Okay, can I be fr for a sec? I LOVED reading this. It's been over a year since I last read it, but I remember staying up all night just reading this novel, kicking my little feetsies. To be honest, I don't know much about Undertale, so when I first read it, I didn't catch on that it had anything to do with Undertale up until we got the details of the LI (I don't want to spoil for new readers but ifykyk), but even though I'm not a Undertale fan, this was still a very enjoyable read! 5/5 stars and I WILL be reading this again! <3
I am CACKLING. You weren't kidding when you said we can play a smart scientist who makes dumb decisions. I made, what I believe was, the objectively correct decision because instinct shouldn't be ignored. But it got me BAD ENDING #1.
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'For some reason, he looks oddly pleased by this.'
hEY. HEY. NO. BAD. I- a squirty bottle wouldn't work because he's aquatic. Gosh darnit.
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Whoop! 'Best' ending GET! I'm reading the 'From Sans' Perspective' bonuses, and I'm just... yes, honey. I'm very happy with you! Just... gimme a few years to grow some more calluses to the whole thing.
This is amazing, and I'm slowly exploring your other IF's. I just had to tell you, you've completely inspired me to make my own! It won't be undertale centered, but I don't think I would have ever tried at all if it wasn't for your work, your writing, your formatting, the dynamic look and feel of it. I'm always amazed when I play, and now that I'm practicing twine code, I'm even MORE amazed by how much work and coding you must put in! Thank you!
i would definitely like more stories in this universe. i do think if they were a bit more detailed and fleshed out, with more resolution between the characters in the ending that would elevate this game even more. i was satisfied how many choices could potentially end badly. it would be nice if the endings didnt repeat as well for some paths. either way still an interesting game!
very amazing game and lovely and entertaining novel i was sucked in, and gods it *is* interesting, i would die for sans to tell me whats was wring just to prove my theories right-
(But that aside, i didnt expect Wingding to cure my daddy issues like at all, but here we are, wont trade it for the world, please adopt me Dr Wingding)
Very enjoyable to read, but however I skipped the first few parts where it specified it was an Undertale AU, which meant I was unaware of it being a fangame until the part where Sans tells the reader his name. It was like a sucker punch but don't let this discourage, it was a great game and it's inspired quite a lot of creative drive for me! Might have to look into Undertale now after this :]
I have literally created this acc for two purposes.
1. To tell that this novel is so good. That was extremely therapeutic istg my brain haven't recieved that much serotonin in months. Also the worldbuilding is very tasty.
2. To be the harbinger of music... the names of the songs are: rescue by Øneheart, ashess AND Lovender by Kaeshani. <3
Side note: I may be blind but I didn't find the exact song names and spent like an hour to find them so I posted them in case someone else is just as blind as me lol
just finished the game, my only complaint is that i can’t save disk properly on my phone because of how big everything was and i couldn’t??? scroll down in the save screen?? i had to play on tablet on Portrait Mode to save to disk other then that This was amazing!!!! :D banger stuff as always
So I have played this over and over because it's really good and I love it, but I would like to mention that in the "see the story through sans' perspective" some of the pronouns are wrong. like uh, I play as a man each time but some of the pronouns in that are she/her when referring to the MC- Still, I love this game, and it's amazing! I'm so sorry if this seems rude, I just wanted to let you know ^^"
imma say it really I never cared for sans at all, walking into this I was bored and just picked to play the first thing, but even though I got slightly confused in references I genuinely enjoyed this and the writing and ambiance brought me pure joy, I haven’t really gone through for every ending just yet because I keep dying :D but you really did an amazing job and it worked stand-alone for me lol
GOD! I LOVED IT! Despite having played "IF-Underswap" I liked this one much more, maybe because being a scientist or meeting mermaids are my frustrated dreams (having a dad too lol) but I enjoyed every second of the 4 hours I spent playing it. I also have to say that the stroke of inspiration that this story gave me was a blow to the back of my head for me. I loved drawing every moment that dopamine left me!! Anyway, I will review more of your work in the future <333
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Okay, can I be fr for a sec? I LOVED reading this. It's been over a year since I last read it, but I remember staying up all night just reading this novel, kicking my little feetsies. To be honest, I don't know much about Undertale, so when I first read it, I didn't catch on that it had anything to do with Undertale up until we got the details of the LI (I don't want to spoil for new readers but ifykyk), but even though I'm not a Undertale fan, this was still a very enjoyable read! 5/5 stars and I WILL be reading this again! <3
I am CACKLING. You weren't kidding when you said we can play a smart scientist who makes dumb decisions. I made, what I believe was, the objectively correct decision because instinct shouldn't be ignored. But it got me BAD ENDING #1.
--MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD--
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'For some reason, he looks oddly pleased by this.'
hEY. HEY. NO. BAD. I- a squirty bottle wouldn't work because he's aquatic. Gosh darnit.
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Whoop! 'Best' ending GET! I'm reading the 'From Sans' Perspective' bonuses, and I'm just... yes, honey. I'm very happy with you! Just... gimme a few years to grow some more calluses to the whole thing.
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I LOVE OUR DADSTER. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
My undertail phase came back full swing lol
This is amazing, and I'm slowly exploring your other IF's. I just had to tell you, you've completely inspired me to make my own! It won't be undertale centered, but I don't think I would have ever tried at all if it wasn't for your work, your writing, your formatting, the dynamic look and feel of it. I'm always amazed when I play, and now that I'm practicing twine code, I'm even MORE amazed by how much work and coding you must put in! Thank you!
haven't finished playing yet but, why can't we befriend James. Sad
DADSTER
I needed this in my life
Hello! Is there any chance you could make this game downloadable?
i would definitely like more stories in this universe. i do think if they were a bit more detailed and fleshed out, with more resolution between the characters in the ending that would elevate this game even more. i was satisfied how many choices could potentially end badly. it would be nice if the endings didnt repeat as well for some paths. either way still an interesting game!
very amazing game and lovely and entertaining novel i was sucked in, and gods it *is* interesting, i would die for sans to tell me whats was wring just to prove my theories right-
(But that aside, i didnt expect Wingding to cure my daddy issues like at all, but here we are, wont trade it for the world, please adopt me Dr Wingding)
Very enjoyable to read, but however I skipped the first few parts where it specified it was an Undertale AU, which meant I was unaware of it being a fangame until the part where Sans tells the reader his name. It was like a sucker punch but don't let this discourage, it was a great game and it's inspired quite a lot of creative drive for me! Might have to look into Undertale now after this :]
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I have literally created this acc for two purposes.
1. To tell that this novel is so good. That was extremely therapeutic istg my brain haven't recieved that much serotonin in months. Also the worldbuilding is very tasty.
2. To be the harbinger of music... the names of the songs are: rescue by Øneheart, ashess AND Lovender by Kaeshani. <3
Side note: I may be blind but I didn't find the exact song names and spent like an hour to find them so I posted them in case someone else is just as blind as me lol
barely 3 minutes playing and i was like “omg hes my dad (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)” to Gaster, thank you sir youre curing my daddy issues
Ok Tips for future people: Make sure to choose the dumbest choice. Otherwise you will die.
best advice ever!!!
idk if i love it? or not
I FINALLY FOUND THIS AGAIN AFTER SO LONGGG I THOUGHT I LOST IT T^T <3
be me:
discover itch.io
see a lot of fun games and visual novels!
play this game here expecting some soft fluff
look at warnings (DYAM)
play game get EVERY bad ending before getting the (still sad in my opinion) good ending
left me a lil stunned but gotta say FUCKING GREAT 10/10! (I was not expecting this level of gore and scary shit)
make a account just to say this game stunned me
(just found out petal made more games like this and I'm currently playing underfell!)
This was so good!! I had so much fun playing and going through different routes! I can't wait for more updates on Sans perspective!
just finished the game, my only complaint is that i can’t save disk properly on my phone because of how big everything was and i couldn’t??? scroll down in the save screen?? i had to play on tablet on Portrait Mode to save to disk other then that This was amazing!!!! :D banger stuff as always
So I have played this over and over because it's really good and I love it, but I would like to mention that in the "see the story through sans' perspective" some of the pronouns are wrong. like uh, I play as a man each time but some of the pronouns in that are she/her when referring to the MC- Still, I love this game, and it's amazing! I'm so sorry if this seems rude, I just wanted to let you know ^^"
imma say it really I never cared for sans at all, walking into this I was bored and just picked to play the first thing, but even though I got slightly confused in references I genuinely enjoyed this and the writing and ambiance brought me pure joy, I haven’t really gone through for every ending just yet because I keep dying :D but you really did an amazing job and it worked stand-alone for me lol