someone write out how to do the harem route? i cant get it to save my lifee :')
There's a link to a video of someone playing the game doing the harem route so that should help it's right above the dev log
BTW the description of Metatons route is the same as Grillby on the page description
but keep it up your games are the best! <3