a soft sorrow as the game is a demo, but still packed with so much tasty story to munch upon like sweet chocolate all the while. I really love how you wrote the undertale characters, truly drew me in. as my only other interaction with mafiatale content is a webtoon comic about it, through this Sans is so much better then the comic drawn about the fanfic lol.
seeing the clues on the side was such an interesting lil bit, opening them up and reading the bits of information the character collects throughout the game. loved the jumps from awake to dream, and not only that but the visuals on the text really grab hold of one's attention and just keeps luring me back in. which happened as that hecking doctor rose I kept getting caught by him. I didn't even realize my choices led me to that end until I looked in the comments for the answer.
overall such a true hecking joy with playing what has been put out so far and can't wait for what's to come
OH GOD I just couldn't, i ended up closing my game and siting on my chair for about 20 minutes before coming back and realise what just happen, like WHAT THE HECK SANS.I cried when he killed me.
I js wanna say ily guys in the comments like a month ago i gave up on chapter seven cuz i kept ending up dying to the flower mf and i had been playing for like 6 hours ☠ and now i have successfully finished cuz of tips and what not so HSJAJJSJDJSJS TY GUYS
Lovely game, decided to check it out after the Horrortale one. It was amazing, dark, but witty and interesting. I look forward to seeing the other updates.
how to not die to our beloved doctor rose (not in order)
- look out the window on the first night to witness kidnapping
- go for the run before you sleep and linger at the scene
- show some kindness!
- while on asriel play date with sweets choose swan park to witness more kidnappings
- there will be two times where player can choose what to do. first time being (hobby)(daisy)(lunch) and second being (rest)(daisy)(pillow). for the first choice choose (daisy)(lunch), the second choose (rest)(pillow)
- after choosing (rest) make sure to investigate the apartment and press the dude for information regarding his son, do not let the subject go. select “What if they’re all connected.” when it pops up
- at the black swan after papyrus asks you to show up, don’t leave on the first choice but leave with chara and asriel after they ask you
- at some point there will be an option to check out the apartment before or after the run, choose before
- also when you interact with the neighbors son if you want to learn about the deathless beast choose (compliment rolex)(he adores you)(looks forward to your visits)
Sorry for the late reply... ^^' *WARNING TO WHOEVER IS READING THIS, IF YOU WANT TO FIGURE OUT ON YOUR OWN DON'T READ THIS COMMENT*
Just in case LOL But here is it:
Chapter3 - Scene(You are rudely awaken by gunshots.): Go to the window. -Scene(You see an older man sobbing.): Go to the man kneeling on the street. Mr. Scott. -Scene(You have some time before work. What should you do?): Go to the flower shop / Go treat yourself to a nice lunch.
Chapter4 -Scene(you do not feel tired. How would you like to spend your night?): Go for a run. -Scene(You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.): Linger and assess. -> Jump back -> Go into the alleyway -Scene(You are out with Ralsei/Asriel): There's a swan park not far from here.
Chapter45 -Scene(First choice of the chapter): You need to buy a new pillow -Scene(Gaster confronts you): You decide to give him a chance. -> Relax at home. -Scene(You wonder how Mr. Scott is doing.): Check up on him. -> Gently ask about his son. -> Inquire about Edward. -> Is that the only reason? -> You softly ask him to tell you what he knows.
Chapter6 -Scene(Ralsei calls you from the mirror.): Sure. You'll meet up with them. -Scene(If you’re not needed, then there is no reason to stay.): Stay. -Scene(Chara invites you for another movie.): Answer honestly. -> You think it’s more important to leave. -Scene(idk what your route, mine is Sans, and he is upset): You move to catch his hand.
-And if you got the 'Memories bleed into your dreams again.' You did it-
Just to make sure..... You didn't go to the Flower shop more than once after you got the clue, right? Also.... Not sure if it will affect the results or not, but when you went and cooked with Papyrus, I asked all questions and did you go against the love interest you choose? (In my case I helped Papyrus in the food fight)... Again, not sure if these are needed to be not killed by Doc. Rose...
Or you could restart the game, and see if that helps
I'm having a bit of trouble in chapter 7, no matter what I do, Dr Rose always kills me. I've followed all the tips people has left in the comments, but it always ends in the same way. Idk what else I can do. I remember I stayed at home un chapter 5 and I went with Asriel and Chara in chapter 6, but nothing changes, I've seen that I should investigate Mr Scott apartment but I never get that choice. I'm in Sans route, anybody has some tips? I want to see what happens without dying ;-;
When you are at the part where you have to buy a pillow, choose to stay at home first, then you get the option to check up on Mr.scott, and you should get the option to go check in his apartment right before your run.
I remember I did and I got the clues, I could see the clues in the list I have, maybe I just have to go back again, I haven't played since a week so I might be wrong...? Idk, but I'll go back still
I'm honestly super excited for when more updates/chapters are uploaded. I am already pretty interested in this game compared to many I have seen here (No hate to them). Nevertheless, keep up this rad game, honestly. <3
how do i not die in chapter 7? I am doing the sans route and after i escape to bar i get grabed by DR rose and I die but i don't know how to get passed it can someone help please
EDIT I manged to do at last and i don't know how i did it lol
Ok I've tried about 6 times and I can't get past this. If I follow all of the clues then Gaster kills me because I didn't go get a stupid pillow, but if I do get the pillow instead of going to Daisy's shop then I get killed by Rose. I don't understand what I'm doing wrong. i follow every clue given in the comments and it's always either Gaster or Dr. Rose killing me.
I love this game but I'm getting so frustrated. How on earth do I survive past CH 6 and 7?????? I just wanted to romance a skeleton ;-;
I did that. i went to Daisy's the first time and went to get the pillow the second time, but then Rose still killed me. I didn't even get the option to go to the apartment before my run despite following all the other instructions. Maybe my game just glitched or something.
I did that too :3 Again, I think maybe I was just too tired or my game glitched. I'll give it a couple of days and try again. I'm sure my pc is just messing with me. It's an old pc and it does glitch at times. Probably a problem on my end.
This game has been out for only a few months yet there is so much quality content !
As an aspiring writer I must say I really admire your dedication !
I really love what you did with the nightmare sequences, your use of fonts and the "animated" text, and how you incorporated choices in a very organic way. This has to be the best and most creative use of twine i've seen on this website !
Keep up the good work <3 and thanks for this amazingly immersive story
My, oh my, I felt being spoilt in this game you created. I am on the Winding Route. It's making me want to draw a fanart for some particular scene on your game!
Note : I am not really good at English. I might write something wrong. I never meant to offend anyone or you!
Alright so! MAJOR SPOILERS (as we will be starting from the start of gathering clues all the way to the latest) but allow me to help guide with the undeniable fact that we all have a hard time trying to find all the clues and keep getting the obsessive Doctor Rose in our ass (well for me personally...). Also that I rejoiced tears of pure happiness when I finally didn't have to see Doctor Rose's stupid mask.
NOTE: Important thing to mention is that I was playing in Asriel's romantic route, therefore some of my decisions are based on that. If you either play a different RO's route or the friendship route, do try to experiment around for the RO's romantic route and maybe investigate the different clues.
Chapter 3
During the gunshoot scene, move to go to the window.
Go to the man that's kneeling to comfort him.
When you have time before you go to work, go visit Daisy.
Then, go treat yourself for a nice lunch.
Chapter 4
Go for a run at night time.
Then, linger and assess.
Visit the swan park during the "date" or maybe guide segment (I dunno if it's available for all since I'm playing exclusively for Asriel but I assume it has to be!)
Chapter 5
THIS IS IMPORTANT! Buy a new pillow so Gaster won't kill your ass.
Then relax at home, also VERY IMPORTANT as it unlocks clues that Mr. Scott can give us.
Decide to check up on him, poor man is not only feeding us information but also going through grief.
This segment is where you continuously pry for information, and since Gaster won't woop yo ass you'll get to live another day and NOT experience Bad Ending 3 (am I still bitter?? Hell yes!)
Chapter 6
I'm not sure if this is necessary (since I'm on the Asriel route) but since this connects to another key part, if Asriel invites you to go to the movies with him and Chara, go so you can be acquainted with Chara early on. (Again, I'm not sure if this is exclusive or not but I have died like... more than 3 times at this point from either GASTER or DOCTOR FUCKING ROSE so I am traumatized.)
Also if you're on that route, just praise the chocolate lords so Chara be like "Yes, this is my best friend/partner, Asriel go find your own".
Stay when you find out that the Black Swan is not technically short staffed.
When Chara and Asriel ask you about your brother, answer honestly.
When they ask if they could help you, choose to leave with them.
AND IF YOU GET THE MEMORY OF LAWRENCE AT THE ENDING OF CHAPTER 6, CONGRATS YOU ARE FREE FROM THE HELL OF EITHER DYING BY DOCTOR ROSE OR SOME OTHER SICK BASTARD! HALLELUJAH!
Chapter 7
If done properly, you should have the option to check on Mr. Scott's apartment before or after (if not, go back to the beginning or as where I did, whether you want a friendship or romantic route) for me I chose before the morning run.
Step inside and investigate wherein you will meet with Edward.
Upon entering, you will try to connect the clues but choose the "maybe they're all connected" option.
Now here you'll meet Edward wherein you will lie and butter up to him (in the first choice to get him to be interested in you) so choose to call them to wait. I can provide a detail explanation but if you wanna try by yourself, just know that Edward apparently wants lies where Mr. Scott actually liked him even though it was obvious he hated him and he'll open up about the Dreamless Beast.
Here is a more condensed guide if you just don't want to take chances: Compliment watch, father must be proud, Mr. Scott must have adored you, and Mr. Scott looking forward to your visits.
AND FINALLY! If you were able to get the ending where you were able to ask "someone" (I'm not sure if it's automatically Asriel or if it can be anyone else) for help then congrats amigo! You passed the death sequences!!
I am finally free... I hope this helped ya'll! And also I just wanted to say HOLY FUCK THAT WAS INTENSE I ABSOLUTELY ADORED IT!!!
NOTE: I think a sign that says that you're on the Doctor Rose Bastard Bad Ending is when you recieve a bouquet of yellow roses by your door coupled with a cheesy poem (from my experience). If that happens, quickly go back on your save file annd go. I think the ways you can trigger it (in my experience) is if you set your favorite flower as yellow roses, painting a picture of your yellow roses, and instead of going to the swan park, you go to another dessert shop and witness the crime scene of Doctor Rose Bastard. Maybe that's why he's so obsessed with you?
Either way, as long as you avoid them, maybe you won't get his bad endings when you get incomplete clues or not enough affection with your intended RO's. Goodluck, soldiers o7
Hmm I'm not too sure as well because I did saw a comment talking about how Sans would kill them for going out with Ralsei and Chara, have you tried staying a second time in the bar before moving on?
Sans only kidnaps you if you don't return his affections on the date. You know you're on the good path with him if your first dessert option hanging out with Ralsei is a cinnamon pretzel.
Maybe your affection with Sans is still low or you're missing some options? You might want to save religiously and fuck around and find out at this point :')))
No problem! Though it is kinda biased since I'm on the Asriel route so I'm not sure if it can be helpful to peeps who are on different routes themselves, but maybe it can give them an idea of what to expect?
Either way, absolutely looking forward to this unravelling mystery! But also at the same time, good luck friend having to write all of these threads around :'))) !!
Okay, so important question is if you're in a romantic route that isn't Asriel or in the friendship route, because some of my steps are from my experience while I was playing in Asriel's route. I'm unsure how you can trigger Rose Bastard but I think it's because for my character, I had it put that her favorite rose was yellow rose and she painted a picture of her yellow roses, and if somewhere in Chapter 4 (I think) you receive a bouquet of yellow roses with a cheesy poem, that means you're gunning for Rose Bastard's bad ending and that you must have missed either a clue or a romantic trigger with your chosen love interest (again, I'm unsure regarding the friendship route, maybe it's all about clues instead?) I hope this has helped in triggering your deductive senses, just save liberally and have some patience (that or you can rage quit without hurting yourself to relieve the stress)!
Hello! I'm not too sure entirely but I think if you pick too many choices that coincide with Doctor Rose's motive or method of killing, then he'll be interested in you and hunt you down if you don't gather clues or raise your affection with your chosen LI. It's all just speculation lmao
No problem! I understand that it can get really confusing especially with the mysterious factors and how easy it can get a bad ending if you're not careful. But now that you know the way to complete the story I highly recommend you replay the story and take your time reading it since it's genuinely so cool! Let's wish all of ourselves luck for the next update AHAHAHH
I keep on dying at chapter 7 when the window smashes at the bar when I'm with the detective, I tried each and over one of the options, why? I'm seriously invested and this confuses me, great game though! I throughly enjoy the experience and I wish to play more! c:
Commenting a bit later than usual! Been a bit busy with college related stuff D: As always, thank you so much for the new chapter.
Typos I found for chapter seven:
- "You adjust your cap and walk across the street.", friend instead of frend in "Frend of the family."
- "You are not detective." There should be an "a" between are and not.
- "The air in the Black Swan feels darker than normal.", "It's scary," Last sentence on that line has an extra quotation mark.
- Page starts with "It's evening, and by the time Detective Peterson leads you to a dinner, it's dark outside." I think it should be diner instead of dinner, but again, english is not my first language so I'm not sure. D:
- On the same page, there should be a comma in "What did you see Robert?" I think??
- Page starts with what the MC chose to be their giveaway that danger is near. (In my case, it's "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.") Paragraph starts with "Glassy eyes of dead patrons stare at you.", diner has extra n.
- "Quiet." Paragraph starts with "You move into his booth", not instead of nto.
I also ran into a little issue?? Every time there was a noun related to my gender, like miss, for example, a little dollar sign would pop up at its left. Not sure if it's just me.
Keep up the good work! It's always such a pleasure to find a new chapter posted, and your incredible writing always makes me really get into the story. Again, thank you so much. :)
I'm having a hard time on getting the option to investigate the old man's apartment. I did open up to chara and asriel about Lawrence and went with them. I only got this much clues. Can someone help me?
you probably missed the same thing I did in chapter 5 as soon as you get the option to stay home on do so you will then get to go check on Mr Scott if you have done this option already. Then you probably missed something else.
my brother missing, there was a shootout outside my apartment, doctor rose is back, i almost died to drunk mafioso's somebody sent me a head in a box, i wanna have a food fight with two skeletons 10/10
to anyone who's struggling to get past doctor rose and listened to the comments, i found out that i needed to leave with chara and asriel when i opened up to them about lawrence (chapter 6). after that, you'll be able to investigate the old man who lost his son's apartment, you need to also choose the choice that says ”maybe they're all connected” to be able to talk to edward blind.
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such a nice game well done really loved it. i can see you put a lot of effort and time
help i keep on dying because of the damn doctor, can someone please help me ? but great game tho !! keep going, keep slaying !!
I can't remember who posted it but there's comment that details everything you need to do to get past the doctor,it's not too far back iirc
damn, you're litteraly a life saver for telling me this, thanks so much pal !! giving you smooches
I have a suspicion that the Deathless Beast is somehow our bro...
this sounds so ominous and unlikely that it feels like it must be true :(
Oh yeah, me too. He got riled up when he heard "risk"... because it sounds like "Frisk" I bet.
a soft sorrow as the game is a demo, but still packed with so much tasty story to munch upon like sweet chocolate all the while. I really love how you wrote the undertale characters, truly drew me in. as my only other interaction with mafiatale content is a webtoon comic about it, through this Sans is so much better then the comic drawn about the fanfic lol.
seeing the clues on the side was such an interesting lil bit, opening them up and reading the bits of information the character collects throughout the game. loved the jumps from awake to dream, and not only that but the visuals on the text really grab hold of one's attention and just keeps luring me back in. which happened as that hecking doctor rose I kept getting caught by him. I didn't even realize my choices led me to that end until I looked in the comments for the answer.
overall such a true hecking joy with playing what has been put out so far and can't wait for what's to come
I AM IN MUCH NEED OF ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON (tysm for all ur hard work <3)
i will stay physically, mentally and emotionally unwell until the next chapter comes out
Honestly, same 😂
I'm with you there.
Sans got me riled up bro..
FOR REAL. the kiss scene got me acting up
i'll actually sob if this gets discontinued
OH GOD I just couldn't, i ended up closing my game and siting on my chair for about 20 minutes before coming back and realise what just happen, like WHAT THE HECK SANS.I cried when he killed me.
I will literally start sobbing endlessly if I don’t see another chapter
I love this game sooooo much !
It's incredible, the choice of music are awesome and well...
Sans....😍
Funny bone man simp real
This game is honestly one of the best if’s I read in a really long time ty!!
oh my god you have singlehandedly reactivated my undertale brainrot YOU HAVE SUCH GOOD WRITING IM EATING ALL THIS UP!!!
LITERALLY ME TO
I js wanna say ily guys in the comments like a month ago i gave up on chapter seven cuz i kept ending up dying to the flower mf and i had been playing for like 6 hours ☠ and now i have successfully finished cuz of tips and what not so HSJAJJSJDJSJS TY GUYS
I can't wait for the next update. Thank you so much for doing this. Creating this masterpiece for us. ♡♡♡♡
i am obsessed, you are an amazing authorrr <33333
Literally, HOW ARE THEY SO GOOD AT STORIES???
I keep getting killed in Chapter 7 (Detective Peterson) and I have no clue how to survive, is there any way y'all can help?
check Laurus's comment!! if you need any help though you can always ask me!!
Lovely game, decided to check it out after the Horrortale one. It was amazing, dark, but witty and interesting. I look forward to seeing the other updates.
how to not die to our beloved doctor rose (not in order)
- look out the window on the first night to witness kidnapping
- go for the run before you sleep and linger at the scene
- show some kindness!
- while on asriel play date with sweets choose swan park to witness more kidnappings
- there will be two times where player can choose what to do. first time being (hobby)(daisy)(lunch) and second being (rest)(daisy)(pillow). for the first choice choose (daisy)(lunch), the second choose (rest)(pillow)
- after choosing (rest) make sure to investigate the apartment and press the dude for information regarding his son, do not let the subject go. select “What if they’re all connected.” when it pops up
- at the black swan after papyrus asks you to show up, don’t leave on the first choice but leave with chara and asriel after they ask you
- at some point there will be an option to check out the apartment before or after the run, choose before
- also when you interact with the neighbors son if you want to learn about the deathless beast choose (compliment rolex)(he adores you)(looks forward to your visits)
i’m p sure that’s it
Thank you! This helped me so much.
Thank you so much
i need help im on the wingding romance route and i just cant im on 6-7 pls someone answer m
OMG this is so good!I'm looking forwards for the next update!
(And I finally made it. I survived Ch.7, figured out what I did worng)
If it's not to much of a bother, what did you do to not die by Doctor Rose?
Sorry for the late reply... ^^'
*WARNING TO WHOEVER IS READING THIS, IF YOU WANT TO FIGURE OUT ON YOUR OWN DON'T READ THIS COMMENT*
Just in case LOL
But here is it:
Chapter3
- Scene(You are rudely awaken by gunshots.): Go to the window.
-Scene(You see an older man sobbing.): Go to the man kneeling on the street. Mr. Scott.
-Scene(You have some time before work. What should you do?): Go to the flower shop / Go treat yourself to a nice lunch.
Chapter4
-Scene(you do not feel tired. How would you like to spend your night?): Go for a run.
-Scene(You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.):
Linger and assess. -> Jump back -> Go into the alleyway
-Scene(You are out with Ralsei/Asriel): There's a swan park not far from here.
Chapter45
-Scene(First choice of the chapter): You need to buy a new pillow
-Scene(Gaster confronts you): You decide to give him a chance. -> Relax at home.
-Scene(You wonder how Mr. Scott is doing.):
Check up on him. -> Gently ask about his son. -> Inquire about Edward. -> Is that the only reason? -> You softly ask him to tell you what he knows.
Chapter6
-Scene(Ralsei calls you from the mirror.): Sure. You'll meet up with them.
-Scene(If you’re not needed, then there is no reason to stay.): Stay.
-Scene(Chara invites you for another movie.): Answer honestly. -> You think it’s more important to leave.
-Scene(idk what your route, mine is Sans, and he is upset): You move to catch his hand.
-And if you got the 'Memories bleed into your dreams again.' You did it-
BRO I DID IT AND STILL GOT KILLED BY DOCTOR ROSE :(
*SPOILERS WARNING AGAIN*
Just to make sure..... You didn't go to the Flower shop more than once after you got the clue, right?
Also.... Not sure if it will affect the results or not, but when you went and cooked with Papyrus, I asked all questions and did you go against the love interest you choose? (In my case I helped Papyrus in the food fight)... Again, not sure if these are needed to be not killed by Doc. Rose...
Or you could restart the game, and see if that helps
what clue exactly? I keep dying to doctor rose as well
I'm having a bit of trouble in chapter 7, no matter what I do, Dr Rose always kills me. I've followed all the tips people has left in the comments, but it always ends in the same way. Idk what else I can do. I remember I stayed at home un chapter 5 and I went with Asriel and Chara in chapter 6, but nothing changes, I've seen that I should investigate Mr Scott apartment but I never get that choice. I'm in Sans route, anybody has some tips? I want to see what happens without dying ;-;
When you are at the part where you have to buy a pillow, choose to stay at home first, then you get the option to check up on Mr.scott, and you should get the option to go check in his apartment right before your run.
that's on chapter 5 right? I have to go back? Damn, the choices really matter, I love it, thanks for the help.
After the date with Sans, did you go to the swan park with Ralsei/Asriel?
yeah, I did
And in chapter 5 (after you bought the pillow and stayed home) did it trigger to visit Mr. Scott?
I remember I did and I got the clues, I could see the clues in the list I have, maybe I just have to go back again, I haven't played since a week so I might be wrong...? Idk, but I'll go back still
Ok, if you want I can go back and track my choices?
I'm honestly super excited for when more updates/chapters are uploaded. I am already pretty interested in this game compared to many I have seen here (No hate to them). Nevertheless, keep up this rad game, honestly. <3
is there a walkthrough as I've gotten killed and I don't know how many clues there are on chapter six
how do i not die in chapter 7? I am doing the sans route and after i escape to bar i get grabed by DR rose and I die but i don't know how to get passed it can someone help please
EDIT I manged to do at last and i don't know how i did it lol
Hello, i am also stuck on that chapter, if you come to remember how you passed it i would greatly appreciate some help 😅
(PS : English isn't my first language, sorry if my vocabulary isn't perfect)
Ok I've tried about 6 times and I can't get past this. If I follow all of the clues then Gaster kills me because I didn't go get a stupid pillow, but if I do get the pillow instead of going to Daisy's shop then I get killed by Rose. I don't understand what I'm doing wrong. i follow every clue given in the comments and it's always either Gaster or Dr. Rose killing me.
I love this game but I'm getting so frustrated. How on earth do I survive past CH 6 and 7?????? I just wanted to romance a skeleton ;-;
Maybe try to get all of the clues, get the pillow and avoid visiting Daisy for the second time?
After all its only necessary to visit Daisy one time, only to get the clue about doctor rose.
Also make sure you check up and visit before your run to mr.scott's apartment, and talk to Edward to be able to go to the next chapter.
I did that. i went to Daisy's the first time and went to get the pillow the second time, but then Rose still killed me. I didn't even get the option to go to the apartment before my run despite following all the other instructions. Maybe my game just glitched or something.
Try to first check up on mr.scott before buying the pillow
I did that too :3 Again, I think maybe I was just too tired or my game glitched. I'll give it a couple of days and try again. I'm sure my pc is just messing with me. It's an old pc and it does glitch at times. Probably a problem on my end.
i don't think so cause i'm going through the same thing i'm stuckkk and sadd ;(
bro i love Asriel
This game has been out for only a few months yet there is so much quality content !
As an aspiring writer I must say I really admire your dedication !
I really love what you did with the nightmare sequences, your use of fonts and the "animated" text, and how you incorporated choices in a very organic way. This has to be the best and most creative use of twine i've seen on this website !
Keep up the good work <3 and thanks for this amazingly immersive story
ROs freaking hawties, keep replaying so many times 😩🥰
My, oh my, I felt being spoilt in this game you created. I am on the Winding Route. It's making me want to draw a fanart for some particular scene on your game!
Note : I am not really good at English. I might write something wrong. I never meant to offend anyone or you!
Alright so! MAJOR SPOILERS (as we will be starting from the start of gathering clues all the way to the latest) but allow me to help guide with the undeniable fact that we all have a hard time trying to find all the clues and keep getting the obsessive Doctor Rose in our ass (well for me personally...). Also that I rejoiced tears of pure happiness when I finally didn't have to see Doctor Rose's stupid mask.
NOTE: Important thing to mention is that I was playing in Asriel's romantic route, therefore some of my decisions are based on that. If you either play a different RO's route or the friendship route, do try to experiment around for the RO's romantic route and maybe investigate the different clues.
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
I am finally free... I hope this helped ya'll! And also I just wanted to say HOLY FUCK THAT WAS INTENSE I ABSOLUTELY ADORED IT!!!
NOTE: I think a sign that says that you're on the Doctor Rose Bastard Bad Ending is when you recieve a bouquet of yellow roses by your door coupled with a cheesy poem (from my experience). If that happens, quickly go back on your save file annd go. I think the ways you can trigger it (in my experience) is if you set your favorite flower as yellow roses, painting a picture of your yellow roses, and instead of going to the swan park, you go to another dessert shop and witness the crime scene of Doctor Rose Bastard. Maybe that's why he's so obsessed with you?
Either way, as long as you avoid them, maybe you won't get his bad endings when you get incomplete clues or not enough affection with your intended RO's. Goodluck, soldiers o7
oof I literally did all that but Sans just kills me for leaving with Ralsei and Chara in chapter 6 and idk how to avoid that- (I'm on the sans route)
Hmm I'm not too sure as well because I did saw a comment talking about how Sans would kill them for going out with Ralsei and Chara, have you tried staying a second time in the bar before moving on?
Yep, I did. And then I got killed by doctor Rose after doing that qwq
Did you by any chance decided to take it slow with sans?
Well, after your comment I did try picking that option, but that still doesn't do anything significant.. he still kills me
Sans only kidnaps you if you don't return his affections on the date. You know you're on the good path with him if your first dessert option hanging out with Ralsei is a cinnamon pretzel.
I love how niche that is-- cinnamon pretzel saves the Sans route!
Omg yes I finally got past him! Tyy!! ^^
the cinnamon pretzel is probably because when you ask him about his favourite dessert he says that its cin-pretzel! very nice detail
Maybe your affection with Sans is still low or you're missing some options? You might want to save religiously and fuck around and find out at this point :')))
Yep I did just that, I hadn't chosen the cinnamon pretzels in the dessert options, so he killed me for it, lol
I really appreciate you making this. (: Was reluctant to do a big guide since this is a mystery~~~ so very happy to see this made!
No problem! Though it is kinda biased since I'm on the Asriel route so I'm not sure if it can be helpful to peeps who are on different routes themselves, but maybe it can give them an idea of what to expect?
Either way, absolutely looking forward to this unravelling mystery! But also at the same time, good luck friend having to write all of these threads around :'))) !!
I'm still being killed by the goofy rose bastard but i followed all your steps, help?
Okay, so important question is if you're in a romantic route that isn't Asriel or in the friendship route, because some of my steps are from my experience while I was playing in Asriel's route. I'm unsure how you can trigger Rose Bastard but I think it's because for my character, I had it put that her favorite rose was yellow rose and she painted a picture of her yellow roses, and if somewhere in Chapter 4 (I think) you receive a bouquet of yellow roses with a cheesy poem, that means you're gunning for Rose Bastard's bad ending and that you must have missed either a clue or a romantic trigger with your chosen love interest (again, I'm unsure regarding the friendship route, maybe it's all about clues instead?) I hope this has helped in triggering your deductive senses, just save liberally and have some patience (that or you can rage quit without hurting yourself to relieve the stress)!
does picking the yellow flower as your favorite have something to do with doctor rose killing you?
Hello! I'm not too sure entirely but I think if you pick too many choices that coincide with Doctor Rose's motive or method of killing, then he'll be interested in you and hunt you down if you don't gather clues or raise your affection with your chosen LI. It's all just speculation lmao
THANK YOU SM literally this was the comment that rlly helped me bc when i first played through i didn't even know who edward was and was so confused
No problem! I understand that it can get really confusing especially with the mysterious factors and how easy it can get a bad ending if you're not careful. But now that you know the way to complete the story I highly recommend you replay the story and take your time reading it since it's genuinely so cool! Let's wish all of ourselves luck for the next update AHAHAHH
Definitely gonna replay now that Ik what to do! This game is so thought out it makes me want to play through every route just to read it
good as always, iv been sick so i havent been playing, love it.
I keep on dying at chapter 7 when the window smashes at the bar when I'm with the detective, I tried each and over one of the options, why? I'm seriously invested and this confuses me, great game though! I throughly enjoy the experience and I wish to play more! c:
You should try leaving with ralsei and chara the second time you get the option to stay or leave. That might help!
I got killed by dr rose, is there a way to avoid that?
Get all the clues and make sure you go with Ralsei and Chara
Romancing Wingding is a trip ya'll. As usual. 1000/10 update. I wait with baited breath for the next one.
I got all the clues but I still got the void ending?? Help 😭
i just meta-gamed my way to the ending but idc i needed the lore *-*
Darkpetal, are you overworking? You did so many updates! Please take a rest from time to time
Commenting a bit later than usual! Been a bit busy with college related stuff D: As always, thank you so much for the new chapter.
Typos I found for chapter seven:
- "You adjust your cap and walk across the street.", friend instead of frend in "Frend of the family."
- "You are not detective." There should be an "a" between are and not.
- "The air in the Black Swan feels darker than normal.", "It's scary," Last sentence on that line has an extra quotation mark.
- Page starts with "It's evening, and by the time Detective Peterson leads you to a dinner, it's dark outside." I think it should be diner instead of dinner, but again, english is not my first language so I'm not sure. D:
- On the same page, there should be a comma in "What did you see Robert?" I think??
- Page starts with what the MC chose to be their giveaway that danger is near. (In my case, it's "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.") Paragraph starts with "Glassy eyes of dead patrons stare at you.", diner has extra n.
- "Quiet." Paragraph starts with "You move into his booth", not instead of nto.
I also ran into a little issue?? Every time there was a noun related to my gender, like miss, for example, a little dollar sign would pop up at its left. Not sure if it's just me.
Keep up the good work! It's always such a pleasure to find a new chapter posted, and your incredible writing always makes me really get into the story. Again, thank you so much. :)
I'm having a hard time on getting the option to investigate the old man's apartment. I did open up to chara and asriel about Lawrence and went with them. I only got this much clues. Can someone help me?
you probably missed the same thing I did in chapter 5 as soon as you get the option to stay home on do so you will then get to go check on Mr Scott if you have done this option already. Then you probably missed something else.
my brother missing, there was a shootout outside my apartment, doctor rose is back, i almost died to drunk mafioso's somebody sent me a head in a box, i wanna have a food fight with two skeletons 10/10
to anyone who's struggling to get past doctor rose and listened to the comments, i found out that i needed to leave with chara and asriel when i opened up to them about lawrence (chapter 6). after that, you'll be able to investigate the old man who lost his son's apartment, you need to also choose the choice that says ”maybe they're all connected” to be able to talk to edward blind.
‘petal16 your work is the most beautiful I’ve ever read in my life,I am glad that I was the very first to have commented on this game back then :)
(For those that don’t believe me,scroll all the way down to the very first comment.
Or don‘t, I cannot force you)
i keep dying:( i believe got everything except for the option to talk to edwards. in what chapter do you talk with him?
chapter 6 ig?