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I frickin love this writing AAAAAAAA

so good

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IM FERAL
FOAMING AT THE MOUTH
I GOT ALL THE CLUES
i havent even met the doctor so all the comments are making me laugh
im so hyped
MC is meant to be a detective just like their brother, i love this so much. Thank you for continuing!!

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Although I‘m glad that you managed to avoid him,will you please quit rubbing it in everyone’s face?

It‘s just toxic,ya know?

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I literally only made one comment? And I was just excited, I wasn't being toxic. I met the doctor on my other routes when i played them after i commented. 

I laughed with people, not at them. And I didn't rub it in anyone's face by saying I got a different ending? 

The fact that people got mad over my comment is mind-boggling. 

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I‘m not mad,I just misunderstood the comment. I’m sorry if my response offended you :(

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it's fine. I understand reading tone through text can be difficult, I've been there. I just genuinely wasn't trying to rub anything in anyone's face. I was just excited.

How do I get the option to investigate the man's apartment so I don't die from doc rose

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Spoilers!!!










Dude i died twice. So after the shooting you go to the window and investigate. Then the next day you will see the old man in the street you speak to him, then on the day you have off you choose to relax and go visit the old man and ask him all the questions about his son, then you need to go visit him again before your run and butter the hell out of edward until he talks to you about the beast then and only then u dont die. I just saw tht myself. U also needed to visit swan lake with rasiel, visit daisy the first time. And running in the park seeing those sketchy guys. I think thats all the clues. You will know once you get edward to talk about taking ronnie to the beast. Until you see tht in nr scotts apartment you will still die by the good doc. Hope tht helps everyone!

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Oh dear, Doc. Rose shows up??? That's going to be a pain to deal with... 😔

Hey don‘t worry!It‘ll be okay!

We were able to come out alive,no matter the situation,like when we ran away with Lawrence from dad or when we were chased by those drunk mafiosos!Doctor Rose will be tricky to deal with,sure,BUT!We got something he‘ll never have!Our powerful souls intuition and the determination to keep on living no matter how much it hurts!We promised Lawrence that we‘d keep us safe and we WILL uphold that promise!

Everything will be just alright!

I promise 

I still died. can you make a video please?   

AHJDBJXBSJCB

I cant with the doctor man

I tried Changing my flower and ignored the old man but i can't 

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tbh Doctor Rose is kinda yandere,like— those bouquets and poems were cute and all but how he called us his love and wouldn’t let go was creepy

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So true, i wonder who's doctor rose hmmmmm

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i dunno,we‘ll just have to figure it out!

Is it Normal for all of my saves to just be gone or am i special?

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You're not alone, I saved my characters to my computer for safe keeping and now it doesn't recognize my files :< looks like it's time to start over

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aww dude that sucks so much. I don't usually mind restarting if it's just like a demo bt christ 7 chapters.. guess we have little choice. Good luck ♥️

Yeah I'm feeling the same right now, but I really enjoy these cyoa so it's just how it's gonna have to be :") good luck to you! This little interaction actually made me feel better about it so thank you haha

You are so welcome. I'm so glad. I hope you can breeze through I did. And it was actually so worth it. Seeing the different reactions by the ROs in chapter 7. Hope you have like the best day tho 😇💜

How do u get past the doctor??

I don't know how to get past doc. Rose

I've done everything I can and done everything people told me to do in the comments, but I can't get past doctor rose. Please help me!

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bro i can not figure out how to get past doctor rose omg

how do you find all the clues please I need help 

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 You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done. 

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How do you not die to the plague doctor?

Edit: nevermind, I figured it out :)

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you have to get all the clues. You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done. 

I still getting killed. I don't know what I did wrong.

I don't see anything talking about investigating the mans apartment before your run unless you have to stay home to get it? And if its not too much trouble do you know the chapter it happens? I've been frantically going thru chapters lol

Think it's in chapter 6, it's the second time you get free time. You relax at home then get to talk to Scott in his apartment. Then in chapter 7, your character will want to go for a run and an option will pop up to go to the apartment after or before your run, you want to click on before. Then the it's all connected option, then you butter up the rich dude as much as you can.

I finally got it thank you sm!!

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Same, I keep dying with every choice

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you have to get all the clues. You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done. 

Thank you so much you helped our sanity regain

I absolutely am inlove. I love how every character reacts so differently to the MC. And its just wonderful and you have more projects!!! Sooo I'm gonna go check those out... 

You def should, they're all fantastic

I'M SO HYPED TO CONTINUE!!!

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i think seeing as its mafiafell there should be an option for the player to smoke and it could impact their relationship with certain characters, or not idc i just think itd be fitting for the player to smoke as maybe their way to help with the stress of their missing brother besides their chosen hobby. besides me thinking thatd be a fitting thing to add, the game is really cool and i have infact played it over and over again for the past two weeks because ive hyperfixated on it<33

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In asriel's route after you get sweets when you talk about your hobbies if you chose sketching and are sketching you and your brother aerial says "I'm working on a sketch of you and your brother too!" I assume that wasn't intended.

iirc i think he just says hes drawing himself and his own sibling (chara) but i havent played through this game in a while so not sure

If your not romancing him he says he's making a sketch of him and his sibling too but if you are he says he's making a sketch of "you and your brother"

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hi!! omg i can see the beautiful and graceful work you put on this! 

i mean, 3 routes for 3 genders, with four different romance/platonic routes?! not only that, twine is super hard to deal with...

thats so impressive and the customization.. is actual customization! i love all of the different options!! it rlly feels like me!!

the writing and the story is AMAZE-BALLS!!! and while i havent finished it yet (im on chapter 2 and on the asriel route!)

but man oh man this is gonna be a great half hour!! 

ANYWHO... im wondering.. if you're able to add new... character routes.. like.. mettaton... it would be amazing!! and maybe other people would think so too! it would be cool to see him in this AU too!!!

ok, keep up the great work!!! i luv this so far!! im not even done!!!

hey! i finished asriel's route (so far) and OH GEE, OH GOSH!!! this is absolutely fan-freaking-tastic!! the story; shocking. the gore; "gore"tesque. the characters; in LOVE!!! im going to finish the other routes next time! I also love how mettaton is a radio star in here!! i think its cool lol


I love chapter 6. I am eager to see more. 

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I’m so excited for the next update XD

AHH im so glad i found this game ee, Im a huge fan of the original fanfic and I was SO glad someone is writing an end for it that i played all of the current game in one sitting!

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I saw this update through my email and I never got to come around to play it cause of school, but now that one class has become my study block, I can play this! yayyyy

I loved it so much!! looking forward to other chapters!

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LOVED chapter 6! can't wait for more!

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i just reached chapter 5 and holy SHIT?????? this story is so compelling and constantly keeps me involved and i love your portrayal of each character. your writing too is fantastic i LOVE this

peak content

I can't describe how good this game is, keep up the good work! Im loving it !!

I need to apologise for not beeing active for some time, but holy fuck, it's 2:37 at my place, and I've been laughing and gasping the entire night now! (Needed to play all again b'cuz my save file fucked up) And at the time of my absence you've released 2 MORE GAMES?? HUUUUH??? 'bout to play them rn, I'm not getting any sleep today lmao

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i am having trouble saving progress, before it wasn't like this. i thought restarting should solve the probkem, but it didn't.

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this is fucking awesome

Hey um So the game keeps starting me at the part where you select if you like chocolate milk or not and whenever I try to delete the autosave and restart it keeps starting me at that same spot and not at the start of the game-

heyyy. im so so happy you updated this again! and the new chapter is just perfect. this is probably the last time you will see me comment until september because there taking away the school chromebooks today. keep up the good work! :D

stay safe

GOD!I'm so happy that this exists, you're doing a great job! Keep going!

Hiii it's me again just wanted to let you know about this error!

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Just finished chapter 6! Thank you so much for your AMAZING work I enjoyed it! :)

Thank you very kindly for playing & commenting, I appreciate it!!

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The way I scream everytime I see that you updated... Istg you got me adicted-

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Coming back to tell you there's a lil problem in the dialogue with Chara when we first meet them. I don't knwo why but I can't post a screenshot so imma just describe- I was in Sans route, with chocolate milk as my morning drink and when we have the talk about chocolate with Chara an error message appears like 3 times and it shows me the same dialogue with a few changes (so I don't know which one corresponds to my game). Hope it helped :") 

every route has that error :(

This has just been fixed in the current update. :) Thank you for letting me know!

fufu thank you~~~

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Hihi! Once more, thank you for the update! <3

I only found a couple of typos this time. 

- I have no idea if this is new or not, but when checking the "Darling You" interface, at the bottom where it says in which route you are in, sans isn't capitalized in the Sans route.

- "And in walks another skeleton.", third paragraph, should be tiles instead of tile. 

Absolutely loved the food war with Sans and Papyrus + Gaster's appearance later on. As an older sibling and the oldest cousin, I can confirm that is how it feels. Keep up the good work! Remember to take breaks when you need them!

I fixed the tile / tiles!

:D!! Yay, I'm so glad you enjoyed the food war and it didn't feel out of pocket. I was concerned it would be seen as too silly. 


I always appreciate your help, thank you so much for playing my game!

In my status it says that "Your favorite dessert is chocolate pie." And yet at meeting Chara Mc has only the option to say that they don't like chocolate. Is this a bug?

Yes it is.Sadly🥲

What route are you on? You should have the option of saying you like chocolate. Are you getting an error message, or is it not showing up at all? 

It works now, thanks <3

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this has got to be my favorite game of yours the coming out bit was adorable and really makes me wish i had the corage to do it irl and the sibling dynamics between the skellenros and chara and asriel are supser well writen

Thank you, I'm so glad you like my game. I hope you can find the courage one day & your family be as accepting as Lawrence. <3 

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