This is amazing. I really love it! Your writing is so captivating and I love the characters. I wish it never ended!! have you thought about adding NSFW themes in your stories?
YESSSSSSSSSSS omg this was genuinely so good, and all the bad endings slap. I absolutely KILL for the other perspective at the end. OOF. This is the first game of yours I've played in a while and, as usual, i was not disappointed. HOOO omg time to play through the rest of your games.
okay i was nervous to try this at first i didnt know much about the au but i adore the fandom and have enjoyed several of the novels/games made by this creator. But i was pleasantly overjoyed to play and read all of this every bit of this had me hooked and the ending bonuses where just adorable i cant stress enough how much i want to thank Darkpetal16 for making these kinds of games and i cant wait to see everything thats coming next
BEST THING genuinely did not think I'd enjoy it this much! at first i was thinking "ok its been years since i had any sort of attraction for any sans, though i still do really like gaster, not in any romantic sense but just as a, he's silly and dorky and cute but also spooky way. I'll play this for dadster" and by the end i was thinking "holy freaking shirtballs! i desperately need more of this! more of the story from sans's point of view! more content from after the story! just more of this!" so, yeah very much enjoyed and i truly hope you make more bonus content or more stories!
There's A LOT of compliments, praises and comments I want to write here about the immersed world building, characters, about main character's reaction of everything and the problems that can relate to daily life but I'm not vast in vocabulary as I am not an eng speaker. But I just want to let you know, I read many interactive novels and fanfics, this is my favourite one so far in this year.
I have zero knowledge in Undertale and thanks to this work, I'm now fully interested. 🙇🏻♀️
oh my god i just went through the whole thing in one night and oh my g o d.i love gaster he almost made me cry and i love our boy and i love the end and i havent been in the fandom in years but im gonna come back to this again oh my gosh this is a blessing
I had literally ZERO exposure to Undertale until I found your games, and now I am OBSESSED. I lovelovelove them. Well-written, well-crafted, just all around amazing. And I can't get enough of the bonus stories, they're so wholesome and cute and full of surprises.
I still haven't played Undertale, so your games are basically my canon at this point, and I am very much okay with that. ALSO HOLY SHIT I JUST SAW A NEW GAME ON YOUR PAGE GOTTA GO BYEEEE <3
Haha glad I'm not the only one! It's been really fun discovering the world and the characters in so many different iterations, and through such a fun medium.
This is amazing I love it, but, I'm deaddd and keep dying, and I don't know what to do. I was lured by Sans when I was trying to tell him I was leaving, can anybody help??
Is it the part where it says [you feel scared]? Because if it is then you just have to wait until another option shows up and you click [you don't want to leave Sans] and I think that should do it. GL! Hope this helped! (Or you already figured it out.)
God this was a ride in the best way possible. my gay ass really lucked out LMAO but anyways this was such a delight to read!! I love the fact that we were basically adopted by Dadster !!! I love the Father moments QWQ especially at the start where he was asking bout the stuff we needed to pack. Now I can just imagine a scene where MC jokingly says "Okay, Dad." and Gaster be like: *in tears* you see me as a father???
joking aside, I have to say, the atmosphere while reading this with headphones on was immaculate. even when my eyes were giving up on me i COULD NOT TAKE AWAY MY EYES FROM THE SCREEN!!! i needed to read it and FINISH IT ALL THE WAY. Suffice to say, it was very satisfying to get to the ending and read all the cute bonus scenes <3
love sirens <3
- from, a gay monster-romancer who absolutely adores "The Shape of Water"
p.s: there are some pronoun errors in a few of the paragraphs in some of the bonus scenes [Mostly the ones in Sans's Perspective]. I chose the option that would refer to the MC with he/him and was slightly confused as to why there were she/her instead ^^ this is just a minor nitpick though, other than that, this game is perfect and flawless and it deserves an oscar for fanfiction <3
first time ever making a comment on this website [more will follow as I shall comment on your other works]. at first I was just searching for dating sims, reading the tiny lil summary that popped on the side. didn't even realize it was an undertale au. I simply saw catching the attention of a deranged siren and I was hooked instantly. it was not until I started did I realize that it was undertale.
I am rambling a bit, but I was much to drawn in by chance of a yandere siren, and more so when looking up an image for Siren!Sans. and having an visual really drew me in strongly as a siren's call would lure you to a bad end.
one thing I enjoyed right away during the character customization was the player being able to choose their soul trait. this led me to become hooked for Kindness for the entire game and others if it was an option.
for me, I am not the best with visualizing written bits due to not being able to visualize in my head. yet how the game was written, and the story went brought upon having many different feelings, as if I were actually feeling as the character I controlled. from the interactions with Sans [which I loved the visuals given to whenever he spoke, hovering over it had me staring for a couple of minutes as the colors changed] to the relationships that progressed from beginning to end.
speaking on fancy bits to text, I felt like a moth to a flame with how you did the effect for Gaster's text. quite surprised me on the first go [I played the game a second time because I am addicted] and was excited when seeing it in your other works.
honestly this game itself has both brought back into loving undertale [and the lazy bones known as Sans] and also become a bit of a comfort with how you've written Siren!Sans in the game. can't lie when playing your other works, and hearing some voiced parts...I could only imagine a voice being attached to this siren skeleton and I felt giddy as all heck.
after the ending, seeing the bonuses was a delight, and I loved each and every bit to absolute death. with Sans' pov with the encounters with the other humans made me with to see how perspective with the others as I was so curious with what deaths were because of what they did or what they said about the character
also biscuit...I say the word a whole lot and could only snicker using it as my go-to curse word in your works X33
im literally dying. i love sirens and orcas, and this is exactly what i would expect from a romance with one!!!! the gore is also so well written, its one of my favorite parts about this!!! and the extra scenes?? theyre to die for omfg...... i think ive already finished all of your games and imo this is part of the best ones!! i also love that you made w.d. have selective mutism :)) it makes me feel very seen
Out of all of your games I have to say this is my favorite! It's the perfect mix of wholesome and horror! And I love how you added bonuses at the end (like sans' perspective! That was my favorite one!) I also really love good old papa wingding, such a wholesome relationship! It's all so unique and creative! Keep up the good work!! ❤️
oh my god, this game is so amazingly eerie + with a yandere in it? Great writing, i felt the horror. The music adds to the atmosphere, too. I am looking forward to more :´´) also, i found it very neat that Sans singing was impossible to resist because that made the threat and horror of it all even better and made it feel more real
I have to say considering i have now explored everything to this game. This was so a wonderful journey and these bad endings omg Petal congrats I loved every moment of this experience. Another rollercoaster ride for me . Also always love covering your games Petal always excited to cover more >w< excited for more of sans pov. p.s you broke me twice XD in this one and got me even more angry at a character then i was at uf sans 100/10 for me will go through it all over again.
i finally got to finish this and it was amazing. i loved the extras you through in their i just have a big question is their going to be anymore sans povs or no.
I just played it and wow, there is no way out of Sans forcing us to listen to his singing- the amount of gore and murder you put in this is perfect. And it’s so funny how the ‘ba-thump’ you added matches my heartbeat, though mine is going faster cause of the fear and exhilaration I felt throughout the story. I like how your choices do actually matter throughout, for example the exercise one where you’re asked if you’re in shape or not. And then later when one of the scientists chase you out before dying by Sans. After those three died, Eliza, Field, and the other guy, it wasn’t hard for me to point out that it was Sans. Well done once again. Though I was really hoping to see a slow burn where Sans is actually nice but of course my man is just like the bitch in the Fanfiction I mentioned. You’re a such a great writer and game developer, dude- I also love the music aha and how it affected the mood of the story
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Tarde en darme cuenta las referencias a Undertale, y cuando lo note fue en el final. 10/10
Ill be honest loved the game I really did, although, I accidently completed it on my first try
kiss men :3
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This is amazing. I really love it! Your writing is so captivating and I love the characters. I wish it never ended!!
have you thought about adding NSFW themes inyour stories?in what world is this an appropriate question
YESSSSSSSSSSS omg this was genuinely so good, and all the bad endings slap. I absolutely KILL for the other perspective at the end. OOF. This is the first game of yours I've played in a while and, as usual, i was not disappointed. HOOO omg time to play through the rest of your games.
okay i was nervous to try this at first i didnt know much about the au but i adore the fandom and have enjoyed several of the novels/games made by this creator. But i was pleasantly overjoyed to play and read all of this every bit of this had me hooked and the ending bonuses where just adorable i cant stress enough how much i want to thank Darkpetal16 for making these kinds of games and i cant wait to see everything thats coming next
BEST THING genuinely did not think I'd enjoy it this much! at first i was thinking "ok its been years since i had any sort of attraction for any sans, though i still do really like gaster, not in any romantic sense but just as a, he's silly and dorky and cute but also spooky way. I'll play this for dadster" and by the end i was thinking "holy freaking shirtballs! i desperately need more of this! more of the story from sans's point of view! more content from after the story! just more of this!" so, yeah very much enjoyed and i truly hope you make more bonus content or more stories!
it should be antarctic, not artic, if it's the south pole...
Love this!
Dadster content <3
Love him
FR LOVE THIS!!! Dadster stole my heart since the moment i started playing. <3
I LOVE THISSSS!!!! ❤️❤️❤️💋💋💋💋
I love this story so much! thank you!
Dadster has my whole heart <33
There's A LOT of compliments, praises and comments I want to write here about the immersed world building, characters, about main character's reaction of everything and the problems that can relate to daily life but I'm not vast in vocabulary as I am not an eng speaker. But I just want to let you know, I read many interactive novels and fanfics, this is my favourite one so far in this year.
I have zero knowledge in Undertale and thanks to this work, I'm now fully interested. 🙇🏻♀️
Hi Darkpetal! Didn't see it in the desc. but, is the gender of the RO customizable? TYSM <3
Yes, it is :)
is it? it's always a guy for me
Huh, I must have misread the question. No, it isn't.
Idk wut RO means but ig they meant Sans-?
Yeah, they do. I just misread the question.
got the good ending the first try and i shit you not i cried like 12 times your writing is always so good :')
oh my god i just went through the whole thing in one night and oh my g o d.i love gaster he almost made me cry and i love our boy and i love the end and i havent been in the fandom in years but im gonna come back to this again oh my gosh this is a blessing
fave bonus ending is the tell sans your pregnant.
I had literally ZERO exposure to Undertale until I found your games, and now I am OBSESSED. I lovelovelove them. Well-written, well-crafted, just all around amazing. And I can't get enough of the bonus stories, they're so wholesome and cute and full of surprises.
I still haven't played Undertale, so your games are basically my canon at this point, and I am very much okay with that. ALSO HOLY SHIT I JUST SAW A NEW GAME ON YOUR PAGE GOTTA GO BYEEEE <3
i'm not the creator, but this is literally me-- i've played all of your games and not undertale yet--
Haha glad I'm not the only one! It's been really fun discovering the world and the characters in so many different iterations, and through such a fun medium.
me too
I’m genuinely crying
This is an incredible game, everything is so well thought, i’m impressed…
I just love this so much
I LOVE THIS.
I got mated ending. So cute with the references from undertales
This is amazing I love it, but, I'm deaddd and keep dying, and I don't know what to do. I was lured by Sans when I was trying to tell him I was leaving, can anybody help??
Is it the part where it says [you feel scared]? Because if it is then you just have to wait until another option shows up and you click [you don't want to leave Sans] and I think that should do it. GL! Hope this helped! (Or you already figured it out.)
This is AMAZING!!! I loved every moment!!
How do you learn to write stories so well?
God this was a ride in the best way possible. my gay ass really lucked out LMAO but anyways this was such a delight to read!! I love the fact that we were basically adopted by Dadster !!! I love the Father moments QWQ especially at the start where he was asking bout the stuff we needed to pack. Now I can just imagine a scene where MC jokingly says "Okay, Dad." and Gaster be like: *in tears* you see me as a father???
joking aside, I have to say, the atmosphere while reading this with headphones on was immaculate. even when my eyes were giving up on me i COULD NOT TAKE AWAY MY EYES FROM THE SCREEN!!! i needed to read it and FINISH IT ALL THE WAY. Suffice to say, it was very satisfying to get to the ending and read all the cute bonus scenes <3
love sirens <3
- from, a gay monster-romancer who absolutely adores "The Shape of Water"
p.s: there are some pronoun errors in a few of the paragraphs in some of the bonus scenes [Mostly the ones in Sans's Perspective]. I chose the option that would refer to the MC with he/him and was slightly confused as to why there were she/her instead ^^ this is just a minor nitpick though, other than that, this game is perfect and flawless and it deserves an oscar for fanfiction <3
first time ever making a comment on this website [more will follow as I shall comment on your other works]. at first I was just searching for dating sims, reading the tiny lil summary that popped on the side. didn't even realize it was an undertale au. I simply saw catching the attention of a deranged siren and I was hooked instantly. it was not until I started did I realize that it was undertale.
I am rambling a bit, but I was much to drawn in by chance of a yandere siren, and more so when looking up an image for Siren!Sans. and having an visual really drew me in strongly as a siren's call would lure you to a bad end.
one thing I enjoyed right away during the character customization was the player being able to choose their soul trait. this led me to become hooked for Kindness for the entire game and others if it was an option.
for me, I am not the best with visualizing written bits due to not being able to visualize in my head. yet how the game was written, and the story went brought upon having many different feelings, as if I were actually feeling as the character I controlled. from the interactions with Sans [which I loved the visuals given to whenever he spoke, hovering over it had me staring for a couple of minutes as the colors changed] to the relationships that progressed from beginning to end.
speaking on fancy bits to text, I felt like a moth to a flame with how you did the effect for Gaster's text. quite surprised me on the first go [I played the game a second time because I am addicted] and was excited when seeing it in your other works.
honestly this game itself has both brought back into loving undertale [and the lazy bones known as Sans] and also become a bit of a comfort with how you've written Siren!Sans in the game. can't lie when playing your other works, and hearing some voiced parts...I could only imagine a voice being attached to this siren skeleton and I felt giddy as all heck.
after the ending, seeing the bonuses was a delight, and I loved each and every bit to absolute death. with Sans' pov with the encounters with the other humans made me with to see how perspective with the others as I was so curious with what deaths were because of what they did or what they said about the character
also biscuit...I say the word a whole lot and could only snicker using it as my go-to curse word in your works X33
I'm so proud of myself for getting the good ending on the first try ;u;
im literally dying. i love sirens and orcas, and this is exactly what i would expect from a romance with one!!!! the gore is also so well written, its one of my favorite parts about this!!! and the extra scenes?? theyre to die for omfg...... i think ive already finished all of your games and imo this is part of the best ones!! i also love that you made w.d. have selective mutism :)) it makes me feel very seen
OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD. i loved it as short as it was it was really enjoyable keep up the good work :
wait just realized this was an undertail au i cannot belive i didnt realize lmao
Out of all of your games I have to say this is my favorite! It's the perfect mix of wholesome and horror! And I love how you added bonuses at the end (like sans' perspective! That was my favorite one!) I also really love good old papa wingding, such a wholesome relationship! It's all so unique and creative! Keep up the good work!! ❤️
I love reading everything in his perspective I definitely need more of that!
This is so cool!
I've gone through it quite a few times but each time is still so cool! I love the structure of everything and it's amazing!
Also getting adopted by Gaster is just perfect
Anyways imma stop typing before I start rambling about how I need a dadster in my life lol
This story was both gruesome and wholesome! I love Sans! xD
I love the bonus stories too! I also wish we got to find out about the "motive" hehehehe
i just now realized that this is a undertale fangame
why the fuck is sans a siren
it's an au bro wtf are you on abt
this game reminds me of my childhood
Kinda hard to feel sorry for those peeps getting killed when they were such jerks.
oh my god, this game is so amazingly eerie + with a yandere in it? Great writing, i felt the horror. The music adds to the atmosphere, too. I am looking forward to more :´´) also, i found it very neat that Sans singing was impossible to resist because that made the threat and horror of it all even better and made it feel more real
I have to say considering i have now explored everything to this game. This was so a wonderful journey and these bad endings omg Petal congrats I loved every moment of this experience. Another rollercoaster ride for me . Also always love covering your games Petal always excited to cover more >w< excited for more of sans pov. p.s you broke me twice XD in this one and got me even more angry at a character then i was at uf sans 100/10 for me will go through it all over again.
i finally got to finish this and it was amazing. i loved the extras you through in their i just have a big question is their going to be anymore sans povs or no.
I just played it and wow, there is no way out of Sans forcing us to listen to his singing- the amount of gore and murder you put in this is perfect. And it’s so funny how the ‘ba-thump’ you added matches my heartbeat, though mine is going faster cause of the fear and exhilaration I felt throughout the story. I like how your choices do actually matter throughout, for example the exercise one where you’re asked if you’re in shape or not. And then later when one of the scientists chase you out before dying by Sans. After those three died, Eliza, Field, and the other guy, it wasn’t hard for me to point out that it was Sans. Well done once again. Though I was really hoping to see a slow burn where Sans is actually nice but of course my man is just like the bitch in the Fanfiction I mentioned. You’re a such a great writer and game developer, dude- I also love the music aha and how it affected the mood of the story
Thank you very kindly~
I really appreciate your comment and you playing my game. (: this was a lot of fun to make, and I'm so happy it can be enjoyed.
Actually there is a way to make Sans to not force you to listen to his song and actually getting in a relationship with him
h-how? 😭 please- I need this man-