Coming back to tell you there's a lil problem in the dialogue with Chara when we first meet them. I don't knwo why but I can't post a screenshot so imma just describe- I was in Sans route, with chocolate milk as my morning drink and when we have the talk about chocolate with Chara an error message appears like 3 times and it shows me the same dialogue with a few changes (so I don't know which one corresponds to my game). Hope it helped :")
- I have no idea if this is new or not, but when checking the "Darling You" interface, at the bottom where it says in which route you are in, sans isn't capitalized in the Sans route.
- "And in walks another skeleton.", third paragraph, should be tiles instead of tile.
Absolutely loved the food war with Sans and Papyrus + Gaster's appearance later on. As an older sibling and the oldest cousin, I can confirm that is how it feels. Keep up the good work! Remember to take breaks when you need them!
In my status it says that "Your favorite dessert is chocolate pie." And yet at meeting Chara Mc has only the option to say that they don't like chocolate. Is this a bug?
this has got to be my favorite game of yours the coming out bit was adorable and really makes me wish i had the corage to do it irl and the sibling dynamics between the skellenros and chara and asriel are supser well writen
The little arrow wheel thing is there but there's no text next to it. There's no error text/box or anything though. I think three or four options are blank, but it's hard to tell since I can't tell when it's changed on the blank ones. Edit: did a quick run to test, "Your eyes widen in surprise." till "While inwardly shocked, you remain stoic." are there while the rest are blank.
My gender in this is male all routes and Chara in Ralseis route says "country $girl", also, your games are extremely good and I get very excited when I see new updates:-]
I really like this game! But i do have a question when first meeting chara while on Asriel's route i could only choose that my mc doesnt like chocolate while on the other routes i could pick between whether or not my mc likes chocolate or not. Is it supposdd to be like that?
I love this so much- I'm a HUGE UT fan, and well... It was only a day or two ago that my dumb self realized that UT fangames can be accessed through browsers. I searched far and wide for something like this- I really love all your works. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!!!
I'm crying (idk if this is here for the other gender options but) the scene where we come out to Lawrence as enby is so cute and sweet i wish my brother was accepting like that
YOOOOOOOO I GOT TO TRY THIS NOW!! I've been busy so I wasn't able to, and now I'm excited again!! wahhhhhh... Hope you have a good day/night by the way! and thank you for making these type of games sjdjgddudhu <3
HAHUDDKDKUJSU <33 I did enjoy it AAAAAAAAAAA I'm foaming in the mouth,(don't worry, I'll be fine this is normal--) I'm excited to see how this ends! hope you gets some rest sometimes tho! and hope you enjoy your weekends hhhhhhhh--
also, omg I forgot you can send images in these comments let me send one--
Coming back here after re-reading "sooner or later you're gonna be mine". Particularly that one chapter with the stolen photo and the plotline around Sans' and Frisk REAL first meeting. Since this game has showna few similarities with the story of SLGBM, and little details mentioned by MC, I was wondering, have Sans and MC already met before ? Not gonna spoil and honestly this is just a lil stoopid theory but that would be interesting :).
Oh my.... I was just enjoying of the game until I had so much homework that I couldn't keep re-playing the routes with diff options! AND THEN, TODAY, I'M HERE CRYING BCS THERE IS AN UPDATE... <3
Espero se entienda lo que digo en ingles, jeje, realmente me gusta como voy mejorando, aprecio mucho cada actualización y ya he logrado de resolver lo del archivo de guardado..! (resulta que yo siempre lo descargaba pero una vez le cambie el nombre al archivo y por eso no me dejaba ponerlo ^^")
En este momento voy a jugar las nuevas actualizaciones, muchas gracias DarkPetal!
will we meet chef Gekkoa in this game aswell?In IF-UNDERFELL we only talked w/ him once and he‘s really seeming to be a nice guy (atleast i think so considering the fact that he made Papyrus smile)
I love the way you tell stories, this one and the others are written so well. I feel like I could constantly go back through each one and never get bored. Which is not common for me. I hope you enjoy creating stuff like this, it's amazing to see and is truly fantastic.
Oh god seeing the 3 brothers together was so interesting. We would probably be dead by now if we weren't in good terms with Sans or Pap. Oh and Sans the heartbreaker ? Hello ? I need to know more lmao. The story is really starting to become interesting with the clue mechanic, I'm in love with how dark it's starting to get, especially the thing with the yellow roses and Robert's head. Omg I have so much to say about how I feel about this, but I think what confuses me the most is how MC doesn't react to the fact that they have those yellow roses on their balcony (or window idk).
honestly for a moment I thought they were a schizophrenic and were Doctor Rose-
AAAAh an update!!!!! Thank you so much I really appreciate your writing and the fact that you also did an Underswap! I love your work and I'll keep playing these! Make sure to take care of yourself as well! :)
Found a alight oversite in the Sans route. MC/Frisk doesn't react to Papyrus' last name. Either when he introduces himself at the bar or when meeting WD getting groceries. MC/Frisk doesn't register at all that Papyrus shares a last name with Sans and WD.
It took me several reads to notice it so no worries. Still love your stuff so much. They have reignited my love of the wide fandom the original game has led to.
Thank you for spending your time to keep developing the game. I really love it. Couldn't wait to see where the story goes. I love how balance the main conflict along with romantic or frienship routes. It shows dinamic with such dark story. It's great that you really pay attention to detail and let us decide on every little things and like- keep it in database for later. I feel it so much customable and more importantly that choices are really matter in the game that it made the MC so close to us. Also, I really love Sans and his hot blooded vibe. Feels like he set the story on fire while in the dead-dark night. Wingding is my second favorite with his dinanic a bit similar but calmer and colder than Sans. Somehow his romantic sneak peek feels like enermous wave under the calm sea surface. I wonder how his personality is. I haven't read other romantic route since the other looks like great friends rather than lovers. Papyrus is a really nice gentleman while Ralsey is a considerate good man. Maybe I'll read it later though.
Thank you so kindly for this lovely comment. I'm so happy you're enjoying the game and you like the options currently available. Sans & WD are certainly fun routes to write, and the dynamic between the monsters & Frisk is one of my favorite things to write in this game. :)
Feel no pressure to go down the other routes, these games are made of love for love of the AU and meant to be enjoyed first. <3
New update!! New chapter!! Yippee!!! I was literally just browsing through itch.io rn looking for interesting games and thinking about when would this one get updated when the notification popped up lmao
Here's the typos I found!
- "Robert Haufer holds out a large bronze key." The typo is at the very last line you have yo click to go forward, your instead of you.
- "Wingding returns home in the early hours of Monday morning." Third line, brother instead of broter.
- "That tension in the air is thick.", "You had to learn to feed yourself and your brother, after all" is missing a period at the end.
As always, thank you so much for your wonderful writing! I haven't tried IF: UNDERSWAP yet, but I will when I come back from school tomorrow. :) Remember to take care of yourself properly! (Also also what pronouns do you use? I keep forgetting to ask you D:)
Cherished as always. My tired eyes thank you my dear.
You --> Your
broter --> brother
period added
Thank you for playing my game and helping spot the typos!! I hope school is treating you kindly. US update coming this weekend if you want to hold off so you can play through Snowdin in one go? :)
She/Her, but tbh I really don't mind what people address me as.
I just realized that the description talks about sooner or later, that’s why this so resembles it- I honestly have ptsd cause of the fic bro, when given the options to be a waitress or a singer, I looked at singer and went ballistic (if ykyk)
well (spoiler to anyone who hasn’t read super far)
The mc (the reader) picks a job to be a singer at Grillby’s bar, little do we know that that job offer is a trap for human trafficking. And so we get trafficked.
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The way I scream everytime I see that you updated... Istg you got me adicted-
Coming back to tell you there's a lil problem in the dialogue with Chara when we first meet them. I don't knwo why but I can't post a screenshot so imma just describe- I was in Sans route, with chocolate milk as my morning drink and when we have the talk about chocolate with Chara an error message appears like 3 times and it shows me the same dialogue with a few changes (so I don't know which one corresponds to my game). Hope it helped :")
every route has that error :(
This has just been fixed in the current update. :) Thank you for letting me know!
fufu thank you~~~
Hihi! Once more, thank you for the update! <3
I only found a couple of typos this time.
- I have no idea if this is new or not, but when checking the "Darling You" interface, at the bottom where it says in which route you are in, sans isn't capitalized in the Sans route.
- "And in walks another skeleton.", third paragraph, should be tiles instead of tile.
Absolutely loved the food war with Sans and Papyrus + Gaster's appearance later on. As an older sibling and the oldest cousin, I can confirm that is how it feels. Keep up the good work! Remember to take breaks when you need them!
I fixed the tile / tiles!
:D!! Yay, I'm so glad you enjoyed the food war and it didn't feel out of pocket. I was concerned it would be seen as too silly.
I always appreciate your help, thank you so much for playing my game!
In my status it says that "Your favorite dessert is chocolate pie." And yet at meeting Chara Mc has only the option to say that they don't like chocolate. Is this a bug?
Yes it is.Sadly🥲
What route are you on? You should have the option of saying you like chocolate. Are you getting an error message, or is it not showing up at all?
It works now, thanks <3
this has got to be my favorite game of yours the coming out bit was adorable and really makes me wish i had the corage to do it irl and the sibling dynamics between the skellenros and chara and asriel are supser well writen
Thank you, I'm so glad you like my game. I hope you can find the courage one day & your family be as accepting as Lawrence. <3
Got another bug. Papyrus route, the cooking scene. The cycle options are not showing.
Could you be more specific? Do you see an error or is it like a blank spot?
The little arrow wheel thing is there but there's no text next to it. There's no error text/box or anything though. I think three or four options are blank, but it's hard to tell since I can't tell when it's changed on the blank ones. Edit: did a quick run to test, "Your eyes widen in surprise." till "While inwardly shocked, you remain stoic." are there while the rest are blank.
Hello,I’ve found some errors once more
I‘m loving this game so damn much;good job! :D
Thank you!!
Thank you for letting me know about this, I've fixed it on my end and will update the game shortly.
Your welcome😌
My gender in this is male all routes and Chara in Ralseis route says "country $girl", also, your games are extremely good and I get very excited when I see new updates:-]
This has been fixed! Thank you for letting me know! :D And much appreciated for you to play my game & comment. <3
I really like this game! But i do have a question when first meeting chara while on Asriel's route i could only choose that my mc doesnt like chocolate while on the other routes i could pick between whether or not my mc likes chocolate or not. Is it supposdd to be like that?
I noticed that too! Thank you for asking them about it
This has been fixed, apologies for that!
Thank you!
I love this so much- I'm a HUGE UT fan, and well... It was only a day or two ago that my dumb self realized that UT fangames can be accessed through browsers. I searched far and wide for something like this- I really love all your works. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!!!
Ooo, thank you so much!! UT is such an amazing fandom, I'm so happy to be apart of it. I appreciate you taking the time to play & comment on my game.
I hope you like the new update!
THERE'S A NEW UPDATE?!!?!?!? YAYYYYY
I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEW ONE!
WOOO!
"—easy 'ere, $lassy," says Mister Eala.
I know ye'll do jus' fine, $lass.
"Aye, aye, Mister Pap-aye-ris. Get along $lassy."
is this a bug/typo ?
(playing the enby route btw)
This was indeed a mistake on my end, it is fixed in this update now.
I'm crying (idk if this is here for the other gender options but) the scene where we come out to Lawrence as enby is so cute and sweet i wish my brother was accepting like that
I LOVE THIS
i love the attention to detail Ralsei noticed i picked the same ice cream as him!
Omg there is a scene if mc is enby ? That's adorable I'm crying-
<3 The scene changes for all genders.
:D Thank you for noticing!! I'm happy you like that addition.
I'm so glad you liked that scene, although I'm sorry your bro isn't as awesome as Lawrence.
Hi,i found some typos
Hello,i‘ve found some typo’s 
I think I got the error fixed now!
Honestly really excited to cover this one as well XD Here is chapter 1 You knew I would cover this sooner or later.
so excited!!!
I can't wait to see you play through it. <3
I‘m curious how Daisy will react to us finding ourselves a boyfriend 😌
Fufufu, you'll get a chance to talk to her about it soon.
yay 😁
I‘m determined to find out what‘ll happen next! :)
Hii, how many chapters will this have in total?🥰 You're killing it!!
I'm not sure. Maybe 10-12?
Thank you for making me smile every day,i feel at ease every time i read your stories 😊
<3 I'm glad my stories can help brighten your day.
<3
YOOOOOOOO I GOT TO TRY THIS NOW!!
I've been busy so I wasn't able to, and now I'm excited again!! wahhhhhh...
Hope you have a good day/night by the way! and thank you for making these type of games sjdjgddudhu <3
OOOOO I hope you enjoy it!! No worries, I know life can be.
I hope you've had a wonderful day!!
HAHUDDKDKUJSU <33 I did enjoy it AAAAAAAAAAA
I'm foaming in the mouth,(don't worry, I'll be fine this is normal--) I'm excited to see how this ends!
hope you gets some rest sometimes tho! and hope you enjoy your weekends hhhhhhhh--
also, omg I forgot you can send images in these comments let me send one--
I f~ching love it!!! Can't wait for further updates!!!
:D! Thank you so much for playing, I hope you enjoy the update~
I love these games sm!! <3
Thank you so much!!
CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE!!
Dont know if its just me but only in Dream parts on mobile version Its all normal but if i switch to PC version it blinks,disappear and stuff Soo...?
The dream background should be moving on PC. Can you show a video of your error?
OKAY THEORY TIIIIME
Coming back here after re-reading "sooner or later you're gonna be mine". Particularly that one chapter with the stolen photo and the plotline around Sans' and Frisk REAL first meeting. Since this game has showna few similarities with the story of SLGBM, and little details mentioned by MC, I was wondering, have Sans and MC already met before ? Not gonna spoil and honestly this is just a lil stoopid theory but that would be interesting :).
That would indeed be interesting.
OH MY GOSH IT SOOOOOOOO AMAZING! I LOVE IT!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! WE'LL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!
THANK YOU!!! <33
Oh my.... I was just enjoying of the game until I had so much homework that I couldn't keep re-playing the routes with diff options! AND THEN, TODAY, I'M HERE CRYING BCS THERE IS AN UPDATE... <3
Espero se entienda lo que digo en ingles, jeje, realmente me gusta como voy mejorando, aprecio mucho cada actualización y ya he logrado de resolver lo del archivo de guardado..! (resulta que yo siempre lo descargaba pero una vez le cambie el nombre al archivo y por eso no me dejaba ponerlo ^^")
En este momento voy a jugar las nuevas actualizaciones, muchas gracias DarkPetal!
Your english is definitely improving, way to go!!
¡Estoy tan feliz de que haya descubierto qué estaba mal con su archivo SAVE!
Espero que les gusten las nuevas actualizaciones.
will we meet chef Gekkoa in this game aswell?In IF-UNDERFELL we only talked w/ him once and he‘s really seeming to be a nice guy (atleast i think so considering the fact that he made Papyrus smile)
I don't plan to add him. He was a one off character in UF.
my Lawrence:(in love with a bad bitch called Laura)Ain‘t love great?
me:(in a monsterfucker panic)MHMM…!
I love the way you tell stories, this one and the others are written so well. I feel like I could constantly go back through each one and never get bored. Which is not common for me. I hope you enjoy creating stuff like this, it's amazing to see and is truly fantastic.
Thank you! I'm so happy I can keep you entertained. :D
That interlude was a nice touch, seeing how you've affected others while your character themself has no clue. Good job :)
-the the boy, pixelboii
Thank you!! The interlude was not at all planned in my initial drafts but it felt good to add. Glad it was enjoyed.
YAY UPDATE
YAY COMMENT! :) Hope your day is going well!
Omg lmao I didn't see your comment. My day was great and I hope yours was great too :D
Spoilers ahead !
Oh god seeing the 3 brothers together was so interesting. We would probably be dead by now if we weren't in good terms with Sans or Pap. Oh and Sans the heartbreaker ? Hello ? I need to know more lmao. The story is really starting to become interesting with the clue mechanic, I'm in love with how dark it's starting to get, especially the thing with the yellow roses and Robert's head. Omg I have so much to say about how I feel about this, but I think what confuses me the most is how MC doesn't react to the fact that they have those yellow roses on their balcony (or window idk).
honestly for a moment I thought they were aschizophrenic and were Doctor Rose-Or maybe they are ? 👁👁
AAAAh an update!!!!! Thank you so much I really appreciate your writing and the fact that you also did an Underswap! I love your work and I'll keep playing these! Make sure to take care of yourself as well! :)
AAAH a comment!! :D Thank you for playing & commenting on my game. I hope you enjoy future updates!
Found a alight oversite in the Sans route. MC/Frisk doesn't react to Papyrus' last name. Either when he introduces himself at the bar or when meeting WD getting groceries. MC/Frisk doesn't register at all that Papyrus shares a last name with Sans and WD.
oooooooops haha. That's been added in now and will reflect in the next update.
It took me several reads to notice it so no worries. Still love your stuff so much. They have reignited my love of the wide fandom the original game has led to.
ohhhh i just saw the update, i never got a notification :(
but im gona play it now!!!!
i feel so bad about presing the old man for information i dont want him to be sad. :(
awwww the new chapter is so cute, well meby not the interludes begining. but everything else was cute!!!!! love it like usual.
oh why am i confused as to where the new yellow flower victim was killed even when i went there the day before?
:D Thank you for playing!! I'm glad you found most of it cute.
Thank you for spending your time to keep developing the game. I really love it. Couldn't wait to see where the story goes. I love how balance the main conflict along with romantic or frienship routes. It shows dinamic with such dark story. It's great that you really pay attention to detail and let us decide on every little things and like- keep it in database for later. I feel it so much customable and more importantly that choices are really matter in the game that it made the MC so close to us. Also, I really love Sans and his hot blooded vibe. Feels like he set the story on fire while in the dead-dark night. Wingding is my second favorite with his dinanic a bit similar but calmer and colder than Sans. Somehow his romantic sneak peek feels like enermous wave under the calm sea surface. I wonder how his personality is. I haven't read other romantic route since the other looks like great friends rather than lovers. Papyrus is a really nice gentleman while Ralsey is a considerate good man. Maybe I'll read it later though.
waaa
Thank you so kindly for this lovely comment. I'm so happy you're enjoying the game and you like the options currently available. Sans & WD are certainly fun routes to write, and the dynamic between the monsters & Frisk is one of my favorite things to write in this game. :)
Feel no pressure to go down the other routes, these games are made of love for love of the AU and meant to be enjoyed first. <3
New update!! New chapter!! Yippee!!!
I was literally just browsing through itch.io rn looking for interesting games and thinking about when would this one get updated when the notification popped up lmao
Here's the typos I found!
- "Robert Haufer holds out a large bronze key." The typo is at the very last line you have yo click to go forward, your instead of you.
- "Wingding returns home in the early hours of Monday morning." Third line, brother instead of broter.
- "That tension in the air is thick.", "You had to learn to feed yourself and your brother, after all" is missing a period at the end.
As always, thank you so much for your wonderful writing! I haven't tried IF: UNDERSWAP yet, but I will when I come back from school tomorrow. :) Remember to take care of yourself properly!
(Also also what pronouns do you use? I keep forgetting to ask you D:)
Cherished as always. My tired eyes thank you my dear.
You --> Your
broter --> brother
period added
Thank you for playing my game and helping spot the typos!! I hope school is treating you kindly. US update coming this weekend if you want to hold off so you can play through Snowdin in one go? :)
She/Her, but tbh I really don't mind what people address me as.
I just realized that the description talks about sooner or later, that’s why this so resembles it- I honestly have ptsd cause of the fic bro, when given the options to be a waitress or a singer, I looked at singer and went ballistic (if ykyk)
well (spoiler to anyone who hasn’t read super far)
The mc (the reader) picks a job to be a singer at Grillby’s bar, little do we know that that job offer is a trap for human trafficking. And so we get trafficked.
wait what? Which route was that if you don't mind me asking?
it's in the fanfiction! there isn't a route for that, hopefully *stares at the creator*