IF - Siren Call

Super cute! Your writing is as beautiful as always, though I'm a little concerned about my tastes now... But Sans is fucking adorable (even if he's a little... unhinged), so I'll give myself a pass on this one. Those scientists were a bunch of jerks anyway. 

Thanks again for such a masterpiece! Only have one complete game left before I move onto the in-progress ones! I'm excited to move on to your incomplete games... And also nervous, because I know exactly how I'll react when I reach the 'end' of those games, and there's no real conclusion. 

But it must be done! For the skele booooiiiiiissss!

i like how more extra stories got added. Please keep it up! This story and the characters are so interesting! Oh but i would love to read more of the "horror route" or horror side storys with him x mc :P 

I didn't realize that this was a.... *checks notes* yandere siren sans undertale x OC fanfiction game (?) until I started it. Not at all my thing, but you guys do you.

Is it just me, why is the text gigantic

I luv the relationship between the dad and mc

This game was so good through the options to the story telling please keep up this amazing writing!!!!!!

this is one of the best IFs i've ever read! i saw the author's note after the good ending that says you're working on more sans POV and a horror route! i really hope u continue this project bc i'd especially be looking forward to more of sans' POVS :)!!

THE FUCKING UNDERTALE REFERENCES. THEY DON'T STOP COMING. HELP ME

Giggling and kicking my feet while playing this

Tarde en darme cuenta las referencias a Undertale, y cuando lo note fue en el final. 10/10

Ill be honest loved the game I really did, although, I accidently completed it on my first try

YESSSSSSSSSSS omg this was genuinely so good, and all the bad endings slap. I absolutely KILL for the other perspective at the end. OOF. This is the first game of yours I've played in a while and, as usual, i was not disappointed. HOOO omg time to play through the rest of your games.

okay i was nervous to try this at first i didnt know much about the au but i adore the fandom and have enjoyed several of the novels/games made by this creator. But i was pleasantly overjoyed to play and read all of this every bit of this had me hooked and the ending bonuses where just adorable i cant stress enough how much i want to thank Darkpetal16 for making these kinds of games and i cant wait to see everything thats coming next

BEST THING genuinely did not think I'd enjoy it this much! at first i was thinking "ok its been years since i had any sort of attraction for any sans, though i still do really like gaster, not in any romantic sense but just as a, he's silly and dorky and cute but also spooky way. I'll play this for dadster" and by the end i was thinking "holy freaking shirtballs! i desperately need more of this! more of the story from sans's point of view! more content from after the story! just more of this!" so, yeah very much enjoyed and i truly hope you make more bonus content or more stories!

it should be antarctic, not artic, if it's the south pole...

Love this!

Dadster content <3

Love him

FR LOVE THIS!!! Dadster stole my heart since the moment i started playing. <3

I LOVE THISSSS!!!! ❤️❤️❤️💋💋💋💋

I love this story so much! thank you!

Dadster has my whole heart <33

There's A LOT of compliments, praises and comments I want to write here about the immersed world building, characters, about main character's reaction of everything and the problems that can relate to daily life but I'm not vast in vocabulary as I am not an eng speaker. But I just want to let you know, I read many interactive novels and fanfics, this is my favourite one so far in this year.

I have zero knowledge in Undertale and thanks to this work, I'm now fully interested. 🙇🏻‍♀️

got the good ending the first try and i shit you not i cried like 12 times your writing is always so good :')

oh my god i just went through the whole thing in one night and oh my g o d.i love gaster he almost made me cry and i love our boy and i love the end and i havent been in the fandom in years but im gonna come back to this again oh my gosh this is a blessing

fave bonus ending is the tell sans your pregnant.

I’m genuinely crying

This is an incredible game, everything is so well thought, i’m impressed…

I just love this so much

I LOVE THIS.

I got mated ending. So cute with the references from undertales

This is AMAZING!!! I loved every moment!!

How do you learn to write stories so well?

God this was a ride in the best way possible. my gay ass really lucked out LMAO but anyways this was such a delight to read!! I love the fact that we were basically adopted by Dadster !!! I love the Father moments QWQ especially at the start where he was asking bout the stuff we needed to pack. Now I can just imagine a scene where MC jokingly says "Okay, Dad." and Gaster be like: *in tears* you see me as a father???

joking aside, I have to say, the atmosphere while reading this with headphones on was immaculate. even when my eyes were giving up on me i COULD NOT TAKE AWAY MY EYES FROM THE SCREEN!!! i needed to read it and FINISH IT ALL THE WAY. Suffice to say, it was very satisfying to get to the ending and read all the cute bonus scenes <3 

love sirens <3 

- from, a gay monster-romancer who absolutely adores "The Shape of Water" 

p.s: there are some pronoun errors in a few of the paragraphs in some of the bonus scenes [Mostly the ones in Sans's Perspective]. I chose the option that would refer to the MC with he/him and was slightly confused as to why there were she/her instead ^^ this is just a minor nitpick though, other than that, this game is perfect and flawless and it deserves an oscar for fanfiction <3 

first time ever making a comment on this website [more will follow as I shall comment on your other works]. at first I was just searching for dating sims, reading the tiny lil summary that popped on the side. didn't even realize it was an undertale au. I simply saw catching the attention of a deranged siren and I was hooked instantly. it was not until I started did I realize that it was undertale.

I am rambling a bit, but I was much to drawn in by chance of a yandere siren, and more so when looking up an image for Siren!Sans. and having an visual really drew me in strongly as a siren's call would lure you to a bad end. 

one thing I enjoyed right away during the character customization was the player being able to choose their soul trait. this led me to become hooked for Kindness for the entire game and others if it was an option. 

for me, I am not the best with visualizing written bits due to not being able to visualize in my head. yet how the game was written, and the story went brought upon having many different feelings, as if I were actually feeling as the character I controlled. from the interactions with Sans [which I loved the visuals given to whenever he spoke, hovering over it had me staring for a couple of minutes as the colors changed] to the relationships that progressed from beginning to end.

speaking on fancy bits to text, I felt like a moth to a flame with how you did the effect for Gaster's text. quite surprised me on the first go [I played the game a second time because I am addicted] and was excited when seeing it in your other works.

honestly this game itself has both brought back into loving undertale [and the lazy bones known as Sans] and also become a bit of a comfort with how you've written Siren!Sans in the game. can't lie when playing your other works, and hearing some voiced parts...I could only imagine a voice being attached to this siren skeleton and I felt giddy as all heck.

after the ending, seeing the bonuses was a delight, and I loved each and every bit to absolute death. with Sans' pov with the encounters with the other humans made me with to see how perspective with the others as I was so curious with what deaths were because of what they did or what they said about the character

also biscuit...I say the word a whole lot and could only snicker using it as my go-to curse word in your works X33