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Hihi!! Here are the typos I found!!

- "He pulls away to take out something from the pocket of his pants. He holds it out to you.", "You have no doub that Dr. Gaster successfully made the capsule and that it will work."

- "Neither of you are certain.", "His expressoin is dubious, but quickly clears as he puts on a cheerful smile again."

- ""Sop" Sans tells you." On the same page (bad ending #5) I got an error too D:



- "When you awake, you're on a familiar scratchy couch.", "I am sponsoring San's integration into society as a moth."

- "You must have known something like this would happen.", "You reach for San's hand and grasp it."

- "Sans sniffs loudly and steps further in.", ""A beard bubble?" Sans' smile strethces."

- "With only legs, Sans is surprisingly light weight.", "...he was hit in the face with a jelly filled donutthat splattered across him and your back."

- "Sans tastes something sweet on the morning wind.", " He stays hiddden and quiet under the ice as he..."

- The link from Sans' perspective about Doctor Greenberg also has a San's typo.


Dunno if this is a general issue or just my computer, but, when choosing the color of MC's soul, the image doesn't pop up. I chose the purple-grey one. D:

I absolutely love the visual effect of Wingding's siren song. Also omg omg the little orca cursor is so cute

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Oh Dawn, you continue to be one of my most favorite people in the world.

I think I've got all the typos figured out! Thank you so much for your help again. 

Yes, the hearts weren't loading right ~ but they will work in today's update. 

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I loved this! I played straight through and got 8/9 bad and the good ending, can’t wait to see what you come out with next! 

I would just note that maybe in the trigger warnings to include the gunshot sounds effects as well (maybe under gun violence) and loud noises as well. I had headphones on and they were rather loud but didn’t see any notice of this 💚

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So excited i absolutely loved this so much also the bad endings included XD You were right about how much i was going to love this one. Also, Gaster is best papa so freaking adorable.

Thank you so much for doing a playthrough of this Twinkle!! Hearing your vehement hate of the humans was hilarious. 

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It would be cool if we got an interaction with dad gaster reaction to pregnacy

Like How would he react ? 

That's definitely on the list of bonus scenes to add! :D! 

The save feature doesn't work, is that intentional?

Yeah the window is like wrongly sized so it goes off screen and you can't scroll it. 

Nope! Hopefully this new update will work okay for mobile users, I think I figured out the issue. (:

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I love this and every other game you have made so far! It is an amazing experience to play and feel apart of each game! Keep up the good work!

Thank you very much!!;; I'm so happy you're enjoying them.

Heya, just wondering what you use to create your games. I was wanting to create my own that takes on a similar style to the ones I have seen you create. Peace, hugs and cookies everyone ☮🫂🍪.

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all of darkpetals games are twine games

Thank you for the helping hand, I really appreciate it 😁 (Unrelated but I love your pfp, Welcome Home is so good)

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happy to help, and yes!!! i love welcome home:)

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Hi!!!! Omg i couldn't put it down!!! Tysm!!! Love it

sans my beloved~ 

My dad was the best & i love him! That last revelation about him really took me by surprise!!!loved it🖤

tysm for your work and for sharing it💗💗💗

Loved all the endings(pretty sure i got all of them🤔) and the extras scenes!!!! Omg!!! Loved those so much!

Thank youuu!!!!

Yes! Beloved Sans!

Dadster best dad. 

thank you so much for playing & commenting. (: I'm happy you enjoyed the ending and extra scenes. 

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I'm blushing screaming crying and I haven't even started bro

hhhhhhh thank you!!

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How do you get the good ending

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just keep trying to be with sans and dont act scared, also when the gunshots are fired make sure to go with them

ok thanks 

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OMG wait yes, Siren!Sans!!! I was legit just playing through Mafiafell and Slumbertale yesterday to see the new stuff, and then you release something based off my favorite of Llamagoddess's AUs.

:D! The Siren AU is definitely one of my favorite ones, I was so delighted when I got permission to use. 

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WhOoooOh! Siren sans! So cool! I wonder what happens if I foll- AAAAAHHH

LOL, hope the fall wasn't too bad!

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I am a huge fan of Llmagoddess work, as much as yours. You making an entire game based on her work is something I didn't expect, but it is done so wonderfully and I can't say how content I am for playing this.

Also I managed to get the good ending. Sans is a guy full of surprises and Gaster too

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YES! I LOVE HER WORK TOO! Thank you very much for playing & commenting. 

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Love it ! I got 3 different endings for now and it was really great.

Loved the characters (well except the... Ok I loved 3 characters others than MC. Fine., loved the characterization, loved how works the story.

You can learn many different things according to the path you chose. The ending 8 : Mated was great !

And the bonus stories were cute and enlightening.

Poor Sans. Definitely happy to have stick with him to the end.

And our dear Dr... Tut tut... Did you lie to us ? Well I guess it's another story !

Great game ! I totally recommend it ! And I'm definitely gonna play the other endings ** Thanks for this gem !

How many times did I use the word great ? You see what you made me do ? Ah ah ah ~

Thank you very very much!! I'm delighted you enjoyed the different choices. 

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just finished playing and it was AMAZING, reading one of your stories always puts me in a good mod <3

I appreciate this! I'm so glad to put you in a good mood. (: 

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LOOOK AT ME DROPPING MY WORKLOAD JUST TO PLAY SUCH FINE GAME MADE MY FAVOURITE CREATOR 

THANK YOU THANK YOU!!

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Sheesshh, i love it so much. I love all your stories 🥰🥰😍

Thank you!!

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i finished 3 endings...


AND ALL OF THEM WERE TERRIFYING MOM PLEASE PICK ME UP 😭😭

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i got the "good" ending and i need a minute holy shit

the quotation marks were NECESSARY

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on the bonuses, there are a lot of pronoun errors, (i play as a man btw) more specifically the possessive pronoun (it uses her instead of his)

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yup, it also happens a lot using neutral pronouns in the bonus part

this has been fixed up and will be posted in the udpate today!

LMAO NECESSARY HUH

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I JUST GOT THE EMAIL AND THE WAY I SPRINTED

I HOPE YOU DIDN'T HURT YOURSELF ON THE WAY??

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Ohh my i just finished playing underswap and then this (゚∀゚ 三 ゚∀゚)??

Thank you for this wonderful blessing Darkpetal16 _     )_ (*つ▽`)っ

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YAY!! Thank you so much for playing & commenting!! 

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