Commenting a bit later than usual! Been a bit busy with college related stuff D: As always, thank you so much for the new chapter.
Typos I found for chapter seven:
- "You adjust your cap and walk across the street.", friend instead of frend in "Frend of the family."
- "You are not detective." There should be an "a" between are and not.
- "The air in the Black Swan feels darker than normal.", "It's scary," Last sentence on that line has an extra quotation mark.
- Page starts with "It's evening, and by the time Detective Peterson leads you to a dinner, it's dark outside." I think it should be diner instead of dinner, but again, english is not my first language so I'm not sure. D:
- On the same page, there should be a comma in "What did you see Robert?" I think??
- Page starts with what the MC chose to be their giveaway that danger is near. (In my case, it's "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.") Paragraph starts with "Glassy eyes of dead patrons stare at you.", diner has extra n.
- "Quiet." Paragraph starts with "You move into his booth", not instead of nto.
I also ran into a little issue?? Every time there was a noun related to my gender, like miss, for example, a little dollar sign would pop up at its left. Not sure if it's just me.
Keep up the good work! It's always such a pleasure to find a new chapter posted, and your incredible writing always makes me really get into the story. Again, thank you so much. :)
I'm having a hard time on getting the option to investigate the old man's apartment. I did open up to chara and asriel about Lawrence and went with them. I only got this much clues. Can someone help me?
you probably missed the same thing I did in chapter 5 as soon as you get the option to stay home on do so you will then get to go check on Mr Scott if you have done this option already. Then you probably missed something else.
my brother missing, there was a shootout outside my apartment, doctor rose is back, i almost died to drunk mafioso's somebody sent me a head in a box, i wanna have a food fight with two skeletons 10/10
to anyone who's struggling to get past doctor rose and listened to the comments, i found out that i needed to leave with chara and asriel when i opened up to them about lawrence (chapter 6). after that, you'll be able to investigate the old man who lost his son's apartment, you need to also choose the choice that says ”maybe they're all connected” to be able to talk to edward blind.
Guys I hope this helps. Everything that was written here is true, but there is one more thing. In the selection with a flower girl, hobby and food, you need to choose a flower girl and go to eat. If at the end of chapter 6 you had a nightmare about your brother, then you did everything right and you will have the opportunity to inspect the apartment before jogging at the beginning of chapter 7.
So if anyone is STILL having any problems with Doc.Rose these are the things I did in order to avoid him.
1. It’s already been put in the comments section so I’m not going to type it again but like so many people have said, you NEED to find all the clues and the comment below mine is exactly what you do.
2. Now I don’t know if this is the choice you HAVE to make but what I did for chapter 6, when Papyrus asks us to stay at the restaurant was when the first choice of either leaving or staying appears, click on stay. Then when you get the choice of leaving or staying a second time, click leave. Ralsei and Chara will come with you.
3.Once I did this I managed to get the choice of visiting the apartment of Mr.Scott again. The choice visit him after or before your morning run appears, click BEFORE.
Again I don’t know if you have to do these choices but these are the ones that work for me. Goodluck!
IM FERAL FOAMING AT THE MOUTH I GOT ALL THE CLUES i havent even met the doctor so all the comments are making me laugh im so hyped MC is meant to be a detective just like their brother, i love this so much. Thank you for continuing!!
I literally only made one comment? And I was just excited, I wasn't being toxic. I met the doctor on my other routes when i played them after i commented.
I laughed with people, not at them. And I didn't rub it in anyone's face by saying I got a different ending?
The fact that people got mad over my comment is mind-boggling.
it's fine. I understand reading tone through text can be difficult, I've been there. I just genuinely wasn't trying to rub anything in anyone's face. I was just excited.
Dude i died twice. So after the shooting you go to the window and investigate. Then the next day you will see the old man in the street you speak to him, then on the day you have off you choose to relax and go visit the old man and ask him all the questions about his son, then you need to go visit him again before your run and butter the hell out of edward until he talks to you about the beast then and only then u dont die. I just saw tht myself. U also needed to visit swan lake with rasiel, visit daisy the first time. And running in the park seeing those sketchy guys. I think thats all the clues. You will know once you get edward to talk about taking ronnie to the beast. Until you see tht in nr scotts apartment you will still die by the good doc. Hope tht helps everyone!
We were able to come out alive,no matter the situation,like when we ran away with Lawrence from dad or when we were chased by those drunk mafiosos!Doctor Rose will be tricky to deal with,sure,BUT!We got something he‘ll never have!Our powerful souls intuition and the determination to keep on living no matter how much it hurts!We promised Lawrence that we‘d keep us safe and we WILL uphold that promise!
Yeah I'm feeling the same right now, but I really enjoy these cyoa so it's just how it's gonna have to be :") good luck to you! This little interaction actually made me feel better about it so thank you haha
You are so welcome. I'm so glad. I hope you can breeze through I did. And it was actually so worth it. Seeing the different reactions by the ROs in chapter 7. Hope you have like the best day tho 😇💜
You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done.
you have to get all the clues. You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done.
I don't see anything talking about investigating the mans apartment before your run unless you have to stay home to get it? And if its not too much trouble do you know the chapter it happens? I've been frantically going thru chapters lol
Think it's in chapter 6, it's the second time you get free time. You relax at home then get to talk to Scott in his apartment. Then in chapter 7, your character will want to go for a run and an option will pop up to go to the apartment after or before your run, you want to click on before. Then the it's all connected option, then you butter up the rich dude as much as you can.
you have to get all the clues. You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done.
I absolutely am inlove. I love how every character reacts so differently to the MC. And its just wonderful and you have more projects!!! Sooo I'm gonna go check those out...
i think seeing as its mafiafell there should be an option for the player to smoke and it could impact their relationship with certain characters, or not idc i just think itd be fitting for the player to smoke as maybe their way to help with the stress of their missing brother besides their chosen hobby. besides me thinking thatd be a fitting thing to add, the game is really cool and i have infact played it over and over again for the past two weeks because ive hyperfixated on it<33
In asriel's route after you get sweets when you talk about your hobbies if you chose sketching and are sketching you and your brother aerial says "I'm working on a sketch of you and your brother too!" I assume that wasn't intended.
If your not romancing him he says he's making a sketch of him and his sibling too but if you are he says he's making a sketch of "you and your brother"
hi!! omg i can see the beautiful and graceful work you put on this!
i mean, 3 routes for 3 genders, with four different romance/platonic routes?! not only that, twine is super hard to deal with...
thats so impressive and the customization.. is actual customization! i love all of the different options!! it rlly feels like me!!
the writing and the story is AMAZE-BALLS!!! and while i havent finished it yet (im on chapter 2 and on the asriel route!)
but man oh man this is gonna be a great half hour!!
ANYWHO... im wondering.. if you're able to add new... character routes.. like.. mettaton... it would be amazing!! and maybe other people would think so too! it would be cool to see him in this AU too!!!
ok, keep up the great work!!! i luv this so far!! im not even done!!!
hey! i finished asriel's route (so far) and OH GEE, OH GOSH!!! this is absolutely fan-freaking-tastic!! the story; shocking. the gore; "gore"tesque. the characters; in LOVE!!! im going to finish the other routes next time! I also love how mettaton is a radio star in here!! i think its cool lol
AHH im so glad i found this game ee, Im a huge fan of the original fanfic and I was SO glad someone is writing an end for it that i played all of the current game in one sitting!
I saw this update through my email and I never got to come around to play it cause of school, but now that one class has become my study block, I can play this! yayyyy
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I got killed by dr rose, is there a way to avoid that?
Get all the clues and make sure you go with Ralsei and Chara
Romancing Wingding is a trip ya'll. As usual. 1000/10 update. I wait with baited breath for the next one.
I got all the clues but I still got the void ending?? Help 😭
i just meta-gamed my way to the ending but idc i needed the lore *-*
Darkpetal, are you overworking? You did so many updates! Please take a rest from time to time
Commenting a bit later than usual! Been a bit busy with college related stuff D: As always, thank you so much for the new chapter.
Typos I found for chapter seven:
- "You adjust your cap and walk across the street.", friend instead of frend in "Frend of the family."
- "You are not detective." There should be an "a" between are and not.
- "The air in the Black Swan feels darker than normal.", "It's scary," Last sentence on that line has an extra quotation mark.
- Page starts with "It's evening, and by the time Detective Peterson leads you to a dinner, it's dark outside." I think it should be diner instead of dinner, but again, english is not my first language so I'm not sure. D:
- On the same page, there should be a comma in "What did you see Robert?" I think??
- Page starts with what the MC chose to be their giveaway that danger is near. (In my case, it's "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.") Paragraph starts with "Glassy eyes of dead patrons stare at you.", diner has extra n.
- "Quiet." Paragraph starts with "You move into his booth", not instead of nto.
I also ran into a little issue?? Every time there was a noun related to my gender, like miss, for example, a little dollar sign would pop up at its left. Not sure if it's just me.
Keep up the good work! It's always such a pleasure to find a new chapter posted, and your incredible writing always makes me really get into the story. Again, thank you so much. :)
I'm having a hard time on getting the option to investigate the old man's apartment. I did open up to chara and asriel about Lawrence and went with them. I only got this much clues. Can someone help me?
you probably missed the same thing I did in chapter 5 as soon as you get the option to stay home on do so you will then get to go check on Mr Scott if you have done this option already. Then you probably missed something else.
my brother missing, there was a shootout outside my apartment, doctor rose is back, i almost died to drunk mafioso's somebody sent me a head in a box, i wanna have a food fight with two skeletons 10/10
to anyone who's struggling to get past doctor rose and listened to the comments, i found out that i needed to leave with chara and asriel when i opened up to them about lawrence (chapter 6). after that, you'll be able to investigate the old man who lost his son's apartment, you need to also choose the choice that says ”maybe they're all connected” to be able to talk to edward blind.
‘petal16 your work is the most beautiful I’ve ever read in my life,I am glad that I was the very first to have commented on this game back then :)
(For those that don’t believe me,scroll all the way down to the very first comment.
Or don‘t, I cannot force you)
i keep dying:( i believe got everything except for the option to talk to edwards. in what chapter do you talk with him?
chapter 6 ig?
Go shopping for the pillow and then choose stay home. This worked for me
Guys I hope this helps. Everything that was written here is true, but there is one more thing. In the selection with a flower girl, hobby and food, you need to choose a flower girl and go to eat. If at the end of chapter 6 you had a nightmare about your brother, then you did everything right and you will have the opportunity to inspect the apartment before jogging at the beginning of chapter 7.
So if anyone is STILL having any problems with Doc.Rose these are the things I did in order to avoid him.
1. It’s already been put in the comments section so I’m not going to type it again but like so many people have said, you NEED to find all the clues and the comment below mine is exactly what you do.
2. Now I don’t know if this is the choice you HAVE to make but what I did for chapter 6, when Papyrus asks us to stay at the restaurant was when the first choice of either leaving or staying appears, click on stay. Then when you get the choice of leaving or staying a second time, click leave. Ralsei and Chara will come with you.
3.Once I did this I managed to get the choice of visiting the apartment of Mr.Scott again. The choice visit him after or before your morning run appears, click BEFORE.
Again I don’t know if you have to do these choices but these are the ones that work for me. Goodluck!
1. Investigate the shooting by checking the window
You'll need to help the sobbing man in order to continue to the next scene or else Gaster takes his place on the doorstep and kills you...)
2. Visit the swan park.
3. Go on the run at night.
4. Talk to the Florist Daisy.
5. Relax at home and decide whether to visit Mister Scott.
6. Ask Mister Scott questions when you visit his home. ( Pry and don't change the topic.)
7. Investigate the apartment before your morning run, meet Edward Blind, and gather information about the deathless beast by charming him with lies.
thank you KAL
thank you very much, it really helped me
dont mind me just writing this down on my arm
I frickin love this writing AAAAAAAA
so good
IM FERAL
FOAMING AT THE MOUTH
I GOT ALL THE CLUES
i havent even met the doctor so all the comments are making me laugh
im so hyped
MC is meant to be a detective just like their brother, i love this so much. Thank you for continuing!!
Although I‘m glad that you managed to avoid him,will you please quit rubbing it in everyone’s face?
It‘s just toxic,ya know?
I literally only made one comment? And I was just excited, I wasn't being toxic. I met the doctor on my other routes when i played them after i commented.
I laughed with people, not at them. And I didn't rub it in anyone's face by saying I got a different ending?
The fact that people got mad over my comment is mind-boggling.
I‘m not mad,I just misunderstood the comment. I’m sorry if my response offended you :(
it's fine. I understand reading tone through text can be difficult, I've been there. I just genuinely wasn't trying to rub anything in anyone's face. I was just excited.
How do I get the option to investigate the man's apartment so I don't die from doc rose
Spoilers!!!
Dude i died twice. So after the shooting you go to the window and investigate. Then the next day you will see the old man in the street you speak to him, then on the day you have off you choose to relax and go visit the old man and ask him all the questions about his son, then you need to go visit him again before your run and butter the hell out of edward until he talks to you about the beast then and only then u dont die. I just saw tht myself. U also needed to visit swan lake with rasiel, visit daisy the first time. And running in the park seeing those sketchy guys. I think thats all the clues. You will know once you get edward to talk about taking ronnie to the beast. Until you see tht in nr scotts apartment you will still die by the good doc. Hope tht helps everyone!
Oh dear, Doc. Rose shows up??? That's going to be a pain to deal with... 😔
Hey don‘t worry!It‘ll be okay!
We were able to come out alive,no matter the situation,like when we ran away with Lawrence from dad or when we were chased by those drunk mafiosos!Doctor Rose will be tricky to deal with,sure,BUT!We got something he‘ll never have!Our powerful souls intuition and the determination to keep on living no matter how much it hurts!We promised Lawrence that we‘d keep us safe and we WILL uphold that promise!
Everything will be just alright!
I promise
I still died. can you make a video please?
AHJDBJXBSJCB
I cant with the doctor man
I tried Changing my flower and ignored the old man but i can't
tbh Doctor Rose is kinda yandere,like— those bouquets and poems were cute and all but how he called us his love and wouldn’t let go was creepy
So true, i wonder who's doctor rose hmmmmm
i dunno,we‘ll just have to figure it out!
Is it Normal for all of my saves to just be gone or am i special?
You're not alone, I saved my characters to my computer for safe keeping and now it doesn't recognize my files :< looks like it's time to start over
aww dude that sucks so much. I don't usually mind restarting if it's just like a demo bt christ 7 chapters.. guess we have little choice. Good luck ♥️
Yeah I'm feeling the same right now, but I really enjoy these cyoa so it's just how it's gonna have to be :") good luck to you! This little interaction actually made me feel better about it so thank you haha
You are so welcome. I'm so glad. I hope you can breeze through I did. And it was actually so worth it. Seeing the different reactions by the ROs in chapter 7. Hope you have like the best day tho 😇💜
How do u get past the doctor??
I don't know how to get past doc. Rose
I've done everything I can and done everything people told me to do in the comments, but I can't get past doctor rose. Please help me!
bro i can not figure out how to get past doctor rose omg
how do you find all the clues please I need help
You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done.
How do you not die to the plague doctor?
Edit: nevermind, I figured it out :)
you have to get all the clues. You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done.
I still getting killed. I don't know what I did wrong.
I don't see anything talking about investigating the mans apartment before your run unless you have to stay home to get it? And if its not too much trouble do you know the chapter it happens? I've been frantically going thru chapters lol
Think it's in chapter 6, it's the second time you get free time. You relax at home then get to talk to Scott in his apartment. Then in chapter 7, your character will want to go for a run and an option will pop up to go to the apartment after or before your run, you want to click on before. Then the it's all connected option, then you butter up the rich dude as much as you can.
I finally got it thank you sm!!
Same, I keep dying with every choice
you have to get all the clues. You have to get the one from your window, the shootings. Another one from swan park. Another one by running at night. Another one by talking to the flower lady the first time. Another by spending time relaxing and talking to the guy whom lost his sun, bully the answers from him. I think that's all the clues. Then you investigate the mans appartment before your run, and click it's all connected. Butter up the man that comes in and boom, done.
Thank you so much you helped our sanity regain
I absolutely am inlove. I love how every character reacts so differently to the MC. And its just wonderful and you have more projects!!! Sooo I'm gonna go check those out...
You def should, they're all fantastic
I'M SO HYPED TO CONTINUE!!!
i think seeing as its mafiafell there should be an option for the player to smoke and it could impact their relationship with certain characters, or not idc i just think itd be fitting for the player to smoke as maybe their way to help with the stress of their missing brother besides their chosen hobby. besides me thinking thatd be a fitting thing to add, the game is really cool and i have infact played it over and over again for the past two weeks because ive hyperfixated on it<33
In asriel's route after you get sweets when you talk about your hobbies if you chose sketching and are sketching you and your brother aerial says "I'm working on a sketch of you and your brother too!" I assume that wasn't intended.
iirc i think he just says hes drawing himself and his own sibling (chara) but i havent played through this game in a while so not sure
If your not romancing him he says he's making a sketch of him and his sibling too but if you are he says he's making a sketch of "you and your brother"
hi!! omg i can see the beautiful and graceful work you put on this!
i mean, 3 routes for 3 genders, with four different romance/platonic routes?! not only that, twine is super hard to deal with...
thats so impressive and the customization.. is actual customization! i love all of the different options!! it rlly feels like me!!
the writing and the story is AMAZE-BALLS!!! and while i havent finished it yet (im on chapter 2 and on the asriel route!)
but man oh man this is gonna be a great half hour!!
ANYWHO... im wondering.. if you're able to add new... character routes.. like.. mettaton... it would be amazing!! and maybe other people would think so too! it would be cool to see him in this AU too!!!
ok, keep up the great work!!! i luv this so far!! im not even done!!!
hey! i finished asriel's route (so far) and OH GEE, OH GOSH!!! this is absolutely fan-freaking-tastic!! the story; shocking. the gore; "gore"tesque. the characters; in LOVE!!! im going to finish the other routes next time! I also love how mettaton is a radio star in here!! i think its cool lol
I love chapter 6. I am eager to see more.
I’m so excited for the next update XD
AHH im so glad i found this game ee, Im a huge fan of the original fanfic and I was SO glad someone is writing an end for it that i played all of the current game in one sitting!
I saw this update through my email and I never got to come around to play it cause of school, but now that one class has become my study block, I can play this! yayyyy
I loved it so much!! looking forward to other chapters!