Hi! I love all your games, their so fun, but I really wanna learn how to make a text adventure like yours! Do you have any advice? (I'm struggling to get started bc I've never done anything like this before other than write stories.)
That... was... AWESOME. I need to complete the Asriel romance, but I just had to follow my heart and romance my vertabaes first. From what I remember of the original Underfell AU, before I drowned it in reader-insert fanfic, everyone feels so faithfully rendered. Your writing was charming and captures the essence of Undertale and this AU as magnificently as a fan-author possibly could.
I'm very excited to try out the other ones. You are a delightful writer. May you remain filled with DETERMINATION!
[P.S. I think there was an error. It looked like there was meant to be an input during the Post-Judgement scene in the Judgement Hall with Sans. I don't know if I have a save before it, but if I do and can recreate it, I'd happily supply a copy of the save to see what went wrong.]
Hiiii ! Firstly I love this game, it's beautifully written and I couldn't describe how I felt about each routes. They were so rich and amazing to go through: thanks darkpetals for this amazing writing, I'm so invested in your works omg. Like I tried each IF you made and they were all so good. ✨✨✨
Secondly, it's just a question like that : I tried each routes in this game, and I wanted to do Mettaton's, though each time I tried, it goes on the friendship/Wingding routes. I can't find a playthrough (since I believe Mettaton's route is quite recent and it hasn't been updated since Grillby's), I succeeded in having a flirty interaction (?) with him, though it never got further. I don't know what to do anymore.🫠
If anyone knows how to get through it, I'd rather appreciate your guidance, thank you in advance.
Anyway thanks for reading this wall of text patiently (I'm sorry if my English is a bit wacky, it isn't my mother tongue), I wish you a good day (or night, I don't know).
Edit: Aaaaaaahhh I just noticed it ! My bad, I didn't realized it was written under my nose, in the development log, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, have a nice day/night (again)🫠
Idk why,but I can't load my save?? I can't even save anything,it just says 'an error has ocurred' any idea how can I fix this? I already deleted and re-uploeded the game,but it still doesn't work.I wanna play it :(
Hiiiiii if you have any doubts you can ask in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! The link is in darkpetal16's profile. :3 (Ik im super late im sorry TT)
"Sans hopes you enjoy the sunrise." I'd rather die oh god that's better than this omfg you can't imagine how hard I bawled my eyes out reading the last page then this sentence came and I just?!?????!?!!? Like fr after all of that?????? After him saying he wanted to see it???? I can't do thisss. Also I love your game, thank you for making this game ily sm this is one of my favorite game, I cried a lot while reading the fight scenes with sans, I'm gonna go back and restart it so it could end happily now <3
Also I write all that without scrolling further and seeing these, so yeah i'm gonna go cry all night long now thx
finally completed every single ending to this game oh. my gosh. this IF was <AMAZING> and I am so glad to have found it!! ivee played all of your other IFs and they're all so good! so excited for the next chapter of Mafiafell and Horrortale :}
hey queen!! one small thing I wanted to note: I think your description for Mettaton (in the game description stuff, not in the actual game) is accidentally the one for Grillby
I love this game so much, and maybe im crazy? But I could've sworn that there were voices for sans and paps at one point. I remember seeing it in the logs but cant find it anymore? Please they were so good.
I'm absolutely obsessed with this game, I just wish there was a chapter select option so I didn't have to go back through the entire thing to get the route I want
There's a guide in the development log if you didn't know that yet.
Do not romance anyone else at all until you reach grillby, after that chocolate scene? Make damn well sure you are not romancing or even flirt with anybody else until you get to the city where you will meet grillby again aaaand choose "stand closer" 👍
this had me screaming and kicking my feet dude. I just did the Grillby route and oh my gosh- I couldn't even breathe right afterwards
also are there going to be anymore ending things like the the other routes for Grillby? like The First storm, etc. I think it'd be pretty interesting :D
but this game really is amazing. really. thank you and I hope you have a great night/day <33
Hi!! Wanted to say that this Text game is absolutely amazing<3 I replayed it three times for Papyrus, Grillby and Gaster. It was amazing, but...
I actually wanted to ask if route with Mettaton will be added..? I really adore this character, but there's never anything about him, which is very sad. So... maybe you could've consider adding route with him.. please? Like, no pressure, mostly just curiosity :>
I have never had any real interest in Undertale before hand, aware of the general story and main characters but not much else. Yet, after this piece cleansed my soul like a bucket of holy water, I have now begun searching for sans/reader fics from 2015. I discovered you with sirentale and dancetale (I see pretty ballet, I click) stayed for all of your other beautifully crafted ifs.
I was in the fandom a long time ago, then I at some point forbid. More than seven years passed and one day I find this masterpiece while i was looking for IFs... Months passed and now I'm writting this next to my little Sans plushie, with a (not complete yet) Ralsei cosplay in the closet. Yes, The domino effect was so strong that in addition to returning to the Undertale fandom, I also entered the Deltarune one.
I mean actually actually tried to play underfell the website was sorta sketchy but I didn't think anything of it until 2 days later I got a report from my virus detection system.
God I love this so much! I accidentally stumbled upon it when searching for games and im so hooked! Im going to check out your other games and I know they're gonna be as good as this one!
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Hi! I love all your games, their so fun, but I really wanna learn how to make a text adventure like yours! Do you have any advice? (I'm struggling to get started bc I've never done anything like this before other than write stories.)
Hiiii you should ask this in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! You'll get a much faster reply there. :3 the link is in darkpetal16's itch.io profile.
edit: (ptssss im also curious abt this so please do ask!! >< TYYY)
That was incredible
That... was... AWESOME. I need to complete the Asriel romance, but I just had to follow my heart and romance my vertabaes first. From what I remember of the original Underfell AU, before I drowned it in reader-insert fanfic, everyone feels so faithfully rendered. Your writing was charming and captures the essence of Undertale and this AU as magnificently as a fan-author possibly could.
I'm very excited to try out the other ones. You are a delightful writer. May you remain filled with DETERMINATION!
[P.S. I think there was an error. It looked like there was meant to be an input during the Post-Judgement scene in the Judgement Hall with Sans. I don't know if I have a save before it, but if I do and can recreate it, I'd happily supply a copy of the save to see what went wrong.]
Hiiii ! Firstly I love this game, it's beautifully written and I couldn't describe how I felt about each routes. They were so rich and amazing to go through: thanks darkpetals for this amazing writing, I'm so invested in your works omg. Like I tried each IF you made and they were all so good. ✨✨✨
Secondly, it's just a question like that : I tried each routes in this game, and I wanted to do Mettaton's, though each time I tried, it goes on the friendship/Wingding routes. I can't find a playthrough (since I believe Mettaton's route is quite recent and it hasn't been updated since Grillby's), I succeeded in having a flirty interaction (?) with him, though it never got further. I don't know what to do anymore.🫠
If anyone knows how to get through it, I'd rather appreciate your guidance, thank you in advance.
Anyway thanks for reading this wall of text patiently (I'm sorry if my English is a bit wacky, it isn't my mother tongue), I wish you a good day (or night, I don't know).
Edit: Aaaaaaahhh I just noticed it ! My bad, I didn't realized it was written under my nose, in the development log, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, have a nice day/night (again)🫠
no toriel romance no undyne romance no nothin????
:(
fuck my stupid lesbian life
THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP HITS HARD 🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥
true, true.....
HELLPPP BAJJAAJAJ I feel so bad 4 you im sorry 3:
I dont feel like restarting. Someone kill sans for me. That dick pmo.
sans undertale = fire
sans deltarune = no
HOW DO YOU MAKE THESE!!!!!😭😭😭😭 I WANT TO MAKE ONE FOR DELTARUNE!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
HEYYYYY so im suuuper late, but you can get a much faster reply in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! :3 The link is in darkpetal16's itch.io profile.
(pttsssss im also curious about this so pls ask!! >_< TYYY)
Idk why,but I can't load my save?? I can't even save anything,it just says 'an error has ocurred' any idea how can I fix this? I already deleted and re-uploeded the game,but it still doesn't work.I wanna play it :(
Idk if I missed something or if it's supposed to be like this
But why does Sans say sansfirstnickname?
I wanna make my own one of these but I don't even know where to start.
Hiiiiii if you have any doubts you can ask in the IF - UNDERVERSE discord group! The link is in darkpetal16's profile. :3 (Ik im super late im sorry TT)
Eu nao tenho conseguido seguir a rota do sans! T_T eu flerto com ele e somente ele, mas não aparece que eu estou seguindo a rota dele, o que eu faço?
"Sans hopes you enjoy the sunrise." I'd rather die oh god that's better than this omfg you can't imagine how hard I bawled my eyes out reading the last page then this sentence came and I just?!?????!?!!? Like fr after all of that?????? After him saying he wanted to see it???? I can't do thisss. Also I love your game, thank you for making this game ily sm this is one of my favorite game, I cried a lot while reading the fight scenes with sans, I'm gonna go back and restart it so it could end happily now <3
Also I write all that without scrolling further and seeing these, so yeah i'm gonna go cry all night long now thx
OMG BRO FRRRRR, I WAS SO SHOCKED WHEN I WAS FORCED TO
LEAVEEEE, my heart broke (all bcuz I forgor a stick, and a peice of paper)
I love the harem
we need more games that give poly and harem options like-
AAAAAAAAAAAAA
Also I love the story itself not just the romance (freak show of the century. absolutely fucking adorable)
I love this game and all the others and and and
im crying wdym i forgot the stick? Omfg brb imma sob before trying again ☝️
REAL??? 😭😭😭 hate flowey/astriel's neutral ending sm
does anyone know how to fix choices/text not appearing? im stuck on the part where you show undyne the paper from the lab
nvm i console commanded my way to the next passage (still wondering if theres a simpler method though)
cool game, the writing's great and i finished most of the endings!
finally completed every single ending to this game oh. my gosh. this IF was <AMAZING> and I am so glad to have found it!! ivee played all of your other IFs and they're all so good! so excited for the next chapter of Mafiafell and Horrortale :}
Could I have an up-to-date discord link? All links given are invalid.
hey queen!! one small thing I wanted to note: I think your description for Mettaton (in the game description stuff, not in the actual game) is accidentally the one for Grillby
I am unable to obtain the key through Toriel. What death should I choose? Can anyone help me?
I used machine translation. So it may not be very accurate.
like to get the good ends? for her all you have to is give her a hug at the end of the fight.
It's so well made. Like, extremely. Dunno what else to say. Asriel was adorable as usual.
wait can someone write out how to do the harem route? i cant get it to save my lifee :')
There's a link to a video of someone playing the game doing the harem route so that should help it's right above the dev log
BTW the description of Metatons route is the same as Grillby on the page description
but keep it up your games are the best! <3
Oh my god i love this game its so awesome
Since you use your soul to find a path at the start of waterfall, you could say
there's a light inside your soul
My soul was black and that part was strange 😂
I love this game so much, and maybe im crazy? But I could've sworn that there were voices for sans and paps at one point. I remember seeing it in the logs but cant find it anymore? Please they were so good.
I'm absolutely obsessed with this game, I just wish there was a chapter select option so I didn't have to go back through the entire thing to get the route I want
hi i love this game it's my life now
the option to rizz up not one, not two, but THREE skeletons at ONCE is absolutely incredible i love this game so much thank you thank you thank you!!!
I can’t stay on the grillby route, after hotlands/the core it sends me back to the friendship route. I don’t know what I did wrong:(
There's a guide in the development log if you didn't know that yet.
Do not romance anyone else at all until you reach grillby, after that chocolate scene? Make damn well sure you are not romancing or even flirt with anybody else until you get to the city where you will meet grillby again aaaand choose "stand closer" 👍
I cant get the Flowey romance route? i did all the love options for him and didn't get the extra dialog
Make sure you don’t flirt with anyone else, it sets his at 0.
i didn't :(
Hmm, maybe it’s just a glitch. Try again but pay close attention to your options.
this is an alt account but if you interact with the entity more then needed it fucks up your run
wuhhh i love this game so much :")) ur writing makes me feel so happy. thank u!! i can't wait to play ur other games too <3
out of the way sans we have Grillby
I NEED ONE IN UNDERSWAP SWAP PAPYRUS WAS MY CRUSH IN 2018
this had me screaming and kicking my feet dude. I just did the Grillby route and oh my gosh- I couldn't even breathe right afterwards
also are there going to be anymore ending things like the the other routes for Grillby? like The First storm, etc. I think it'd be pretty interesting :D
but this game really is amazing. really. thank you and I hope you have a great night/day <33
Hi!! Wanted to say that this Text game is absolutely amazing<3 I replayed it three times for Papyrus, Grillby and Gaster. It was amazing, but...
I actually wanted to ask if route with Mettaton will be added..? I really adore this character, but there's never anything about him, which is very sad. So... maybe you could've consider adding route with him.. please? Like, no pressure, mostly just curiosity :>
It's been announced that Mettaton route is currently under development at the moment actually! (From discord)
Oh, thank you for saying. Im not on discord so i didnt know :>
GET UP YALL, METTATON ROUTE IS OUT IF YA HAVENT SEEN THE NOTIFICATION YET- 🤍
I think this if has changed me as a person.
I have never had any real interest in Undertale before hand, aware of the general story and main characters but not much else. Yet, after this piece cleansed my soul like a bucket of holy water, I have now begun searching for sans/reader fics from 2015. I discovered you with sirentale and dancetale (I see pretty ballet, I click) stayed for all of your other beautifully crafted ifs.
I wish you literally the best life possible <3
Omg kinda same for me.
I was in the fandom a long time ago, then I at some point forbid. More than seven years passed and one day I find this masterpiece while i was looking for IFs... Months passed and now I'm writting this next to my little Sans plushie, with a (not complete yet) Ralsei cosplay in the closet. Yes, The domino effect was so strong that in addition to returning to the Undertale fandom, I also entered the Deltarune one.
Thanks to this game
Kinda incredible
I'm thinking about playing but last time I tried to play underfell I got a Trojan virus which gave me 6 other viruses... just a little on edge.
...how?? it's literally a web game??
I mean actually actually tried to play underfell the website was sorta sketchy but I didn't think anything of it until 2 days later I got a report from my virus detection system.
gad damn, hopefully ur pc's okay
God I love this so much! I accidentally stumbled upon it when searching for games and im so hooked! Im going to check out your other games and I know they're gonna be as good as this one!