Since Horrortale Green was canceled, maybe you really should do something for the AU. Because you write gore and horror like a master. This whole game just proved it.
Enjoyed your interactive fiction! I love Sans and Gaster. The perspective story between Sans and Gaster was super interesting! Thank you for creating this!
I love Papa Wingding so much!! 😭 ngl makes me tear up for what he's willing to do for his child.
sans is such a menace gosh. understandably traumatized by what happened with his pod. The difference in his character between only seeing it from MC perspective , and actually reading his inner monologue is.... hm. Yes, that is one obsessive dude! /positive
It's fun to see you expanding on more AUs for Undertale :D the way you write each character and the personalized UI for each AU is always wonderful ♡
I'm delighted you've enjoyed reading from his perspective! There's so much of the story I wanted to do, but it didn't make sense for MC to have the information so I can tell it through him. (:
Thank you!! (.づσ▿σ)づ. I appreciate you playing and commenting on my games so much!
Is it a bad sign that I kinda wanted to be a Spider/Naga hybrid, hypnotize those scientists and then melt all of 'em with acidic venom during the ship? =)
My god this was such a fun IF just like your other ones! This is actually my first time interacting with the Siren AU so I'm unsure how much is your idea and the original AU yet I love how everything was written. It's all so fun tbh ahahaha! Also I want to laugh, Gaster is over here begging us to have a rational thought when dealing with the deadly siren and I'm over here like "Gaster-- I know, man I tried to be smart but I gOT KILLED AT THE VERY START SO YEAH, MAYBE SIMPING IS THE WAY TO LIVE??" Seriously, I laughed at how quick I died.
But I also love how subtle the horror is. While Sans committing these murderous acts is pretty visceral, there were still many mysterious about the deaths and so on, especially regarding the email and the second deaths because man, I too wonder what happened there, or if Sans really was diverting MC's focus because Dr. Gaster did say sirens (orca sirens) were downright intelligent. I also liked how it wasn't just Sans who was a malevolent entity in MC's life (depending on your choices, his attitude can change but at the very start he is malevolent). The scientists were all downright hostile and the security forces were just apathetic. It didn't help that the director was... questionable. And how Gaster spoke up at the ending in the bonus scenes with Sans' perspectives, it truly feels like they lucked out with having MC visit.
One of the things I kinda hoped was elaborated was MC doing some scientist mumbo jumbo things, just to display that yes, they are competent in their work and that they are justified for feeling angry at being undermined by the other scientists. It could have been another fun bonding moment with Sans as they talk about things, maybe Sans explain to MC how he uses the stars as navigation tools and share mythological stories regarding the stars while MC gushes about magic readings and whatnot.
Yet despite all that, I was immediately enthralled at this bleak world, moments where my MC was just doing their best was just heartwarming, and their continuous interactions with Sans was just pure (well, as pure as it can be what with the hidden intentions going on). And also like, hehe, reading the courtship ritual of sirens from Gaster, I just realized that both Sans and MC were doing things backwards, and the subtle way it was interweaved in the story is just *chefs kiss*
My god, this miscommunication is genuinely hilarious if it was not deadly at all.
I love the entire section of the bonus scenes, absolutely delightful to have them especially with the AU, it's so interesting to think about the multiple world building. I also would like it if you could include Gaster's point of view, especially with the progression of how he treats MC from a mere annoying stranger to someone so dear to him, as well as his reactions to the bad endings (where MC either gets killed or kidnapped) absolutely heart breaking. And also his view on MC and Sans' relationship, absolutely wonderful opinions ahhaha!
Errors I found:
I think people mentioned it but the save files were wrongly sized and there was only space for 4 (including autosave) save files with the laptop/pc view in 100%.
For me, when I selected a trait for my soul, there was a broken picture icon so I assumed there was art for the soul but it isn't loading (I chose the purple-grey devotion one).
In one of the options where after you chat with Dr. Gaster about your relationship with Sans and end up meeting with him again, if you choose the option where you're flustered but don't stop him, you stop at "It's distracting" and nothing else, it abruptly cuts there so I'm unsure if it was a dead end or something?
There were some typos and wrong pronoun uses, mostly in the bonus scenes (and the one with Sans' perspective of the story because the pronouns throughout his story are female).
Also you kinda mispelled "Drabbles" into "Dabbles" in the Bonuses hehe.
Below will be spoilers!
Oh my god the reveal of everything. Downright terrifying! The one thing I was confused about was who sent the email of the Director dying because I initially thought it was James because of how he seemed eager to have MC all to himself and being all sleazy, but at the ending portion it looked like he really didn't have any idea of what happened to the Director, that or he's good at hiding it especially since his older brother is in charge of the security. Not only that, but goddamn I wanna sucker punch Director Greenberg and wanna be reluctant to thank Sans for what he did. The director knew what he was doing during the entire time he was with MC, most particularly with the infamous cafeteria scene where he was passive agressively setting MC for isolation as all the other scientists were already stewing their jealousy of having MC around, constantly probing for information for Gaster's actions, humbling himself to the point that it made like it was MC's fault, and going to either sabotage or steal MC's equipment.
I'm not sure if he purposively sabotaged the remaining equipment of MC's, most notably their defenses but I feel like it was Captain Sloane ordered for it to be done since only they could carry weapons and they didn't trust MC, because of course they couldn't, they were fucking poaching sirens like?? Sirens are established to be beasts, so why would you poke the hornet's nest? Or maybe beasts don't automatically fight, they just want to be left alone but since humans are greedy, they take and hurt too much to the point that beasts must have evolved with the ingrown hatred towards humans for survival reasons. I wonder if beasts are a bit more partial towards monster since they seem more connected to them (i.e., Dr. Gaster and Dr. Alphys relationship seem so).
Not only that, but I'm hella sure that the students of Director Greenberg must have known what was going through the director's mind. They probably went to the location where MC set up their equipment to see if there really was something worth stealing and got killed as a result. And the scientists began to feel justified over their hatred towards MC because of all the deaths, which fucking is annoying because if I was there I would have slammed their heads with a chair. I'm genuinely curious how Sans managed to sing his siren song inside the facility, but then I recall he was a moth hybrid so is it like a harpy? Because in greek mythology, sirens first started out as harpies with the same haunting alluring voices so maybe that's how Sans managed to get inside and force them to do things like this?
The isolation, hostility-- man was that palpable and suffocating, I don't even know how MC handled it, actually they didn't handle it well, I'm sure if Sans wasn't there MC would have broke. And if MC broke I'm sure Gaster would have raised hell and back for that.
Speaking of Gaster, I am genuinely sure that if MC didn't go to the facility and Sans wasn't in the area, the scientists would be doomed either way. Gaster would have used that place as a hunting ground, a perfect place to feast on especially with how much everyone bends their back for him. I'm genuinely curious about Gaster's point of view of the story, not his opinion over what MC went through (seriously, traumatizing shit especially with the interrogation and abuse they went through, scums, all of them) but what he was doing while he stayed at the main lab. I dunno, I just want more scary dad Gaster whose OP as fuck and hates everyone and everything except for his sunshine of a child whom he would burn the world down for.
I would like to once again, apologize at how long this damn comment became, absolutely adore it-- In fact I love everything you make omg, thank you so much for creating this and the many others! I eagerly wait for any new updates of projects you're interested in!
Sameee, I just saw one of the bulletins that said "Make smart decisions" and I did but I got killed instantly so whoop-de-doo~ Honestly, I tried my best to avoid bad endings since I wanted to romance this deranged siren but at the same time, I was so curious ahahaha
Thank you very, very much for this comment holy tamoli gracious goodness. The Siren AU in general, Arctic!Researcher MC, and Orca!Sans are all 100% Llamagoddess, and I just filled in the world with the lore for beasts/hybrid, dadster, and so on.
LOL Yeah, the deaths were a lot of fun to plan/write. Crazy goes well with crazy, and Dadster panicking over it will never not make me laugh.
Thank you! The Courtship misunderstanding was one of my favorite things to write. I was eager to read reactions when players realized what MC had done.
I appreciate you letting me know about the typos / errors! I hopefully have them fixed up. They work okay on my computer, but I can't test mobile/other devices until I upload them to itch so fingers crossed. (:
I answer some of your spoiler questions in my discord - I'll move them a bit further down since it'll be some time before I upload the bonus scenes (which will be more of Sans' perspective, and shed more light on WD).
SPOILER
Sans' LV has contorted his magic, like it did with WD. Sans' songs can remain in someone's head for up to an hour after he sings to them. That's how the two security guards were caught - Sans sung to one of them to draw out a second one, and then used commanded both of them to take out the security (as he learned from MC talking about crime shows how important that is to destroy).
Had WD known about any of the abuse or mistreatment, he would absolutely raised hell. He has a zero tolerance for MC abuse.
In the bad endings, he'll always hunt Sans down to "rescue" MC. How that rescue attempt ends depends on your MC & how fond they are of Sans.
SGASGAKSDHKASJLD It's okay!! I'm really glad you helped clarify some things, it was especially really interesting to see how you added new things within the AU!
I didn't think the story would playout like that- then again I didn't read the description but I must say that is the best story I've read in a while there were a decent amount of plot twists
Darkpetal your games never let me down. I'm obsessed with Wingding's character in this, him as a dad is 10/10 definitely my favorite version so far. This game was a perfect mix of cute and fucked up. All the bonus moments were great and did an amazing job at painting what Sans and MCs future looks like. Super excited for the updates and whatever you release next! :]
Thank you! Writing Dadster felt nice for a change of pace. He's such a fun character to write so getting to include him in any interation is always a delight.
I'm glad you've enjoyed the game & the bonus scenes. Thank you kindly for your comment.
Awh i love Sans so much, I know he's creepy but I can't help it the heart wants what it wants lol my fav is the bonus story from sans pov it's adorable. Overall i have no critique, I am in love with this game. You did an amazing job, and I am looking forward to any other projects from you! 💖
Just finished playing the game and I absolutely LOVED IT. The ending was so good and I really like the extra scenes as it gave a bit more interesting things about the characters.
Thank you so much for the game and I'm so excited for your other works! 💗
This was great! In a world where all of my favorite/most anticipated IFs seem to either be stuck on hiatus or quietly die (I understand life happening, just makes me sad), here you are consistently churning out lil gems.
Also I will never tire of whatever iteration of sans you adapt or come up with lmao.
*Edit: At the part where you choose to kiss sans, tell him to slow down, or hesistantly accept his affections - the hesistant option cuts off and becomes a dead end where you can't progress.
- "He pulls away to take out something from the pocket of his pants. He holds it out to you.", "You have no doub that Dr. Gaster successfully made the capsule and that it will work."
- "Neither of you are certain.", "His expressoin is dubious, but quickly clears as he puts on a cheerful smile again."
- ""Sop" Sans tells you." On the same page (bad ending #5) I got an error too D:
- "When you awake, you're on a familiar scratchy couch.", "I am sponsoring San's integration into society as a moth."
- "You must have known something like this would happen.", "You reach for San's hand and grasp it."
- "Sans sniffs loudly and steps further in.", ""A beard bubble?" Sans' smile strethces."
- "With only legs, Sans is surprisingly light weight.", "...he was hit in the face with a jelly filled donutthat splattered across him and your back."
- "Sans tastes something sweet on the morning wind.", " He stays hiddden and quiet under the ice as he..."
- The link from Sans' perspective about Doctor Greenberg also has a San's typo.
Dunno if this is a general issue or just my computer, but, when choosing the color of MC's soul, the image doesn't pop up. I chose the purple-grey one. D:
I absolutely love the visual effect of Wingding's siren song. Also omg omg the little orca cursor is so cute
I loved this! I played straight through and got 8/9 bad and the good ending, can’t wait to see what you come out with next!
I would just note that maybe in the trigger warnings to include the gunshot sounds effects as well (maybe under gun violence) and loud noises as well. I had headphones on and they were rather loud but didn’t see any notice of this 💚
So excited i absolutely loved this so much also the bad endings included XD You were right about how much i was going to love this one. Also, Gaster is best papa so freaking adorable.
Heya, just wondering what you use to create your games. I was wanting to create my own that takes on a similar style to the ones I have seen you create. Peace, hugs and cookies everyone ☮🫂🍪.
OMG wait yes, Siren!Sans!!! I was legit just playing through Mafiafell and Slumbertale yesterday to see the new stuff, and then you release something based off my favorite of Llamagoddess's AUs.
I am a huge fan of Llmagoddess work, as much as yours. You making an entire game based on her work is something I didn't expect, but it is done so wonderfully and I can't say how content I am for playing this.
Also I managed to get the good ending. Sans is a guy full of surprises and Gaster too
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Since Horrortale Green was canceled, maybe you really should do something for the AU. Because you write gore and horror like a master. This whole game just proved it.
FUNNY YA SHOULD MENTION THAT BUDDY. . .
SHIT SHE GOT AN IDEA- EVERYONE RUNNN *RUNS*
Enjoyed your interactive fiction! I love Sans and Gaster. The perspective story between Sans and Gaster was super interesting! Thank you for creating this!
Thank you!! I'm very grateful for the comment & for playing my game.
Are you capable of carrying a child?
wdym by that🤨
I was going to say no as in “I want her to be traumatized” but then I went “nahhhh”
wdym wdym. :3 just a simple question!
petal your games are amazing
Thank yuou Box~~
anytime love you ❤️❤️
"But what can your magic do?"
"Make coffee taste like chocolate milk?"
YOU DON"T UNDERSTAND.
I NEED THIS ABILITY.
LMAOOOOO I would agree with you but I hate both lol
What would you want it to turn into then? :p
I honestly have no clue lol
SAME. SAME SAME SAME.
im gonna be honest when i saw that the drivers license scene was requested by van i almost yelled "MAMA YOURE MENTIONED IN ONE OF PETALS GAMES"
woulda destroyed my voice im already sick 😭
benefits of being in discord during development. :p
cant wait to maybe one day be mentioned 🫶
I love Papa Wingding so much!! 😭 ngl makes me tear up for what he's willing to do for his child.
sans is such a menace gosh. understandably traumatized by what happened with his pod. The difference in his character between only seeing it from MC perspective , and actually reading his inner monologue is.... hm. Yes, that is one obsessive dude! /positive
It's fun to see you expanding on more AUs for Undertale :D the way you write each character and the personalized UI for each AU is always wonderful ♡
Thank you for your work always ( *・ω・)ノ
Dadster love his kiddo no matter what.
I'm delighted you've enjoyed reading from his perspective! There's so much of the story I wanted to do, but it didn't make sense for MC to have the information so I can tell it through him. (:
Thank you!! (.づσ▿σ)づ. I appreciate you playing and commenting on my games so much!
Is it a bad sign that I kinda wanted to be a Spider/Naga hybrid, hypnotize those scientists and then melt all of 'em with acidic venom during the ship? =)
Nah, I agree. 100%.
My god this was such a fun IF just like your other ones! This is actually my first time interacting with the Siren AU so I'm unsure how much is your idea and the original AU yet I love how everything was written. It's all so fun tbh ahahaha! Also I want to laugh, Gaster is over here begging us to have a rational thought when dealing with the deadly siren and I'm over here like "Gaster-- I know, man I tried to be smart but I gOT KILLED AT THE VERY START SO YEAH, MAYBE SIMPING IS THE WAY TO LIVE??" Seriously, I laughed at how quick I died.
But I also love how subtle the horror is. While Sans committing these murderous acts is pretty visceral, there were still many mysterious about the deaths and so on, especially regarding the email and the second deaths because man, I too wonder what happened there, or if Sans really was diverting MC's focus because Dr. Gaster did say sirens (orca sirens) were downright intelligent. I also liked how it wasn't just Sans who was a malevolent entity in MC's life (depending on your choices, his attitude can change but at the very start he is malevolent). The scientists were all downright hostile and the security forces were just apathetic. It didn't help that the director was... questionable. And how Gaster spoke up at the ending in the bonus scenes with Sans' perspectives, it truly feels like they lucked out with having MC visit.
One of the things I kinda hoped was elaborated was MC doing some scientist mumbo jumbo things, just to display that yes, they are competent in their work and that they are justified for feeling angry at being undermined by the other scientists. It could have been another fun bonding moment with Sans as they talk about things, maybe Sans explain to MC how he uses the stars as navigation tools and share mythological stories regarding the stars while MC gushes about magic readings and whatnot.
Yet despite all that, I was immediately enthralled at this bleak world, moments where my MC was just doing their best was just heartwarming, and their continuous interactions with Sans was just pure (well, as pure as it can be what with the hidden intentions going on). And also like, hehe, reading the courtship ritual of sirens from Gaster, I just realized that both Sans and MC were doing things backwards, and the subtle way it was interweaved in the story is just *chefs kiss*
My god, this miscommunication is genuinely hilarious if it was not deadly at all.
I love the entire section of the bonus scenes, absolutely delightful to have them especially with the AU, it's so interesting to think about the multiple world building. I also would like it if you could include Gaster's point of view, especially with the progression of how he treats MC from a mere annoying stranger to someone so dear to him, as well as his reactions to the bad endings (where MC either gets killed or kidnapped) absolutely heart breaking. And also his view on MC and Sans' relationship, absolutely wonderful opinions ahhaha!
Errors I found:
Below will be spoilers!
Oh my god the reveal of everything. Downright terrifying! The one thing I was confused about was who sent the email of the Director dying because I initially thought it was James because of how he seemed eager to have MC all to himself and being all sleazy, but at the ending portion it looked like he really didn't have any idea of what happened to the Director, that or he's good at hiding it especially since his older brother is in charge of the security. Not only that, but goddamn I wanna sucker punch Director Greenberg and wanna be reluctant to thank Sans for what he did. The director knew what he was doing during the entire time he was with MC, most particularly with the infamous cafeteria scene where he was passive agressively setting MC for isolation as all the other scientists were already stewing their jealousy of having MC around, constantly probing for information for Gaster's actions, humbling himself to the point that it made like it was MC's fault, and going to either sabotage or steal MC's equipment.
I'm not sure if he purposively sabotaged the remaining equipment of MC's, most notably their defenses but I feel like it was Captain Sloane ordered for it to be done since only they could carry weapons and they didn't trust MC, because of course they couldn't, they were fucking poaching sirens like?? Sirens are established to be beasts, so why would you poke the hornet's nest? Or maybe beasts don't automatically fight, they just want to be left alone but since humans are greedy, they take and hurt too much to the point that beasts must have evolved with the ingrown hatred towards humans for survival reasons. I wonder if beasts are a bit more partial towards monster since they seem more connected to them (i.e., Dr. Gaster and Dr. Alphys relationship seem so).
Not only that, but I'm hella sure that the students of Director Greenberg must have known what was going through the director's mind. They probably went to the location where MC set up their equipment to see if there really was something worth stealing and got killed as a result. And the scientists began to feel justified over their hatred towards MC because of all the deaths, which fucking is annoying because if I was there I would have slammed their heads with a chair. I'm genuinely curious how Sans managed to sing his siren song inside the facility, but then I recall he was a moth hybrid so is it like a harpy? Because in greek mythology, sirens first started out as harpies with the same haunting alluring voices so maybe that's how Sans managed to get inside and force them to do things like this?
The isolation, hostility-- man was that palpable and suffocating, I don't even know how MC handled it, actually they didn't handle it well, I'm sure if Sans wasn't there MC would have broke. And if MC broke I'm sure Gaster would have raised hell and back for that.
Speaking of Gaster, I am genuinely sure that if MC didn't go to the facility and Sans wasn't in the area, the scientists would be doomed either way. Gaster would have used that place as a hunting ground, a perfect place to feast on especially with how much everyone bends their back for him. I'm genuinely curious about Gaster's point of view of the story, not his opinion over what MC went through (seriously, traumatizing shit especially with the interrogation and abuse they went through, scums, all of them) but what he was doing while he stayed at the main lab. I dunno, I just want more scary dad Gaster whose OP as fuck and hates everyone and everything except for his sunshine of a child whom he would burn the world down for.
I would like to once again, apologize at how long this damn comment became, absolutely adore it-- In fact I love everything you make omg, thank you so much for creating this and the many others! I eagerly wait for any new updates of projects you're interested in!
You died quickly too? 😂 After that choice I just decided to get all bad endings in order.
Sameee, I just saw one of the bulletins that said "Make smart decisions" and I did but I got killed instantly so whoop-de-doo~ Honestly, I tried my best to avoid bad endings since I wanted to romance this deranged siren but at the same time, I was so curious ahahaha
Riiiight? Same. And I thought being cautious was smart! Looks like we've both got too much into what that sentence said. I feel tricked lmao.
YOU LEAVE ME SPEECHLESS LAKSJDFLKAJSDF
Thank you very, very much for this comment holy tamoli gracious goodness. The Siren AU in general, Arctic!Researcher MC, and Orca!Sans are all 100% Llamagoddess, and I just filled in the world with the lore for beasts/hybrid, dadster, and so on.
LOL Yeah, the deaths were a lot of fun to plan/write. Crazy goes well with crazy, and Dadster panicking over it will never not make me laugh.
Thank you! The Courtship misunderstanding was one of my favorite things to write. I was eager to read reactions when players realized what MC had done.
I appreciate you letting me know about the typos / errors! I hopefully have them fixed up. They work okay on my computer, but I can't test mobile/other devices until I upload them to itch so fingers crossed. (:
I answer some of your spoiler questions in my discord - I'll move them a bit further down since it'll be some time before I upload the bonus scenes (which will be more of Sans' perspective, and shed more light on WD).
SPOILER
Sans' LV has contorted his magic, like it did with WD. Sans' songs can remain in someone's head for up to an hour after he sings to them. That's how the two security guards were caught - Sans sung to one of them to draw out a second one, and then used commanded both of them to take out the security (as he learned from MC talking about crime shows how important that is to destroy).
Had WD known about any of the abuse or mistreatment, he would absolutely raised hell. He has a zero tolerance for MC abuse.
In the bad endings, he'll always hunt Sans down to "rescue" MC. How that rescue attempt ends depends on your MC & how fond they are of Sans.SGASGAKSDHKASJLD It's okay!! I'm really glad you helped clarify some things, it was especially really interesting to see how you added new things within the AU!
Are you capable of carrying a child?
Me: I- oh no.
LOL
Whatd'ya mean OH NO?? :p
I think we both know where you're going with this... I gots my eye on you... don't you forget it...
I didn't think the story would playout like that- then again I didn't read the description but I must say that is the best story I've read in a while there were a decent amount of plot twists
can you make a part 2?
Glad to surprise you with the twists!
Re part 2 - I will do more bonus scenes, but I don't plan to do another game entirely for Siren!Sans.
Darkpetal your games never let me down. I'm obsessed with Wingding's character in this, him as a dad is 10/10 definitely my favorite version so far. This game was a perfect mix of cute and fucked up. All the bonus moments were great and did an amazing job at painting what Sans and MCs future looks like. Super excited for the updates and whatever you release next! :]
Thank you! Writing Dadster felt nice for a change of pace. He's such a fun character to write so getting to include him in any interation is always a delight.
I'm glad you've enjoyed the game & the bonus scenes. Thank you kindly for your comment.
Awh i love Sans so much, I know he's creepy but I can't help it the heart wants what it wants lol my fav is the bonus story from sans pov it's adorable. Overall i have no critique, I am in love with this game. You did an amazing job, and I am looking forward to any other projects from you! 💖
Sans is a precious lil siren who is so so kind and not at all creepy. :p
Thank you very much for playing & commenting on this game!!
How long does it take to complete?
Like to finish playing, or to make the game start to finish?
play the game start to finish
Love you Darkpetal
i was scrolling thru just to see how long this is supposed to be, because me with adhd gets distracted fast...
then i see this and im like
awoop jump scare
Thank you Iris. <3 <3 <3
Cool honestly. Some bugs like the soul not appearing or errors when you run away from sans when he kills everyone but other than those. This is great!
Thank you very much!! Hopefully all those errors will be fixed in today's update.
Just finished playing the game and I absolutely LOVED IT. The ending was so good and I really like the extra scenes as it gave a bit more interesting things about the characters.
Thank you so much for the game and I'm so excited for your other works! 💗
THANK YOU!! I really appreciate you playing the game and leaving a comment.
This was great! In a world where all of my favorite/most anticipated IFs seem to either be stuck on hiatus or quietly die (I understand life happening, just makes me sad), here you are consistently churning out lil gems.
Also I will never tire of whatever iteration of sans you adapt or come up with lmao.
*Edit: At the part where you choose to kiss sans, tell him to slow down, or hesistantly accept his affections - the hesistant option cuts off and becomes a dead end where you can't progress.
Fingers crossed our favorite IFs will either update again, or more people will be interested in making IFs so we can fill the world with their fun!
Heh thank you!
Yes~ that part has been fixed and will reflect in today's update.
Darkpetal16: posts new update or game
Me: everyone get out of the way, this is now the most important thing in my life
for real though I loved this so much ldkgjlkjdlfkg AHHHHHH heart eyes heart eyes HEART EYES!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! <3 <3 <3
Wow. I have no words to describe how much I love this.
<3 Thank you!!
Hihi!! Here are the typos I found!!
- "He pulls away to take out something from the pocket of his pants. He holds it out to you.", "You have no doub that Dr. Gaster successfully made the capsule and that it will work."
- "Neither of you are certain.", "His expressoin is dubious, but quickly clears as he puts on a cheerful smile again."
- ""Sop" Sans tells you." On the same page (bad ending #5) I got an error too D:
- "When you awake, you're on a familiar scratchy couch.", "I am sponsoring San's integration into society as a moth."
- "You must have known something like this would happen.", "You reach for San's hand and grasp it."
- "Sans sniffs loudly and steps further in.", ""A beard bubble?" Sans' smile strethces."
- "With only legs, Sans is surprisingly light weight.", "...he was hit in the face with a jelly filled donutthat splattered across him and your back."
- "Sans tastes something sweet on the morning wind.", " He stays hiddden and quiet under the ice as he..."
- The link from Sans' perspective about Doctor Greenberg also has a San's typo.
Dunno if this is a general issue or just my computer, but, when choosing the color of MC's soul, the image doesn't pop up. I chose the purple-grey one. D:
I absolutely love the visual effect of Wingding's siren song. Also omg omg the little orca cursor is so cute
Oh Dawn, you continue to be one of my most favorite people in the world.
I think I've got all the typos figured out! Thank you so much for your help again.
Yes, the hearts weren't loading right ~ but they will work in today's update.
I loved this! I played straight through and got 8/9 bad and the good ending, can’t wait to see what you come out with next!
I would just note that maybe in the trigger warnings to include the gunshot sounds effects as well (maybe under gun violence) and loud noises as well. I had headphones on and they were rather loud but didn’t see any notice of this 💚
So excited i absolutely loved this so much also the bad endings included XD You were right about how much i was going to love this one. Also, Gaster is best papa so freaking adorable.
Thank you so much for doing a playthrough of this Twinkle!! Hearing your vehement hate of the humans was hilarious.
It would be cool if we got an interaction with dad gaster reaction to pregnacy
Like How would he react ?
That's definitely on the list of bonus scenes to add! :D!
The save feature doesn't work, is that intentional?
Yeah the window is like wrongly sized so it goes off screen and you can't scroll it.
Nope! Hopefully this new update will work okay for mobile users, I think I figured out the issue. (:
I love this and every other game you have made so far! It is an amazing experience to play and feel apart of each game! Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much!!;; I'm so happy you're enjoying them.
Heya, just wondering what you use to create your games. I was wanting to create my own that takes on a similar style to the ones I have seen you create. Peace, hugs and cookies everyone ☮🫂🍪.
all of darkpetals games are twine games
Thank you for the helping hand, I really appreciate it 😁 (Unrelated but I love your pfp, Welcome Home is so good)
happy to help, and yes!!! i love welcome home:)
Hi!!!! Omg i couldn't put it down!!! Tysm!!! Love it
sans my beloved~
My dad was the best & i love him! That last revelation about him really took me by surprise!!!loved it🖤
tysm for your work and for sharing it💗💗💗
Loved all the endings(pretty sure i got all of them🤔) and the extras scenes!!!! Omg!!! Loved those so much!
Thank youuu!!!!
Yes! Beloved Sans!
Dadster best dad.
thank you so much for playing & commenting. (: I'm happy you enjoyed the ending and extra scenes.
I'm blushing screaming crying and I haven't even started bro
hhhhhhh thank you!!
How do you get the good ending
just keep trying to be with sans and dont act scared, also when the gunshots are fired make sure to go with them
ok thanks
OMG wait yes, Siren!Sans!!! I was legit just playing through Mafiafell and Slumbertale yesterday to see the new stuff, and then you release something based off my favorite of Llamagoddess's AUs.
:D! The Siren AU is definitely one of my favorite ones, I was so delighted when I got permission to use.
WhOoooOh! Siren sans! So cool! I wonder what happens if I foll- AAAAAHHH
LOL, hope the fall wasn't too bad!
I am a huge fan of Llmagoddess work, as much as yours. You making an entire game based on her work is something I didn't expect, but it is done so wonderfully and I can't say how content I am for playing this.
Also I managed to get the good ending. Sans is a guy full of surprises
and Gaster tooYES! I LOVE HER WORK TOO! Thank you very much for playing & commenting.
Love it ! I got 3 different endings for now and it was really great.
Loved the characters (well except the... Ok I loved 3 characters others than MC. Fine., loved the characterization, loved how works the story.
You can learn many different things according to the path you chose. The ending 8 : Mated was great !
And the bonus stories were cute and enlightening.
Poor Sans. Definitely happy to have stick with him to the end.
And our dear Dr... Tut tut... Did you lie to us ? Well I guess it's another story !
Great game ! I totally recommend it ! And I'm definitely gonna play the other endings ** Thanks for this gem !
How many times did I use the word great ? You see what you made me do ? Ah ah ah ~
Thank you very very much!! I'm delighted you enjoyed the different choices.
just finished playing and it was AMAZING, reading one of your stories always puts me in a good mod <3
I appreciate this! I'm so glad to put you in a good mood. (:
LOOOK AT ME DROPPING MY WORKLOAD JUST TO PLAY SUCH FINE GAME MADE MY FAVOURITE CREATOR
THANK YOU THANK YOU!!
Sheesshh, i love it so much. I love all your stories 🥰🥰😍
Thank you!!
i finished 3 endings...
AND ALL OF THEM WERE TERRIFYING MOM PLEASE PICK ME UP 😭😭
i got the "good" ending and i need a minute holy shit
the quotation marks were NECESSARY
on the bonuses, there are a lot of pronoun errors, (i play as a man btw) more specifically the possessive pronoun (it uses her instead of his)
yup, it also happens a lot using neutral pronouns in the bonus part
this has been fixed up and will be posted in the udpate today!
LMAO NECESSARY HUH
I JUST GOT THE EMAIL AND THE WAY I SPRINTED
I HOPE YOU DIDN'T HURT YOURSELF ON THE WAY??
Ohh my i just finished playing underswap and then this (ﾟ∀ﾟ 三 ﾟ∀ﾟ)??
Thank you for this wonderful blessing Darkpetal16 _ )_ (*つ▽`)っ
YAY!! Thank you so much for playing & commenting!!