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This story made me freaking sad, i was a sobbing mess every time the scene of the dead monsters pop up. i am never really the one to handle deaths properly so you can guess that it didnt really end well with me reading it, i was slobbering and screaming in my pillow in sorrow and grief- the way it made me feel so hollow, as if i was one with the character mourning it's just sad so fucking sad. each of their interaction made me realized how lonely i am-how i needed their comfort, the feeling of being welcomed, and the warm cosy feeling that ill probably never experience in real life. omfgg it realllyyy made me cry for 1 hour LOLOLOL this IF really became my most treasure one after underfell, such a masterpiece petal!!! please continue to feed us more of these content<333 

Both happy and sad that it affected you so deeply. Thank you for immersing yourself in my story and opening your heart to it. I hope the ending eased some of that ache. 

Thank you so much for playing and commenting this. :)

Also I will do my best! :D 

literally cried several times going through the story, thank you for this masterpiec

thank you. i hope the ending soothed the angst going through the story.

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this was so frigggin' adorable i love love love LOVE ittttt thank you for a yet another masterpiece <3

Thank you thank you thank you <3 

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Blushing, giggling, kicking my feet at how cute this is

And the walkthrough is super handy too!

Thank you so much for your hard work! And you're so fast with everything too, no other creator makes me this happy I swear you're spoiling us 💖💖

I agree w/ you 😌

Fufu thank you so much!


I am to please and spoil, I'm happy my works can do both. 


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It was a battle but I did it... I won his heart ^-^ took me about 2 whole days lol but worth the happy ending! can not wait for you to finish the Mafia one now!

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Congratulations!! I'm happy that you find the ending worth the struggle.


I also cannot wait to finish Mafiafell. :)

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I literally got an account to say your games are amazing and I love replaying them!!!! Can't wait to see what more games you make and for chapter 5 of mafiafell :)!!!!

Welcome to itchio!! Thank you so much for joining so you can replay. 


I keep adding stuff to chapter 5 to do haha. Although the plan is still to release this month! :)

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I just got the good end!!! very adorabe i love it

Yay for the good end! Thank you so much for playing. 

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Also i had an idea for the bonus-scene.When the whole bossmonster group assembles to save our MC from the fight and Toriel stops Alphys and Undyne from kissing,MC get‘s a little annoyed at that:

„Wait;“ Toriel says „Not in front of the human…!“. „Whoops,sorry… I-i got a little carried a…away there,hehe“Alphys nervously says,Undyne adding „Yeah,sorry“ as she scratches the back of her head.Somehow this makes you frown.You take Sans by his   sleeve- „babe,what‘re you do——;“ he says right as you lift him up and kiss him on his smile.You can feel San’s face burning. „ALTHOUGH I‘M PROUD OF YOUR BRAVERY HUMAN,PLEASE DO THAT SOMEWHERE ELSE!“Papyrus says with an akward facial expression; „Way to go,human!“ Undyne says smiling brightly.Alphys immediately takes out her phone and takes a picture,Toriel looking completely confused (since she had no clue of the fact that  Sans and you were dating). „Ooohhh yes!“ Metaton says in the backround as he strikes a dramatic pose. „Uh… nice that you found someone human??“ Asgore smiles akwardly.When you finally pull away from him,you notice that Sans is completely red-faced wich makes you blush aswell.

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That would be hilarious.


I'm not sure what I'll do for the extra bonus scenes yet but I will absolutely make sure they are funny and or amusing. 


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So excited already 😆

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I'm just passing by to say, I've discovered your games a few days ago and now I'm hooked playing one after the other haha. How dare you schedule, to keep me from reading yet another chapter.

I don't want to go on for too long, but I just... Really wanted to express how much I appreciate and respect it all after noticing that you have been working on them for awhile, and it is noticeable that you have improved both your writing and your understanding of coding since you begun. You wouldn't believe how hard it can be to keep improving your skills on small but steady installments like that, especially after a certain age when so many responsibilities catch up to you and free time is worth diamonds. In my experience, I had to choose something to focus on, otherwise I wouldn't be able to do anything even though I want to learn a lot of different stuff hahaha. But with enough time, I hope to go through a whole list of them. We just need to keep at it, even if it's slowly nibbling at the subjects and making sure we understand, that's the most important part. To never stop. To stay determined. And it gladdens me that you seem to get that. It's a seemingly simple habit, but it can make you go the distance in real life too.

I hope you never lose that, and I just want you to know I'm cheering for more people to notice your interactive stories, so you have even more positive supporting words from them. I love Undertale a lot, both as a game title and multiverse basis, but I would also be very curious to read anything original you might come up with in the future. Stay determined friend, wishing you success!

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hhhhhhhhhhhhh


Hello! Thank you for playing my games, I'm delighted they've been entertaining enough for you to derail your schedule. :P


I honestly don't know how to coherently respond to this outside smiles and crying. You are absolutely correct that it's so much harder to find the time to learn new things as an adult, and I'm genuinely proud of how much I've been able to do so far with this. It means a lot to me that it's been noticed and acknowledged so from the very bottom of my heart, thank you for that.


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I hope that you can find the time and energy to pursue your interests and learn a little more every day. Baby steps are still steps and progress is still progress. 


I wish you luck and that your nights are restful enough you wake up ready to tackle the challenges in the day! 

Haha I'm glad it made your day a little happier! Also, sort of random, I was checking out Scarlet Hollow's page and geeking out internally at how good/unique the vibe from that game is, while wondering about when the next chapter will arrive for the googolth time, and I happened to stumble upon your comment amongst the latest. I'm happy that you enjoy that one too, it's one of my favourite vns nowadays! Oh, thanks a bunch for the lastest Underfell update btw...! I'm off to eat some cookies and try and puzzle out for myself how to get the newest routes. I wonder, can we finally step into Grillbys' without dying this time? Haha! Bye~!

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oki i litterall had no clue what dusale was about till this. this was so beautifully sad and amazing. genuinly i just cant even and i was crying and laughing and asdfghjkk;'. I would like to point out tho there is a need for some code clean up when metting Toriel, the hazey drunken text is just its codde and text. But other than that I would like to offer you astding ovation!!!!.

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I'm ecstatic I could introduce you to Dusttale then! It's one of my favorite AUs that I wish got a happy ending. There is a fan game of DT where you play as Chara/Frisk if that interests you. https://gamejolt.com/games/dusttale/308853

Thank you for letting me know about the code issue! It's cleaned up now and will be fixed in the update. 

This was adorable as hell I could cry 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️

hehehe thank you :D

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I've noticed that once the game begins, the eye colour defaults to honey. not sure if it happens on all routes though (sorry if this is nit-picky)

that walkthrough was a godsend. amazing game as usual!!

edit: after the ruins dream, it goes back to the chosen colour

Thank you for playing! I'm glad the walkthrough helped. When you choose a brown color it will alternate between saying brown eyes and honey-colored eyes. I'll add more eye color options to specify if light brown or dark brown and give alts for those in the next update. :) 

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woah quite unexpected. yet amazing game yet again!

Thank you so much!

It's said that I'm in love with sans, or it's just I love and I got the happy ending, but how can I get the bonus part!

The bonus part is a link in Author's Note at the end of the romance route. It's right above the restart buttons. 

can someone help me?? I've been repeating and always get the neutral ending ; 3;

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Well, that made me cry, How do i get the romance ending though?

There's a walkthrough posted. Here's a link for your convenience: https://darkpetal16.itch.io/if-dusttale/devlog/516399/walkthrough

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! GOD CREATED YOU PERFECTLY!!! MY HEART IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! <3

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It is I, funny typo person!

Typos and stuff I found!!

- Programming bug? You can select to wear cargo pants if you choose "It was an horrible accident" at the start, but you can't if you choose the other option.

- Page starts with "It hurts.", when you're moving through the ruins. In the passage Third paragraph, injuries has an extra s.

- "You leave the kitchen." when the fireplace is on and you leave flowers in the ashes. "This must have been one of their bed's." bed instead of bed's. :D

- "You dream of the house in the cave.", line is "It's been ages since someone held you hand." your instead of you.

- Programming bug #2??? Music from when you were exploring Snowdin stays on even after you died until you get to another page that requires a different track.

- You choose to sit with the dogs in the Snowdin dream. "The largest dog at the table hands you several cards. Their face twists into a funny expression that makes you $happyreaction"

- "As you walk, you pass by an empty sentry station." 
Ketchup instead of ketch up

- "Sans likes to read." (same) At the last paragraph of the page, month has an extra period.

- "Since coming to the underground you've become a light sleeper.", line is "San's face stays static—he is always stuck smiling—but you can feel that he's distressed." Sans instead of San's.

- "Spending time with Sans becomes as easy as breathing.", when talking about Asgore it's gardening instead of garden.

- "You wake up with Sans beside you. " Again, San's instead of Sans when the you see the menu box for the first time.

- The programming errors when meeting Toriel after the reset, but I think someone else already posted the screenshots of them.

THE DREAM AT SNOWDIN??? PAPYRUS' GRAVE?? SANS TALKING ABOUT EVERYONE? I WANTED TO CRY. ))):

Funny little puns made me giggle. Really appreciated. You are forgiven for the events listed above. :D

Wonderful game, wonderful writing. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much <3

Uwa thank you!!! I'll be going through these this weekend. I appreciate your support so much!

Cargo pants are only available for one option. 

hurtss --> hurts

you --> your

added more music stops, hopefully that will help!

fixed $happyreaction for first dream with dogs. 

ketch up --> ketchup

There should be no extra period now. 

Did a mass fix of all Sans. 

garden --> gardening

Toriel bug fixed.

I hope that the ending made up for you wanting to cry!! D: 

I love it!

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programming error, sorry to bug

pardon. 

-the the boy, pixelboii

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Never a bug! Thank you so much for pointing it out with a screenshot. I've fixed it on my end so it should work in the next update. :)

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Yay! I just got a happy end! But it was only in friendship. At first it seemed like it was going to be a little hard with me dying over and over again but really once you figure it out, you’re good. I just had to keep in mind that I had to be nice to the dead monsters and then Sans will like me lol. I gotta try and get this romance end but I don’t know how 😔. Gotta keep trying! ( ᐕ)੭

Edit: I got the romance ending! Oh my gosh… so cute! So cute! I love san’s so much. After playing all your games he just becomes my favorite character over and over again. I’m happy with all the endings I got. The neutral, friendship, and romance end. The romance end is my absolute favorite of course. And I loved the bonus story at the end of the romance end. I’m eager for more bonus stories now! Anyway, I loved this so much and I’m kinda sad it’s over. But it was a wonderful journey ❤️❤️.

how did you get the romance ending, please tell me

Same, im suffering 

there’s a walkthrough posted :) 

https://darkpetal16.itch.io/if-dusttale/devlog/516399/walkthrough

Thank you!! Also the part where Sans goes “Ehhhhh” is such a mood lmao.

lol

https://darkpetal16.itch.io/if-dusttale/devlog/516399/walkthrough

Hope this helps!

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IT REALLY HELPS! I CAN NOW FINALLY READ THE BONUS! AND THE RESULTS ARE SO DAMN CUTE!!

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Hooray for the happy ending! I'm so glad you enjoyed the endings. Really impressive that you stuck through it before the walkthrough too despite the deaths!! 

Sans is such a delightful character, and the Dusttale version of him is so interesting to think about. :D  I'm delighted we can share him as a favorite character. 


The bonus scenes were so fun to write. It amuses me endlessly to think of a romanced DT!Sans watching his partner go through the underground. The shenanigans that could ensue! 

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It got me a few tries to get the romance ending, but I finally managed and it was worth it.

I also love how Papyrus arranges for us a marriage interview right after giving his approve of us dating Sans when he discovers we made Sans pick up his sock. It's just so funny and precious. I love Papyrus, must protect.

Thank you for making this IF. I really loved it. And I wanted to ask if there will be a future save because you said you might update the game for more bonus stories, and I wanted to have a save so its easier to get to them.

Hahaha yes Pap is utterly adorable. I'm so glad you enjoyed that bonus scene - and major congrats / well done for getting the romance ending without the walkthrough being up. Very impressive! 

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. 

I think I might (if I figure out how) implement a way to do a save feature to work exclusively for endings. Otherwise I might do a quick start option at the start that will let you set up a character then go straight to the bonus scenes. 

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EVERYONE!!! if you get the romance ending make sure to cheek the authors notes. 


well you should always do that but its extra important this time!

fufu I take it you enjoyed the bonus scenes? :D

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of course, i always look at the bonus endings when i play, there always fun! knowing how things are going after the ending is always nice.

i just wanted to make sure people rememberd too look becouse they might not think about it!

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I adore this! From every small choice having an impact to how you've structured everything on a narrative level! I got one of the happy friendship endings but I can't quite figure out how to get onto the romance path. 

Any tips or hints from you, our lovely creator, or my fellow game players would be appreciated!!

Lovely game 10/10 :D

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im bad at explaining but ill try, after dusts nightmare say that you love him after that when he says he dosent love you back say that you can be patiant then say that you cant change how you feel an lastly say that its fine if he dosent have the parts necesary. good luck!

Thank you so much! I've posted a walkthrough so hopefully that will help. :D

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any hints for getting the romance ending?

ye i want them too ;-;

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ill tell you if i can figure it out, good luck!

ty u2 <3

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ohahahhah, i think i found it. after you say you love him say you can be patiant then say you cant change how you feel and then say its fine if he dosent have the parts nesesary. i hope you understand the directions.

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i got it the romance ending is as i said above

any hints anyone? I either get to Toriel's house or snowdin's entrance before game over lol

(also; I realized you can play this on mobile?!?! so cool!)

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give flowers to monsters and be emotional :d

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this'll be fun, can't wait to play

-the the boy, pixelboii

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I got a happy ending yay! This was so adorable and well done! I really like all the effects you make sure to include in your games. I wish I had more time today to get the other good endings but, worry not! I will be back for the romance ending lol. Thank you so much for another amazing game to spend my time with <3

Congrats on your happy ending!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I hope you enjoy the romance ending when you get to it. 

Ahhh— I’m so freaking excited to play this! I love your other two games so much and I know I’ll love this. I can totally tell that I’m going to die a lot lol. But this is going to be fun (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

I’ll be aiming for a good end. Wish me luck 😁

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Thank you so so much! Sincere good luck!!

really excited to play this, I always adore your writing, but I feel like I’ve done everything I possibly could other than change my clothes which I assume doesn’t matter. What should one do to get past Toriels house? Can’t seem to find a way.

update: went really random after a few restarts and got somewhere

To get past the door you have to be little Hurt but not too much(if you get 4 choices about dust then you made it)

Walkthrough has been posted, so hopefully that will help! Thanks so much for playing.

Hell yeah lets gooo!

Woo hoo!

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very unexpected but excited! so far so good but my two braincells are struggling, haha! 
furthest I usually get is before snowdin. (will reply to this with a review after i finish the game!)

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update i: i have made it into snowdin! but now i usually die before being able to progress. will have to keep trying. 

update ii: making progress! took a while but i got it!

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update iii: got the friendship ending! the story was sorrowful yet so sweet. attempting to get the romance route next, wish me luck. <3

update iv: got another friendship ending. still sweet, but not the exact ending i wanted! trying again! 

Walkthrough has been posted. Thank you so much for playing!!

its sooo good! but i cant get romance ending ;-; help

Walkthrough has now been posted. :D 

Thank You <3

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im so exited, i havent played yet. i just got an email notification becouse i follow you on itch.io. i know it will be good. im just curius how its completed right away! ill coment when iv played it.

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its sooooo good, im so happy. its amazing like i knew it would be. im gona try to get the romance ending i got the frendship ending for my first try. ill say when iv got it. i love it. love you!!!!!

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heheheheh, i got the romance ending!!!! i think im the first? well im the first too coment it! i loved the game. its in the middle of the night, im soooo happy. i always get exited when i see that youv updated or made somthing. my day is so much better. love you!!!!!! 


not in a weird way. i just have bad social skills. 

OH MY GOD YOU'RE THE FIRST ONE!! CONGRATULATIONS!!



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hehehe im so happy :)

I know what you mean and it's really really really appreciated :)

Major props to getting friendship ending first try! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. 

Haha this was a game I was working on between Mafiafell / Underfell as a test. When I got to the barrier part I was like ehhh might as well add an ending and so here we are. :D

ohhhh thats nice! i was just confused by how it was already complet, tho i was very happy by the suprise of a full new game. but make sure you dont overwork yourself, i love the game like usual! have a good day!


also it was nice that you could get a good ending i always find that sweet.

Error after "oh well everyone dies"

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Oh and i am stuck too cant reset

Edit: just had to play and login in  incognito and it reset 

Fixed. :)

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I'm so excited to play this! I really liked your other games so I'm sure this one will be great too! I have a feeling I'll end up keeping a notebook tracking my choices since I can't save lol. I'll leave another comment when I finish the game :]

Thank you!! I hope you're able to enjoy this game. A notebook would definitely come in handy. :) I do offer advice on the NEUTRAL ending screen if you don't get the HAPPY ending right away. 

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WHERE THIS COME FROM HECK YEAAAG

hahaha I was using this game to test out features in UF / MF but then wrote enough that was like ehhhh might as well add an ending? so here we are. 

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